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Klondy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: MayurChan

update kab milega.?

Oh man, I'm back to feeling stuck again. I've written a little bit but now feel at a standstill :(

Waiting for inspiration to strike or for Asya to tell me to write! Let's hope it comes soon! Thanks for checking in though! Always love to hear from you. Take care.

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: Klondy

Oh man, I'm back to feeling stuck again. I've written a little bit but now feel at a standstill :(

Waiting for inspiration to strike or for Asya to tell me to write! Let's hope it comes soon! Thanks for checking in though! Always love to hear from you. Take care.

No Worries...Dixiej
I will wait for the time being you get to write as flawless as always..

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

Hello Dixiej..😊

Thanx a lot for the PM...😳😛

Well before I start of my rant here...well I have noticed ki you started a new thread with your story...👏👏.CONGRATULATIONS ..👏👏 on that..

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#104

Well starting from the first part of my rant..😆

AsYa discussing about Ayaan's jealousy...hahahhaha🤣 well it is amusing ki Humeira kept her words off sharing anything and everything with her BELOVED BAAJi...😲😆...I mean atleast these things should be kept to ourselves...but these two girls are diff maybe..🤪

You know what we all also loved all the names which Asad got in this FF and how he got those also...we loved reading that part also...😳😊 it is a little difficult to imagine Zoya not giving new names everytime to her Jahanpanah...😆...but that is also a part of foreplay for them

The Tie part was very funny and naughty in a way...and I can only imagine Asad asking for a tie😲😆 and Prasad amusingly giving it to him🤣

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#105

The second part of my rant :

Well this part started of on a very interesting note where Zoya and Najma were discussing Najma's impending depature and planning off her daily routine out their...and we also got to know a little about 9 / 11... which was a completely normal discussion...I feel.👍🏼

Then came the tough part for a brother...revealing and talking about this precautionary setup for Najma...I mean from Najma's POV we can see that she will be shocked ki how can her own Bhaijaan propose such a thing...but she must also understand her Bhaijaan's POV here ki when their abbu left their Ammi...she was not as supported and financially stable as what Asad is proposing to Najma...though it is a forbidden thing to even wish ...but one can't help and be silent about it...and Asad did the right thing here even if this was a tough task he went ahead with it, and explain the possibilities to Najma...so that she can be self dependent in any tough situation.

I should again applaud Shireen👏 here to come up with this thought..even though she never faced this side of the pain...but still she went through her past...and thought about it and choose the right person for this task Asad..👏

How much the situation was serious .but still talking too Maluvi's was like talking to the warden of a hostel...😆

I loved this part...and even AsYa'* monologues also.

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Part 3 :

AsYa part🥳again...I must say it was a AsYa'licious update in its own sense...😃

Then we all know how important DObby had become for the clan here...so they training they baby for the baby was also thoughtful and funnier in its way...😆😛

Have I missed reading something about the Anniversary part in the last few updates...yaa you only secretly added this part here without any crazy hoohalah...😕😆

GaZiya gifting a sneak off chance to AsYa before they become 3 from 2 was again a little embarrassing and crazily funny in its own sense..😆

Now the funnier of the all ...Asad getting jealous of her own Princess...😲😆...well it is hard to imagine...but he is a man in love with his wife and is very very possessive😉 about her so it may be a point...but from his own daughter is amusing🤪

Their gifts have been wonderful...

Zoya's charms are always a treat to watch atleast...and Asad's gift was very emotionally and touching...👏🤗

The Miss.Breganza part was not placed rightly first and also not utilized correctly...but you used it here brilliantly...I always wished for such a narration of such pious incident in Asad's life...and you showed it well👏👍🏼

And then as Zoya also said...I would have also very happily beaten all the person who have destroyed Asad's childhood...he never deserved such a brutal treatment and shattering of his dreams...but then I think if Asad's past wasn't as such what it was..would .Asad still have become a man what he is today with all those hardship...😕

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#107

LAst part..

You know I have noticed ki these frequent updates haven't been completed without a Hormonal Zoya's act..😆

Here also we saw...how Asad went out of his comfort and bought passes to meet Dhoni for his WIfey...but she was busy throwing fits and tantrums on him...🤣

😛But this Update on a lighter and very good not with this banter...👍🏼

AND

CONTINUE SOONISHHH...😃😳

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Klondy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Hello Dixiej..😊
Thanx a lot for the PM...😳😛

Well before I start of my rant here...well I have noticed ki you started a new thread with your story...👏👏.CONGRATULATIONS ..👏👏 on that..

Hi Mayurchan! Thanks!

Yeah, I'm not sure about that thread. It'll be hard to maintain given dixeij's intermittent access to a computer. Also I don't know whether to start posting from the beginning of the FF or the middle or just random snippets. Because the pictures and gifs won't upload and then the whole starting of a new thread when you reach page 150 is just too much hassle. As is the changing of titles for each update. I guess I'll give all this more thought over the summer break.

I started the thread to link people to the site on MeD. But I haven't necessarily seen traffic increase.

Still undecided about it.

But I was thinking that may be it's a good idea if you commented on the FF on that thread. It just makes more sense, right? I didn't think of that earlier. Besides I can't create a new post so there's limited room for klondy!

One more thing. I actually added some new things to the latest FF update that I'd like you to take a look at.

Let me know what you think!

Edited by Klondy - 10 years ago

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: Klondy

Hi Mayurchan! Thanks!

Yeah, I'm not sure about that thread. It'll be hard to maintain given dixeij's intermittent access to a computer. Also I don't know whether to start posting from the beginning of the FF or the middle or just random snippets. Because the pictures and gifs won't upload and then the whole starting of a new thread when you reach page 150 is just too much hassle. As is the changing of titles for each update. I guess I'll give all this more thought over the summer break.

I started the thread to link people to the site on MeD. But I haven't necessarily seen traffic increase.

Still undecided about it.

But I was thinking that may be it's a good idea if you commented on the FF on that thread. It just makes more sense, right? I didn't think of that earlier. Besides I can't create a new post so there's limited room for klondy!

One more thing. I actually added some new things to the latest FF update that I'd like you to take a look at.
Let me know what you think!

I was also thinking about posting my comments their on the new thread...
Why don't you just do one thing...report to the development team of IF and deactivate this ID...make a new one..
And as far as updates are concerned...don't try posting your updates here from the start...like update from the present...and give them the link to the previous one on the thread only.
And this is my last update comment on this part...from next on I will comment on the story thread only.

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Klondy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: MayurChan

I was also thinking about posting my comments their on the new thread...
Why don't you just do one thing...report to the development team of IF and deactivate this ID...make a new one..
And as far as updates are concerned...don't try posting your updates here from the start...like update from the present...and give them the link to the previous one on the thread only.
And this is my last update comment on this part...from next on I will comment on the story thread only.

Oh really? It's possible to deactivate and restart? I never knew! But what will happen to all the posts by klondy if they deactivate? Do they evaporate and get taken off IF permanently?

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