'When The World Crashes'- An Asya TS!!! - Page 4

Originally posted by: mysticlover

I don't know how you write so beautifully!!! 👏 for writing something emotional you've to go through it, not always in real but in imagination... to feel the emotions that's written you've to make that pain yours... n your writing names me feel it's my pain...

Originally posted by: rajnid68

zoyas pov..really brilliantly potrayed..

wants to be one with nature..

aptly thinking of asad ..

both are one soul..

thanxs

Originally posted by: tvpremi

You are a beautiful writer...the emotions have been displayed so beautifully...it's just so very like drowning in the whirlpool of emotions...you have very amazingly portrayed the pain of heartbreak when you are deceived. ...when u feel lost n broken...kudos to u for writing so fabulously. ...thanks for pm. ...

Originally posted by: zoas91

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unres!

this was beautiful!

firstly i love love love that song! clarity by zedd! and here it suits perfectly.

because yes asad is the perfect remedy to all her pain, her wounds. ANd he is The clarity that she needs after she is lost in the fogginess of tan-witch's toxic smoke! you have done justice to the feelings that she is going through at the moment! great update.

cheers!

urja