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Posted: 11 years ago
wel done r.k keep it up...lovely update...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry dear ...was late to comment...
its going superb
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

hey tis is superb...

feeling really bad for both asad n zoya...both of them are in love with each other...
hoe they will clear all the misunderstanding n get back together...
please dont let zoya leave...
thx fr the pm n do pm me for the next part...
please continue soon n eagerly waiting for the next part...


thankyou for ur comment
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Kurup

sad update yaaar...y these two love birds have to suffer...plzzz let this b the sad update of this fiction...u said there are only two or 3 updates more let those b the happpy ones plzzz


sorry for the sad part and it was the 2nd last part
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: immigreat54

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ab shadi na karadena Ramiz se!!😭
nice update though


fikar not shaadi nhe kara rhe
thankyou
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Posted: 11 years ago
Last Part:-

dilshaad(questioning):-zoya?

her one word was a list of questions for zoya she can't tell alie to her, dilshaad was like her mother, she told her everything the reason of why she is going back
zoya:-phoopi mai yahan or nahe rukh sakte, mjhse ye sab bardasht nahe hota, hum sab kitna bhe chupa lain sach nahe badlaga, ye hum sab janta hai k mera or ramiz ka nikah hona wala hai lakin mohabbat to maine hamesha Mr.Khan hi sa ki hai. tears formed in her eyes but still she continued without crying

zoya:-phoppi mjhse ye nahe dekha ja raha hai k jis shakhs ka intezar mai yeh soch kar kar rhe the k kise din unhe jab tanveer ka sach pata laga ga to wo mere pass wapis ajaenga wo sakhs to apne biwi or bacha k sath k sath hasi khushi zindagi guzar raha hai, mjhse ye or bardasht nhe ho raha

najma:-agar ap bhaijan ka itezar kar rahe the to phir apka or ramiz ka nikah? kyun?

zoya:-to mai kya karun? maine api or jiju se thora waqt manga tha magar unho nai mjhe pora 3 saal diya or ab iska bad or koi raasta nahe bachta mere pass unke baat manna k ilawa or ramiz to mera bht purana dost, wo is bara mai kuch nahe janta lakin in 3 saalon jab mjhe kise dost k sath ki zarorat the to wo hamesha woha mere liye khara tha

dilshaad wiping her tears:-zoya tumne theek faisla kiya hai tumhe aj hi wapis chala jana chahie.

najma(impatiently):-nahe ami, zoya ko pura haq hai sach janna ka.

dilshaad glared at najma but the doubt was in zoya's mind now

zoya:-sach?

najma:-ami plz agar sach batana sa sab theek hota hai to zoya mai apko sachai bataonge.

zoya:-najma mjhe kuch samajh nahe a raha hai k tum kehna kiya cha rhe ho?

najma:-tanveer ab is dunya mai nahe zoya or nahe rohail bhaijan or tanveer ka beta nhe hai

zoya was shocked she placed her hand on her mouth trying not to believe the truth.

zoya(sobbing):-tanveer...mar...nahe, ye tum kiya keh rahe ho najma, kab? kaise? kahan?

najma:-tanveer ki maut ko bht jald 3 saal hona wala hain, or marna se pehle usne huma ye bataya tha k rohail bhaijan ka beta nahe hai, or nahe un dono ka darmiyan koi or relation hai.

zoya:-agar ye sach hai to mjhe kise na bataya Q nahe?

dilshaad finally spoke up:-kyun k asad nahe chahta tha.

zoya:-Mr.Khan? par kyun? agar mjhe ye sab malom hota to mai wapis ajate

dilshaad:-asad nahe chahta tha k tum wapis ao, usse lagta tha k usko tumhe jitne dukh dana tha wo de chuka par ab or nahe or usse lagta tha k wo tmhe deserve nhe karta tha

zoya:-Mr.Khan aesa soch bhe kaise sakte hain phoppi k mjhe uske pass wapis ana se takleef hoge, kash k mjhe ye sab pehle pata chal jata.

najma:- kiya matlab hai apka, kiya ab bhe ap nahe rukenge?

zoya:-nahe najma, now i'm engaged. ramiz mjhse bht mohabbat karta hai mai usse dhoka nahe de sakte

zoya hugged dilshaad and najma and turned towards the main door, she was shocked ramiz was standing infront of her, she just took slow steps and walked towards him

zoya(slowly to ramiz):-kiya tumne kuch suna?
dilshaad and najma also get to knw about ramiz presence

ramiz:-sab sun liya maine zoya or mjhe yakeen nhe ho raha hai k tum, tum asad se mohabbat karte ho or tumne mjhe nahe bataya, hum to bht purana dost the na zoya ek dost samajh karhi apne dil ki baat bata date.

zoya:-Mr.khan or tanveer k nikah ne mjhe tor diya tha ramiz, mai sirf Mr.Khan ko yaad krke ro sakte the lakin mai kabhi kise se apne past k bara mai bat nhe karna chahte the api or jiju se bhe nahe to phir mai tmhe kaisa batate

ramiz:-ab tum kiya karoge, ab mai kiya karonga "he was little loud" batao? ye sach janna k baad k tum kabhi mjhse mohabbat nahe kr the or na kabhi karoge mai tumse nikah kaisa karunga.

