asya FF-true love never dies link to thread II

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hey frndx i am back with my new story, in it u r going to see many twist and turns in it even i will introduce some more characters even a new zoya wd a new identity and there will be no villian in it bcz tanveer had turned positive.

Part 1:-

"na jana kab ye dukh humare zindagi se khatam honge, mujhse ab bardasht nahe hota, mai apna asad ko es tarah nahe dekh sakte wo har roz ek naye maut marta hai, aesa lagta hai wo ji to raha hai laken jina ki chahat ab us mai nahe, kal us haadsa ko ek saal hona wala laken ab tak us sa bahar nahe nikla or ab kal uske zakham dobara taza hojaenga"
tears drop from dilshaad eyes while saying this to najma,najma agrees

"ji ammi, us raat k baad maine kabhe bhaijan ko muskurata hue nahe dekha, aesa lagta hai k ek saal pehla hue us hadsa na humara zindagi hi badall di"
dilshaad agrees,
han najma, bichare tanveer na bhe apna bacha khoya or aj tak uxe bhol nae pae wo aj bhi wo chup chup kar rote hai"

suddenly najma gets so scared and she thought to herself
''jante hun mai k tanveer k sath axha nahe hue par mujhe bhe to apna bhaijan ko takleef se azad karna tha.

**********FLASHBACK**********

zoya had left asad's house before 2 months even everyone had came to know about tanveer's pregnency...asad start caring for tanveer more than before, dilshaad had start thinking about asad's and tanveer wedding but najma was not happy for thx, one day in evening najma was passing through asad's room when she listen asad and tanveer's conversation. tanveer was almost taunting asad that he is not talking to dilshaad about their marriage even after knowing that she is going to be mother of his baby, najma without making any noise she run in her room she was in deep thoughts "nahe aesa nahe hosakta bhaijan sirf zoya ka hain or agar unki zindagi mai zoya nahe a sakte to phir koi nahe aega, tanveer bhe nahe, ab mujhe he kuch karna hoga"

najma makes a dangerous plan, next morning she knew tht tanveer will go for routine checkup, she spread some drops of oil on the stairs and then she went from there for a while to hide that bottle then tanveer came there and the same thing happen what she thought, tanveer sliped from the stairs, they all take her to the hospitalbut it was too late, baby was no more

FLASHBACK ENDS

najma, najma dilshaad shouted najma
najma came out from her thoughts and replied "jjj...ji ammi"

dishaad:-kahan gum ho beta,kab se tuhe bula rahe hun
najma:-nahe ami wo...wo mai...kuch nahe, chora is baat ko, Q bula rahe the ap mujhe.
dilshaad:-han dekho darwaza par koi hai.

najma opened the door and was happy to see them
najma:-ami ayaan bhaijan or humaira bhabhi aye hain.
dilshaad:-ara ao ayaan or humaira, batao kaisa ana hua.
ayaan:-ji aunty mai ye pochna cha raha hun k kal ki sare tayeri hogae hain.
dilshaad having tears in ayes:-han beta! par ye to tum phone par poch sakta tha.
ayaan:-han mujhe maloom hai par maine socha shayad ise bahana bhaijan se bhe mil lunga mai QK wo to ab dekhta he nahe na he mujhse milna ata. kahan hai wo?
dillshaad:-wo apna room mai hai, jao mil lo, par agar asad ko kal ki date yaad na hoto uxe batana bhe nahe, plz warna wo mayus hojaega

"Q ami, kyun na batae mujhe, apko lagta hai mai kal ka din bhol chuka hun" they all were shocked when they listen ths voice, when they turn around it was asad who says it "mai apna ap ko bhol sakta hun laken kal ka din nahe, kal sa theek ek saal pehle mere zindagi mai ek toofan aya or jis nai mujhse sab kuch cheen liya, mare hase,mare khushi mare after a pause mare zoya, kaisa bhol sakta hun mai kal ka din"
asad left with heavy tears in his eyes while other were standing ideal and were very sad for seeing him like this.
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Part 1 finished
so hit like and do comment if u like it
otherwise jutas and chappals are welcome

regards:-arooba

Index
part 1 = above
part 2 =page 3
part 3 = page 4
part 4 = page 6
part 5 = page 10
part 6 = page 15
part 7 = page 20
part 8 = page 25
part 9 = page 31
note for pm's = page 31
part10= page 38
part11= page 46
part12= page 53
part13= page 61
part 14= page 69
teaser for chap 15 pg 82
part 15= page 88
Edited by asyaarshilover - 11 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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It really amazing start cont soon
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Nice start...plz continue...thanks for pm. ...
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thx for the pm continue soon stupid tanveer
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asad with heavy tears...
please do continue...
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I'd really like to read this...
Please pm me when you update!!!
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Part 2:-

it was late night,tanveer and dilshaad were in dilshaad's room but finally tanveer broke the silence and ask to dilshaad

tanveer:-khala najma kaha hai, khana ki table par dikhe nahe
dilshaad:-wo uska 2 din bad ek test hai uske taeyari kar rahe hai QK kal to usse bilkul waqt nahe milega.
tanveer:-acha khala, ab hum chalta hai, bht raat hogaye hai, or phir kal bohat kam hai.
when she was just turn, dilshaad stoped her
dilshaad:-tanveer ruku
she turned
tanveer:-ji khala?
dilshaad:-beta sona sa pehle zara es jug mai pani bhar ao, jug mai zara bhe pani nahe hai
tanveer:-ji khala, abhe lae
she took the jug and went outside and when she was coming downstairs she saw asad coming out from zoya's room which was not a guest room anymore, tanveerhide behind the pillars when asad moved his eyes here and there, when asad went to his room, tanveer came downstairs, filled the jug with water and then move to dilshaad room again to give her a jug.
dilshaad said thankyou to her but she did'nt listen as her mind was not present, she silently came out and move in her room
tanveer (to herself):-bichara jammy, huma bohat bura lag raha hai unke lliye, pichla ek saal se humara sojana k baad wo zoya k room maijata hai or kitne kitne daar woha bethe rehta hain wo, hum jante hain k jo kuch bhe unke sath hua hai uske ek bohat bare waja hum hain, laken jab humhe unke zindagi mai kuch acha karnna gaye to tab tak zoya bohat door chale gaye the.

