'When The World Crashes'- An Asya TS!!!

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Archana

@mysticlover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

I don't know how you write so beautifully!!! 👏 for writing something emotional you've to go through it, not always in real but in imagination... to feel the emotions that's written you've to make that pain yours... n your writing names me feel it's my pain...

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Dee

@Enchantress

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Wow.. Just so wonderfully written. Amazing.. I have no words to describe what I feel like. Would just say it was perfect.

Dee

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Black.Jack

@Black.Jack

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: mysticlover
I don't know how you write so beautifully!!! 👏 for writing something emotional you've to go through it, not always in real but in imagination... to feel the emotions that's written you've to make that pain yours... n your writing names me feel it's my pain...

oh so right about the feelings part! you somehow hve to feel it to write it! thankyou for liking!😊

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Black.Jack

@Black.Jack

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: rajnid68
zoyas pov..really brilliantly potrayed..
wants to be one with nature..
aptly thinking of asad ..
both are one soul..
thanxs

thanks for liking!

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Black.Jack

@Black.Jack

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: tvpremi
You are a beautiful writer...the emotions have been displayed so beautifully...it's just so very like drowning in the whirlpool of emotions...you have very amazingly portrayed the pain of heartbreak when you are deceived. ...when u feel lost n broken...kudos to u for writing so fabulously. ...thanks for pm. ...

thank you... you always shower loads of appreciation!

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Black.Jack

@Black.Jack

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: zoas91
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unres!

this was beautiful!
firstly i love love love that song! clarity by zedd! and here it suits perfectly.
because yes asad is the perfect remedy to all her pain, her wounds. ANd he is The clarity that she needs after she is lost in the fogginess of tan-witch's toxic smoke! you have done justice to the feelings that she is going through at the moment! great update.
cheers!

urja

love the song too! it has got perfect lyrics!

thanks thanks for liking!