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Heyyy Monica! 🤗
Sorry for such a late comment. My university started this monday and I was busy with that. Since I've been free for more than 6 months so it took time to manage my time schedule at home 😛 I know I've kept you waiting for this lousy comment of mine, but kia karain? 😃
And I know I only had to read the epilogue but I thought why not read the whole thing again? So I did 😆 Yes, I don't mind reading awesome pieces twice 😉
Now coming to the SS, ufff it's sooo beautifully written! Asad's remorse and guilt at himself was described sooo very well. I loved the flashbacks esp the towel one. That was just awww! 😳
And then so many lines touched my heart showing just how much in pain and lonely he was. I loved the part where he's going to bed and in the morning he's going to pretend for a minute that it was all a nightmare. Ufff that broke my heart. Very very well written! 😊
And then Zoya's nightmare was sooo meaningful. Aww poor her, she's so sad and alone. And the way she was living a robotic and monotonous life was just heart breaking 😔
I haven't watched the drama in ages so I have no idea what's going on but your story was more awesome than an episode I swear 😊
Loved how Asad found out the truth and kept looking the entire next day till he found Zoya. And the way he saved her was so vividly written. I could imagine the whole thing sooo very effortlessy 😛
The best part were Tanveer's three slaps. THEY ROCKED! 🤣 Aww Zoya sent her to a sanatorium? I was hoping for a public execution 😆 Oh well, guess not all wishes come true in our lives 🤣
The ending was picture perfect. That's all I'm gonna say. Happy endings make my mood happy 😃
The last paragraph was something I LOVED!! I don't know why but I read it so many times! It's something very meaningful and true. So yes, I loved it! 😳
I'm sure many people have already told you this countless times but you're an awesome writer! One of my favorites on this forum 😛 The way you pen down everything is just flawless and I'm love with your dialogues. They CANNOT get any more realistic 😳
Why don't you apply for the post of script writer for QH? 😛 You'd do awesome, that I can guarantee 😉
Take care and keep writing 🤗
Sorry for such a late comment. My university started this monday and I was busy with that. Since I've been free for more than 6 months so it took time to manage my time schedule at home 😛 I know I've kept you waiting for this lousy comment of mine, but kia karain? 😃
And I know I only had to read the epilogue but I thought why not read the whole thing again? So I did 😆 Yes, I don't mind reading awesome pieces twice 😉
Now coming to the SS, ufff it's sooo beautifully written! Asad's remorse and guilt at himself was described sooo very well. I loved the flashbacks esp the towel one. That was just awww! 😳
And then so many lines touched my heart showing just how much in pain and lonely he was. I loved the part where he's going to bed and in the morning he's going to pretend for a minute that it was all a nightmare. Ufff that broke my heart. Very very well written! 😊
And then Zoya's nightmare was sooo meaningful. Aww poor her, she's so sad and alone. And the way she was living a robotic and monotonous life was just heart breaking 😔
I haven't watched the drama in ages so I have no idea what's going on but your story was more awesome than an episode I swear 😊
Loved how Asad found out the truth and kept looking the entire next day till he found Zoya. And the way he saved her was so vividly written. I could imagine the whole thing sooo very effortlessy 😛
The best part were Tanveer's three slaps. THEY ROCKED! 🤣 Aww Zoya sent her to a sanatorium? I was hoping for a public execution 😆 Oh well, guess not all wishes come true in our lives 🤣
The ending was picture perfect. That's all I'm gonna say. Happy endings make my mood happy 😃
The last paragraph was something I LOVED!! I don't know why but I read it so many times! It's something very meaningful and true. So yes, I loved it! 😳
I'm sure many people have already told you this countless times but you're an awesome writer! One of my favorites on this forum 😛 The way you pen down everything is just flawless and I'm love with your dialogues. They CANNOT get any more realistic 😳
Why don't you apply for the post of script writer for QH? 😛 You'd do awesome, that I can guarantee 😉
Take care and keep writing 🤗
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