********FLASHBACK*********

after 2 days tanveer was dischared from hospital, after having dinnner asad and dillshaad took tanveer to her room, dilshaad gave her medicine and advice her to take rest after that they both left tanveer was just to the bed but then she fall on the floor, she start crying badly

tanveer(to herself):-kehte hainn k insan ko apna bura aamal ki saza ise jahan mai bhokatne parte hai, laken ya ALLAH apko saza dane he the to mujhe data mere bacha ko Q de, uska kiya kasoor tha, hum janta hai hum bht bura hain laken ab huma jammy or zoya ko phir se milana hoga taka akhirat k dinn humara bacha humse sawal na kara, wo humse nafrat na kara, kash k hum paison ka lalach na karata to aj mai or imran, laken humara paison ki hawas na sub bigar diya par ab hum or kuch bigarna nahe dainge hum jammy or zoya phir se ek kardainge
after that asad enters in her room, he was shock to see her like this he take her too the bed and sat beside her
asad:-jante ho tannu, abhe ami humara nikah ki bat kar rahe then,wo keh rahe then k next week, wo humara sadgi se nikah parwadainge
tanveer:-nahe jammy, koi nikah nahe ho raha hai.
asad:-kiya ye tum kiya keh rahe ho tannu, tumne hi to kaha tha k tum jaldi se muhse nikah karna chahte ho.
tanveer:-han kaha tha par tab ye bacha zinda tha laken ab jab us raat ki koi nishane he nahe bache to hum Q karain ek dosra se nikah, ap bus zoya ko dhond kar humare unnnse bat karwa dain,hum sach keh raha hain uske bad wo apke zindagi mai dobara a jaenga
asad was speechless
tanveer:-jammy ap sharminda na hon, hum apse vaada karta hain k apka or zoya k nikah k bad hum jab bhe milange to apko sharmindagi nahe hoge balka humara dosti par fakhar hoga
asad smiled but then he gets a call and he went outside to recieve it tanveer(to herself)han yahe theek hai hum jammy or zoya ko phir se mila denge or zoya ko sub sach bata kar yahan se chaa jaenga.
but then she listen asad voice, he was shoutinng badly on someone, she came outside while dilshaad and najma also came outside, asad was sat on the florr he was crying
asad:-api please keh dai ye jhoot hai, please aesa nahe ho sakta
dilshaad took mobile from asad and put it onthe loudspeaker and ask zeenat the matter
dilshaad:-zeenat kiya hua tumne asad se aesa kiya kaha hai k uske halat itne kharab hogae or tum bhe khud bhe ro rahe ho, akhir hua kiya hai
zeenat:-dilshaad bi wo ...wo ...zo...zoyyya mare zoya
everyone got scared dilshaad:-kiya hua use
zeenat:-kal subah uska phone aya k wo newyork a rha hai usnne flight ki tickets bhe book karwalen the par wo jis plansa a rhethe wo crash hogaya, koi nahe bacha bi, koi nnahe, chale gaye mare zoya mujhe hamesha k liye chir kar
everyone breakdown into tears

***********flashback end**********

tanveer(to herself):-aj zoya jahan bhe hoge asad ko is halat mai dekh kar wo bhe rote hoge,kash k kuch aesa ho or wo wapis a jae

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new delhi, zara mension

zara silently enter in kitchen and switch on the light and shouted pakar liya,kiya abu maine apko dhamki bhe dade magar phir bhe ap sweets khana se baz nahe aenge, 3 weeks bad zarina ka nikah hai or agar usse pata chala ga to kaisa laga usse
abu(ali):-ara beta agar mai teer hun to wo kamaan hai, yahen khare kha rahe hai wo bhe mara sath sweet.
zara:-kiya?
her mouth was open in OO😲 shape, then zarina came infront of zara by saying sorry
zarina:-sorry appi, wo abu na zid ki to mai bhe mana nahe kar pae
zara:-no sorry abse next 2 weeks tak ap dono ki har mithai khan aband
zarina:-par...!!!!!!!!!!!!!
zara:-3 weeks.ap dono jjaen apna rooms mai or chup chap sojaen

when they both left zara smiles on their childish behaiviour...

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INTRODUCTION


NAME:-ZARINA ALI
DAUGHTER OF ALI REHMAN
SHE HAD JUST PAST 2ND YEAR EXAMS



NAME:-ALI REHMAN
FATHEROF ZARA AND ZARINA
RETIERED SCHOOL TEACHER


NAME:-ZARA ALI
DAUGHTER OF ALI REHMAN
SHE HAD COMPLETED HER STUDIES AND NOW RUNS A SHOP WITH HER FATHER'S NAME

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I hope you all had liked it
plz do comment and hit like
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very nice!!!!!! thanks for the PM...continue soon...

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