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Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

When will you be updating this FF ? in 10 mins 😃

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salam, well i am here with next chapter...i have no idea what you guyz will feel after reading it but honestly i cried while writing it😭

Part 13;-

ali was not feeling well so he excused himself and walked towards his room, as soon as he reached he start taking high breaths and with all the will power he searched for his pump and finally found it but unluckily it was empty and it was the limit of his strength so he sat on the floor taking hard breaths...

outside in the living everyone were waiting for ali to come out so they can finally leave after meeting him last time, but when he did'nt came zaara went in his room to call him and as soon as she reached there...she froze seeing ali lying on the floor "abu" she shouted making other shocked, she ran towards ali and sat beside him

"abu kya hua? ap theek to hai?" she asked with shaky voice and just then dilshaad, tanveer and najma reached there

dilshaad;-kya hua bhaijaan

ali;-pu...pummmp he finally spoke pointing towards the empty pump which was lying near his drawer

zaara took it and shake it, she realized it's empty so she ran towards her room to bring new one, asad too reached at ali's room and was shocked after seeing the sight infront of him

asad;-ami, mamo ko kya hua hai

dilshaad;-wo...bhaijan ka pump...she was'nt able to continue so she just shouted for zaara
beta jaldi karo

ali understood that he don't have much time so he spoke

ali;-dilshaad...mere zarina ka ghar bu...bus gaya hai..wo...wo bohat khush hai par zaara...mere zaara...mere zaara bilkul akele hai...ab tumhe uska khayal rakhna hai...abse...abse wo tum...tumhare zimadari hai...wo bohat masom hai...

dilshaad;-aese mat kahen bhaijan apko kuch nahe hoga

al;-jo honnaa tha...wo...wo ab ho chuka hai, ab mer...e pass ziada waqt nahe...bus mjhse waada karo k tum mere zaara ka khayal rakho ge, uss...usse kabhi bhe akela nahe chodoge

dilshaad;-waada bhaijan waada...

ali smiled;-La Ilaha IllAllah Muhammadur Rasulullah and with that he passed away...

they looked him as his soul left his body, now he was lying there lifelessly and other were crying

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zaara search in each and every draw of her room, she rubbed her temple in panic trying to remember where ali's pump could be..just then she heard dilshaad call for her...her heart beat increased and her brim with more tears, with blurry vision she open her cupboard and through all her clothes out to search there and finally she found it in a shopping bag, she sighed with relief and without wasting time she ran back in ali's room but it was too late, he was no more...pump fall from her hands, "abu" she screamed and in an instant everything turn black *thud*

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she opened her eyes and find zarina crying sitting on the couch of her room, she stood up with a jerk and walked towards zarina 'kya hua zarina, tum ro kyun rahe ho? reehan nai kuch kaha kya? dekho is tarah mat ro warna abu pareshan hojaen ge' hearing zaara more tears made there way from zarina's eyes 'api...abu..abu' zarina cried 'abu abu kya zarina, mai keh rahe hun na ke chup hojao, abu ne tumhe aese rote hue dekh lia to unhe bohat takleef hoge' zaara said

zarina;-api ap aese behaive kyun kar rahe hai?

zaara;-mai theek to keh rahe hun

zarina;-nahe ap galat hain, abu...*sob* abu huma chod kar chale gaye api, wo wapi...

zaara's blood boiled hearing it and before zarina complete her sentence she slaped her hard across her face

zaara;-tum aesa kaisa bol sakte ho...she shook her by her shoulder kuch nahe hua hai abu ko

hearing the noises dilshaad came inside

dilshaad;-zaara yahe sach, bhaijan ap wapis nahe ayenge, wo huma chod kar chala gaye hain

zaara;-phoppi ap bhe? tears formed in her eyes mai abhe abu ko ja kar batate hun ke ap log mere sath kitna ganda mazak kar rahe hai

and with that she walked out towards ali's room ignoring all the peoples in the living room, when she entered in there was no one, still she did'nt believe it 'shayad bahar honge' she said to herself and as soon as she turn she saw the same pump which fall from her hand some time ago, realization struck her but still she denied...she ran towards dilshaad and placed her hand on her shoulders 'phoppi ye jhoot hai na, kuch nahe hua hai unhe, wo theek hain, please kahain na ka wo theek hai, wo mujhe chod kar nahe ja sakte...abuuu' she screamed again 'kahan hai abu, bolan na'

dilshaad heart broke seeing her like this 'beta abhe unhe gusul(bath) diya gaya hai aur...asad interrupted her

asad;-ami mamo ko gusul de dya ap zaara aur zarina se kahen k akhri bar unhe dekh lain

zaara;-akhri bar...she stared asad in disbelieve and than ran inside the drawing room and zarina after her...according to the world zaara and zarina were ali's real daughter so no one else except them were aloud to see ali one last time because no one was ali's mehram


"to read about the concept of mehram
http://sharingknowledgeofislam.blogspot.com/2011/06/mahram-nan-mahram-in-islam.html '

zaara stared her father pleading him to wake up crying badly and same with zarina..as it's time for tadfeen all the men left for the grave yard.

'tadfeen means Namaz-e-Janaza'
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when asad and rehan came back from the grave yard they found both the sisters sitting in the corner of the room, zarina who was crying badly and dilshaad was consoling her and zaara who was sitting lifelessly, staring at nothing, her face did'nt show any emotion, najma brought water for both the boys and tanveer tea...finally after convincing a lot dilshaad took zarina inside the room for rest but zaara did'nt left her place...after some minutes dilshaad came back to take zaara but no response

dilshaad;-zaara kuch kaho beta, kuch to kaho aese to tumhare halat aur kharab hojaege...tumhe rona hai na? tum ro, chilao par yun khamosh mat raho ,aesa karne se tumhare takleef khatam nahe hoge ...zaara jawab do

just then they heared her light sobs which turned into hard in no time, she start crying, she shouted again and again for her abu "abu, abuuu...kyun gaye ap mujhe chod kar? aesa kaisa kar sakte hain ap' she stood up from her place because of dilshaad's force 'chodiya phoppi mujhe, mujhe jawab chahie, pocha abu se kaisa ja sakte hain wo, unke siwa mera tha he kaun, abuuu wapis ajaen'

she sat on her knees and cried till there was no tear left to escape through her eyes she cried

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Edited by asyaarshilover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res unres Yaay I m first nd I m a new reader of ur story!!!! 😉 I just love ur story!!! Comming to update it was so emotional!!!! really got tears in my eyes. D way u expressed zoya's oops zara's pain was couldn't say anything!!! very emotional one!!! So nw as dilshaad promised to take care of zaara!! so zoya will go wid dem na!!! plz reveal zoya's truth soon plz plz Plz pm me when u update next part!!!!!! Update soon
Edited by AsyaManeet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
A very emotional update. It did make me cry. I loved the way you described Zaara's emotions. This update was solely for her and I just loved it.

Please update soon n please pm me for the next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it
very emotional but awesome update
please please do continue soon😉
Edited by rockstar_16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Emotional update
Secret will come out soon that she is Zoya
Update soon
Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very emotional part gr8
plz pm me for next part
continue soon
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Very emotional, extremely touching and beautifully written
Loved it

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