zoy(shocking):-tum nikah se mana nahe kar sakte, api or jiju bht hurt hunge plz, mana mat karna

ramiz placing his hand on her chicks:-tum asad se mohabbat karte ho zoya or ab tum dono ko koi alag nahe karsakta, tummhe tumhare mohabbat mil gaye ye sun kar tumhare api or jiju jurt nahe honge zoya QK wo tumse bht piyaar karte hai, or mjhe to or bht mil jayenge, mai humare ye engagement todta hun.

he took out ring from his finger and give it back to zoya and turned towards the main door saying bye to everyone zoya start crying more so before stepping out the door he turned and look at her

ramiz:-is rishta k totna ka ilzam kabhi khd ko mat dena zoya, sab kismat ka khel hai zoya isse ne is rishta ko toda or yahe bht jald tumhe or asad ko milayege.
he gave her a smile and left, zoya sat on her knees and was crying, rohail wake up and came out and saw zoya crying so ask

rohail to najma:-tiya hua phoppo

najma:-dekho zoya ro rahe hai

he moved to zoya and wiped her tears
rohail:-mat ro zoya

tears again made there way but this time with little smile, she hugged him so tight and then kissed him on his forhead, najma and dilshaad became happy and rohail were giving them cute and confused expression.

at evening:-
asad was back but he found whole house ruling under silence najma and dilshaad were sitting on xouch making different expressions, asad came and broke the silence.

asad:-Assalam-o-alikum ami

dilshaad:-walai-kum-assalam beta

asad:-ami rohail kahan hai.

dilshaad:-room mai

asad:-theek hai,mai use dekhta hun

he left, najma and dillu smiled and high fived. asad enter in room he saw rohail he wasn't sleeping but was led down on bed, asad moved toward him and was going to sit when someone placed her hand on his eyes,

asad(confused):-kon?

rohail(giggled):-papa pata hai ton hai?

asad:-kon?

rohail:-mere ami

asad:-ami?

he now removed his hand and turned, zoya was standing infront of him and was smiling

asad:-Ms.farouqui ap gaye nahe?

zoya:-mai to subah hi chale gaye the Mr.Khan, yahan to mera bhoot khara abhe mai apko kha bhe jaonge. hehahaha

asad:-ye kiya pagal pan hai Ms.farouqui.

zoya:-to ap sawal aese karainga to mai bhe aese pagalon wala jawab hi dunge.

asad:-par ap yahan kaisa?

zoya:-wo aesa k mai wapis he nahe gaye or mjhe sab pata bhe chal gaya hai

asad:-kiya pata chal gaya hai?

zoya:-ziada bhola mat bana phoppi or najma na mjhe sab bata diya or ramiz ko bhe sab pata chal gaya or wo ye sagai tod kar chala gaya

asad:-apki sagai tod gaye or ap khush ho rhe hai?

zoya:-han kyun k ek dulha k jata he mjhe dosra dulha mil gaya

asad:-ye kiya bakwas hai

zoya:-dekhe Mr.khan mai janti hun k ap mjhse mohabbat karta hai to ap agar apna apna ye akdu atitude sight par kark mjhse bat nahe ki na to mai wapis newyork chale jaonge.

asad(serious mode):-mai kiya kahun zoya

zoya:-yahe k ap mjhse nikah karna chahta hai

asad(naughtiness):-or agar maine nahe kaha to?

zoya(serious):-to mai jao she turned to go

asad:-acha acha sorry he hold her hand and she turned mai apse nikah karna chahta hun

zoya smiled and hugged him he hugged her back, dilshaad and najma also reach there, everyone were happy

1 year later:

at hospital

everyone were tense asad was moving here and there when doctor came out, he stoped and moved to him

asad:-kiya hua doctor?

doctor:-congratulation it's a girl.

they all became happy and hugged eachother

asad:-kiya mai usse mil sakta hun?

doctor:-ji. he said and left, asad went inside, dilshaad thank to god, the three were also going inside when they heared some noises fromm inside "nhe zoya alishba, nahe asad maheen" dilshaad rubbed her temple

dilshaad:-ye ALLAH ye yahan bhe shuru ho gaye

najma:-ami andar chala warna ye lad lad kar pura hospital sar par utha lenge

they went in

D:-bx bht hua koi jhagra nahe karaiga, baby ka name mai rakhunge "ji nahe" a voice came from back, everyone turned back it was anwar and zeenat, a wide smile appeared on zoya's face

zeenat moving forward:-baby ka name to mai rakhunge dilshaad bi.

zoya:-api ap to kal ana k the

anwar:-surprise, direct airport se ae hain

zeenat:-ye chodo, baby ka name mai rakhunge mai uske khala hun, name hoga asma

anwar:-ji nahe name hoga javaria

najma:-nahe bushra

dilshaad:-nahe afifa

zoya:-nahe maheen

asad:-nahe alishba.

all started fighting and screaming there names, rohail was fed up, he stood up on zoya bed and shouted

rohail:-silence everyone stopped mere behen ta name ma rukhunga name hai alia

asad:-ye name kaha se aye

rohail:-mere class ki teacher ka name hai, para hai na

everyone together:-han han para hai

asad:-to aj se iska name alia

they all smiled.

asad,zoya,rohail and alia a complete family and a happy ending

so i ended my SS like this
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Edited by asyaarshilover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
What a beautiful ending. I can't belive it's over. Rohail is so sweet and it's good he has an ami now cause he deserves a happy family. Awesome chapter! 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks for the beautiful ending
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update...
awww...sweet & happy ending!!!!!!!

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