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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: immigreat54

wish u best of luck for ur result.

but u must update so that we pray more 😉


thnx for ur wishes but i got my result 2 days before😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
please continue i liked it!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 6:-

next morning at breakfast

asad,dilshaad,rohail and najma were doing breakfast then zoya came out from her room. She joined them. zoya look rohail and dilshaad and najma to zoya

dilshaad:-zoya ye rohail hai.

zoya:-janti hun phoppi Mr.Khan or tanveer ka beta. she felt sad

dilshaad and najma were shocked

najma:-ap rohail se kahan mile?

zoya:-aj subah hi mile the jab ayaan esa drop karna aya tha. waisa phoppi mai apse ek bath pochun?

dilshaad:-han pocho

zoya:-phoppi tanveer kahan hai?
everyone get tense

dilshaad:-wo tanveer, darasal asad intrupted

asad:-tannu bhopal mai nahe apne dost ki shaadi k liye gaye hain.

zoya:-ohkay

rohail hold najma's hand and wishpered:-phoppo ye tanve tn hai?

najma:-koi nahe, ap ise chodo or jaldi se breakfast finish karo

he nodded such then zoya gets a call, it was ramiz, she picked it up.

ramiz:-assalam-o-salam zoya begum.

zoya(smiling):-walaiku-m-assalam ramiz sahab, apko yaad hoga maine subah call krke jo kaha tha?

ramiz:-han han bilkul, acha ab jaldi se darwaza kholo

zoya:-kyun?

ramiz:-buddhu, mai darwaza par hun

zoya:-really? acha wait mai ate hun.

she cutted the call, and moved towards the main door.after opening the door she hugged ramiz so tightly and called him in. ramiz was shocked because it was the first time she hugged her. dilshaad and najma greeted him while asad was busy in eating his breakfast trying to ignore others.

ramiz:-zoe mai tumhara laugage bhe le aya hun.

zoya:-thankyou. mai esa room mai rakh kar ate hun, uske bad hum chala gai.

ramiz nodded happily, zoya moved to her room.

dilshaad to ramiz:-beta tum dono kahin ja raha ho?

ramiz:-ji hum dono movie dekhne k liye ja rahe hain.

najma:-wow picture knse?

ramiz:-the great salmaan khan. he winked najma laughed

zoya came back carrying her handbag

zoya:-ramiz, chala.

ramiz:-ya sure,after you.

zoya blushes or we can say tried to, she said bye to dilshaad and najma and after that the duo left.

asad(to herself):-bht ache baat hai, zoya apne zindagi mai aga barh chuke hain, ALLAH unhe hamesha khush rakhai.

asad also left for the office.

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the same happened for next one month, they were successfull in doing that of what they thought but still whenever they came infront of eachother they lost in eachother, zoya like rohail but asad and rohail all time closeness make her sad and broken. zoya bond with rohail is not much good, she always tried to ignore him. zoya spend most of the time outsidethe house with ramiz due to her feelings towards asad

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1 month later

"kitne koshish kar chuke hun mai, lakin Mr.Khan k samna reh kar mai unhe nahe bhula sakte, mjhe newyork wapis jana hi hoga, ek mahina baad mera ramiz se nikha hai, mai ab yahan or nahe reh sakte" zoya thought while standing towards the window, after that she took her mobile and called ramiz. ramiz recieved it after some bells

ramiz:-kiya hua zoya itne raat ko mere yaad kaise aye?

zoya:-aa woo mjhe tumse kuch important kam hai.

ramiz(serious):-han kaho?

zoya:-ramiz mai kal hi newyork wapis jana chahte hun.

ramiz(shocked):-kiya?par kyun zoe?

zoya:-wo mai, han ramiz mai nikah ki shopping tak nahe ki hai.

ramiz:-zoe wo to yahan bhe ho sakte hain.

zoya(screamed):-ramiz please mjhe wapis jana hai?

ramiz:-ohkay zoya gussa mat ho, mai kal hi tickets book karta hun or tumhe batata hun.

zoya:-thankyou, acha kal ki tickets book hojaen to subah hi mjhe pick karlena bcz phir nani ko bhe bye kehne jana hoga.

next morning

zoya came out with her lauggage, dilshaad,asad and najma were having breakfast became shocked looking her like this.

dilshaad move forward:-zoya ye kiya hai, tum ed kahin ja rhe ho?

zoya:-ji phoppi, wo mai newyork wapis ja rhe hun

this was not less than a shock for the three. they were shocked, asad did'nt say anything and moved towards the main door but before leaving he turned and looked at her the last time as he is not going to meet her again ever in his life (sad mitwa), tears droped from his eyes but he wiped it and left.

~finish~~
so guyz part 6 posted let me tell you it is second last or third last part.
please share your views, i always love to read them...never mind if it's negative...sorry in advance for any mistake

Edited by asyaarshilover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice and sad part.please continue soon.thanks for pm
akap thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
So sad of asad and zoya..zoya should know the truth.update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey tis is superb...
feeling really bad for both asad n zoya...both of them are in love with each other...
hoe they will clear all the misunderstanding n get back together...
please dont let zoya leave...
thx fr the pm n do pm me for the next part...
please continue soon n eagerly waiting for the next part...
Edited by jazsidhu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
sad update yaaar...y these two love birds have to suffer...plzzz let this b the sad update of this fiction...u said there are only two or 3 updates more let those b the happpy ones plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
do update 😊
sad but nice post ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
NICE UPDATE...BUT SAD FOR ASYA!!!!!!

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