AsYa SS: The Bitter Truth: Epilogue Pg. 33! - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago
Monica! We need to talk! You can't write like this! It's not allowed, you got me on the last one and now this one too 😆 I have the other tab open with your story while I am typing the comment so i don't miss a point! This is too good yaar. 👏

The beginning, dream I was like "idiot, walk faster! Go to her!"Allah Miyah! It was AWSOME how you wrote it 😊 the whistling and then her signing the song in her head, I'm reading and smiling and then I read its a dream and I'm like "Monica, yaaar! Kyun?" 😆
The coffee part made me 😭, OMG I love how in each imagination he holds a hand! It's like never letting go and the fact that she dreams it shows she doesn't want to let go!

This women's is an angel! She has to be! Otherwise how would she know Zoya. OMG I'm so excited for the next part! Update soon! Ekkk! 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
I love how ur following whatever happens in the show but then adding ur own style of writing in! I wish Zoya could also imagine Asad everywhere. loved this part. continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome yr..thnks 4 d pm ...tanveer ko jaldi out kro yr..can't stand her more

pari
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Posted: 12 years ago
Damn this tanveer will never leave asya.
Hope asad finds zoya safe and sound.
Thanx for the pm. Take care.
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg omg omg omg are you taking revenge on me for stopping my ff at the wrong point 😭

Please update soon! this is beautiful!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: iaddiction

omg omg omg omg are you taking revenge on me for stopping my ff at the wrong point😭

Please update soon! this is beautiful!



LOOL. No but now that you mention it its a good bargaining chip 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Like number 100 😊
Please do continue - it's really good!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SATD06

Like number 100 😊
Please do continue - it's really good!


AW thanks 😳😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 1

Very well-written. Asad missing Zoya scenes are too good. Your words conjure up scene before eyes. Thank God, you exposed Tanveer so soon and that too before Asad's own eyes. But, she is still not done - what is she going to do now?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Noe123

Part 1

Very well-written. Asad missing Zoya scenes are too good. Your words conjure up scene before eyes. Thank God, you exposed Tanveer so soon and that too before Asad's own eyes. But, she is still not done - what is she going to do now?


AWW thank you! I'm glad you liked it :) Yes Tanveer is everywhere even here. But in this case, it'll be the reason for her downfall *laughs evilly* 😆

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