'When The World Crashes'- An Asya TS!!! - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
this is superb yaar
love the way you have described everything
do continue soon and don't forget to pm me 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
hey!! that was soo beautiful..😊
thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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waoo..so deep yr...wht an emotion...u brilliantly written ..feel d pain.actually...loved it..thnks 4 d pm...

pari
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Posted: 12 years ago
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You're talented... there is no doubt in that... never has been!!
Asad's pain, turmoil, desolation n self loathing is so beautifully described that it should be wondered whether someone can write about pain so deeply!!! But it's that one emotion that can be written in many ways!!!
An amazing update!!! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Your way with words is exceptionally beautiful. Every realization, every emotion, every plea. The hurt, the angst, the helplessness and utter regret and defeat so finely explored and portrayed. And the song was perfection. I listened to it while reading it. So aptly chosen.

Beautiful. Tell me you have more works
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its amazing...I got emotional while reading it...3 cheers 4 u!!!!
waitin 4 zoyas pov
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: zoas91

every emotion, every heart felt agony is beautifully described!

asad fighting with his inner demons and the misery of him , being helpless and clueless is brilliantly displayed here!

two hoots for you👍🏼

thanks girl...you felt so much😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Mariam.2187

U've described ASAD's inner turmoil very beautifully...

Asad feeling miserable without Zoya...
Very beautifully written..
Loved this part alot...
U r an AWESOME writer...
Continue soon...
Thnx for PM...
Mariam..

Aww thanks mariam...
i loved ur comment!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: srashti_kul

its amazing...I got emotional while reading it...3 cheers 4 u!!!!
waitin 4 zoyas pov

thanks a lottt!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: mochhug

Your way with words is exceptionally beautiful. Every realization, every emotion, every plea. The hurt, the angst, the helplessness and utter regret and defeat so finely explored and portrayed. And the song was perfection. I listened to it while reading it. So aptly chosen.

Beautiful. Tell me you have more works

Woah! you threw a huge compliment girl!
thanks a lot for that!
and you have been reading some of my stuff before if u remember!
will pm the rest if u wish!

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