Asya OS: Prequel to 'Dil, Bhaang and More' - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Klondy




Oh really? It's possible to deactivate and restart? I never knew! But what will happen to all the posts by klondy if they deactivate? Do they evaporate and get taken off IF permanently?


Now you have put me in a fix...
Give me a day or two...I will tell you...what you can & can't do..is that will be fine.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Dixiej is you ID blocked yaa banned.?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Dixiej is you ID blocked yaa banned.?



Neither. That id is fine.

It's the klondy id that can't create new post.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Well starting from the first part of my rant..😆

AsYa discussing about Ayaan's jealousy...hahahhaha🤣 well it is amusing ki Humeira kept her words off sharing anything and everything with her BELOVED BAAJi...😲😆...I mean atleast these things should be kept to ourselves...but these two girls are diff maybe..🤪
You know what we all also loved all the names which Asad got in this FF and how he got those also...we loved reading that part also...😳😊 it is a little difficult to imagine Zoya not giving new names everytime to her Jahanpanah...😆...but that is also a part of foreplay for them
The Tie part was very funny and naughty in a way...and I can only imagine Asad asking for a tie😲😆 and Prasad amusingly giving it to him🤣




I just realized that I hadn't responded to your comments :(

Yes Zoya has her way of knighting her jahanpanah, doesn't she? And I can imagine Prasad's face too!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan

The second part of my rant :

Well this part started of on a very interesting note where Zoya and Najma were discussing Najma's impending depature and planning off her daily routine out their...and we also got to know a little about 9 / 11... which was a completely normal discussion...I feel.👍🏼
Then came the tough part for a brother...revealing and talking about this precautionary setup for Najma...I mean from Najma's POV we can see that she will be shocked ki how can her own Bhaijaan propose such a thing...but she must also understand her Bhaijaan's POV here ki when their abbu left their Ammi...she was not as supported and financially stable as what Asad is proposing to Najma...though it is a forbidden thing to even wish ...but one can't help and be silent about it...and Asad did the right thing here even if this was a tough task he went ahead with it, and explain the possibilities to Najma...so that she can be self dependent in any tough situation.
I should again applaud Shireen👏 here to come up with this thought..even though she never faced this side of the pain...but still she went through her past...and thought about it and choose the right person for this task Asad..👏
How much the situation was serious .but still talking too Maluvi's was like talking to the warden of a hostel...😆
I loved this part...and even AsYa'* monologues also.



Yes, you're right. Shireen gets the full credit for this. The serial she was talking about in the earlier update? It's actually a Pakistani serial I saw: Vasl in which the heroine's husband sends her back home with no legal status in the US. And it made me think of similar abuses against Indian women too who have no recourse to family support when such things happen. I was really upset by it and somehow that worked itself into that update.

I can imagine Asad being his overprotective self. It's in his DNA. It's a serious issue but I also wanted Zoya's craziness to balance it out. That's what I always love about Zoya. She's bold and strong without being smug and self-righteous or preachy and lecture-y.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Part 3 :

AsYa part🥳again...I must say it was a AsYa'licious update in its own sense...😃
Then we all know how important DObby had become for the clan here...so they training they baby for the baby was also thoughtful and funnier in its way...😆😛
Have I missed reading something about the Anniversary part in the last few updates...yaa you only secretly added this part here without any crazy hoohalah...😕😆
GaZiya gifting a sneak off chance to AsYa before they become 3 from 2 was again a little embarrassing and crazily funny in its own sense..😆
Now the funnier of the all ...Asad getting jealous of her own Princess...😲😆...well it is hard to imagine...but he is a man in love with his wife and is very very possessive😉 about her so it may be a point...but from his own daughter is amusing🤪
Their gifts have been wonderful...
Zoya's charms are always a treat to watch atleast...and Asad's gift was very emotionally and touching...👏🤗
The Miss.Breganza part was not placed rightly first and also not utilized correctly...but you used it here brilliantly...I always wished for such a narration of such pious incident in Asad's life...and you showed it well👏👍🏼
And then as Zoya also said...I would have also very happily beaten all the person who have destroyed Asad's childhood...he never deserved such a brutal treatment and shattering of his dreams...but then I think if Asad's past wasn't as such what it was..would .Asad still have become a man what he is today with all those hardship...😕




No, this anniversary thing I put in as flashback because I hadn't been able to do it in the earlier updates. I wanted to focus on the gifts and the scrapbook. I know. Feel the same way about Asad and what he had to go through. And I can imagine Zoya feeling really protective about him just as he is for her. Love these two so much!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan

LAst part..

