'When The World Crashes'- An Asya TS!!! - Page 2

this is superb yaar

hey!! that was soo beautiful..😊

waoo..so deep yr...wht an emotion...u brilliantly written ..feel d pain.actually...loved it..thnks 4 d pm...

You're talented... there is no doubt in that... never has been!!
Asad's pain, turmoil, desolation n self loathing is so beautifully described that it should be wondered whether someone can write about pain so deeply!!! But it's that one emotion that can be written in many ways!!!
An amazing update!!! 👏

Your way with words is exceptionally beautiful. Every realization, every emotion, every plea. The hurt, the angst, the helplessness and utter regret and defeat so finely explored and portrayed. And the song was perfection. I listened to it while reading it. So aptly chosen.

Beautiful. Tell me you have more works

its amazing...I got emotional while reading it...3 cheers 4 u!!!!
waitin 4 zoyas pov

Originally posted by: zoas91

every emotion, every heart felt agony is beautifully described!

asad fighting with his inner demons and the misery of him , being helpless and clueless is brilliantly displayed here!

two hoots for you👍🏼

Originally posted by: Mariam.2187

U've described ASAD's inner turmoil very beautifully...

Asad feeling miserable without Zoya...

Very beautifully written..

Loved this part alot...

U r an AWESOME writer...

Continue soon...

Thnx for PM...

Mariam..

Originally posted by: srashti_kul

its amazing...I got emotional while reading it...3 cheers 4 u!!!!
waitin 4 zoyas pov

Originally posted by: mochhug

Your way with words is exceptionally beautiful. Every realization, every emotion, every plea. The hurt, the angst, the helplessness and utter regret and defeat so finely explored and portrayed. And the song was perfection. I listened to it while reading it. So aptly chosen.

Beautiful. Tell me you have more works