You know I have noticed ki these frequent updates haven't been completed without a Hormonal Zoya's act..😆
Here also we saw...how Asad went out of his comfort and bought passes to meet Dhoni for his WIfey...but she was busy throwing fits and tantrums on him...🤣
😛But this Update on a lighter and very good not with this banter...👍🏼
AND
CONTINUE SOONISHHH...😃😳



Of course, Zoya ke meltdowns are now a requirement! I always planned a surprise by Asad. But I like how this worked out during the last days of her pregnancy. Earlier I didn't know where to put it. But this seemed the perfect opportunity-an extended anniversary gift. I tried to even research when Dhoni had really visited Bhopal but couldn't find much. But I was surprised to find out MP CM had banned IPL from playing in MP because of the allegations a couple of years ago about match-fixing. Interesting. I almost included that but desisted.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hello Dixiej...😊

Hope you had been fine...😳, I see you had been li'l busy these days on the forum with reposting the whole story here on I.F for us readers...and I seriously seriously applaud👏 and thank you 👍🏼for this...😊
I also apologize for my late comment because of some things in life I just avoided commenting here...so that on a free day I can do this with free mind..
so here I am with my rant...😳
Edited by MayurChan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

So starting from the first part...

Asad hovering and gushing not in true sense but yes kind of feeling elated about his new gift by his dear Wifey😉...it is good in a sense for couples...right that they exchange gifts and all. And also the Love for the Names which Zoya gives to Asad...😉😛 Again a special mention about the Research you carry on for writing a particular part in your updates...like from Aamir khan to Saina nehwal...just Kudos to you for the work you carry on..👏👏..and also what all Zoya said to her baby about bringing her in a right world...that monologue was also good.😃 And now one of my fav parts to read... i.e Asad's childhood parts you write...I always love them because in a way they tell us about his childhood when this ANGRY SHER was innocent boy who was forced to become a Man in a fast mode way...and these scenes or can say part turned out really really well and I always look forward to them..wish even the show would have shown some light on this.😕
LAST THING...WHAT IS AYOOTALAH..?
😕😆
Edited by MayurChan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Well this part of the story can say would come at top of my list in my FAV AsYa scenes in the story...

Asad holding Zaid😃
As Zoya said she would never be tired of witnessing this scene...I would never be tired of reading this scene...forever and ever n ever
Such beauty of a scene this whole part is...like when she holds the baby for the first time...and how she admires Asad holding their Son ...I don't really know how it actually feels...but holding your first child is always special...and their happiness and tears ib both AsYa's eyes are a proof of this...and it was potrayed very very beautifully.👏👍🏼
Zoya's realization as that she no longer a baby herself..her self talk was funny...but I guess this will transform her a little I guess...because being a baby all your childhood to your appi and jeeju and then to your hubby and now suddenly being a mumma are two diff things...and that will be very very interesting to read.
As I have said this previously , Zaid miyan will be the LUCKIEST grandchild in the history of anything...because everybody must be waiting to pamper him , to hold him, to love him...and what not...so I guess he better not be a wailing shy guy like his father who runs off from public attention...because if he is as such...her Jhansi ki rani mumma will not let him be that in this age only..😆
I don't know how you have planned the future track but you know a insight POV of the baby would be wonderful...idea for a change na...
I guess this is the bestest update after many many updates...and the happiest also...and the celebrations are yet to start...
THANK YOU FOR THIS PART J*😃
Edited by MayurChan - 10 years ago

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