FF: SECOND CHANCE with ASYA (update 28/09) - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it❤️
yaar but ur story is going on a slow place.. i am just dying to knw that why did zoya marry ayaan😉
looking forward to read more romance😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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all this shows that Asad fall head for Zoya... he just
mesmerized obvious... i like this Asad
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Posted: 12 years ago
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butiful...the style of writing was just fab
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: maha2012

loved it❤️

yaar but ur story is going on a slow place.. i am just dying to knw that why did zoya marry ayaan😉
looking forward to read more romance😊

yeah dear I know that, it is quiet slow but My intension is to clear out hows their relationship was before and after.. Thats the point Of SECOND CHANCE.. The meaning of Second Chance you know..😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Linsie

all this shows that Asad fall head for Zoya... he just
mesmerized obvious... i like this Asad

Dear belive me even I am in Love with this character... I don't knwo.. But it is true.. 😆😆
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Originally posted by: Kurup

butiful...the style of writing was just fab

1 bow...
2 bow..
3 bow...
For you... *Bow*
😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing story!!! when asad loves her...why did she marry ayaan??? i want to read more...continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you everyone for Liking, Commenting, and Reading My Work..
And most Important, Loving MY ASAAD and ZOYA..
Thank YOu all.. 🤗🤗
Here is the next part :

Secret Garden and Our Friendship (continue)

A huge grin get spread on both of their faces, she again closes her eyes and looked up toward the sky which is hidden in huge tree trunks but little of rays which her body can soak is smoothing her, and To Asaad every gesture of her is doing magic on him, he is just inches away from her but he was too far at the same time. He wanted every answer of his question he wanted every emotion of his to be named, he wanted to know her from every aspect, he wanted to explore her right away. Why he wanted to know? why he is getting so much urge to know this little like Angel face girl? His heart started to pound fast to faster, his beats is playing havoc in it. Many question he don't know but one he surely know that he is sitting in a right place with perfectly right person beside him. A smile assure his thought and he just laid down on the grass inhaling the scent of sand. A foggy smell which he always like and now it is more tempting as the girl who is just beside him smell like peach and strawberry.. What a combination he laugh on his own thought. A time passed away how much, one minute or 10, or hours he don't know, he just know he is even enjoying this silence, when he hate to be silent. Who she is? What is she doing to him?

Why I never able to find this place, I have known all the places in this small premises then how I missed this? She asked him still eyes closed and faced toward the brunches.

As we never saw each other in this small premises before. He answer her without any lie and without hesitation and with matter of facts. He looked toward her and she opened her eyes to look at him after a long time. he didn't told her that this place is hidden, hidden like no one can discover it.

she wet her lips and said : This place is beautiful.

Indeed : He smile and jerk up on his one elbow of the ground and his half body in air and asked her again : Really ?? He is given her 1000 watts of his smile as he won some forbidden prize of his life. His angle like girl liked his little heaven, he assure himself again.

Really I loved it: she replied with the same smile and enthusiasm.

More then your Library? He asked

Asaad! She exclaimed.

And they both drop in stomach ache laughter, they laugh like they had never before. For minutes or hours they don't know, but they enjoyed their small moment together..

You are a funny guy. Do You know? : Zoya complemented him.

Yeah I do know that. He replied with his sheepishly smile.

They spend a quality time in that silence again while soaking up as much as beauty of environment in them.

After an hour, minutes, or a sec who knows, but a sound of thunder break the silence, Zoya suddenly jump on her legs, as some tsunami came. But Asaad didn't move may be he had the habit of that sound.

Zoya ask him in sunder : What was that?

Asaad kept his position still comfort her : Don't get scared sweet heart. It is just the truck which passed by the bumpy road..

Sweet heart.? He heard her questioning back to him.

He opened his eyes and looked up toward her, she was standing above his head, her face looked upside down in that manner, eyebrows up and blocking the little rays which is coming to him, instead of that a arch of thin layer of glow form around her figure which is not a good sign for him either. A thin layer around her whole body fuming his inner desire like a volcano want to erupt immediately, he could have gulp down the thought instantly before he can react but the figure enhancement is not letting him do so, he roam his eyes all over her body trying to identify any curve of her body he had missed, and of course he had missed so much, except her eyes he don't remember anything he had seen, but right now in front of him a complete angel with firm and trim body is standing to kick in his butt. She moved aside and he took a deep breath of relief as silently as a silent breathe. A trance broke when she asked him again.

Lets start work then?

He opened his eyes and opened wide, right they have to work, that's why they are here, she is here not for him, but for work.. He thought with the broken heart.. Does his heart broke because he think she is here for other purpose rather then him.. What the..!!! I can't make out myself now. He clench his jaw and greeted his teeth together..

He got up and compose his emotions again, he was not a man who let his emotion get spill out in front of a girl he barely knew, and met him just few Hours ago, he look at his watch, not even hours, minutes ago.. Just 28 minutes and I shared my garden with her, who is she? 20,000 times.. Yeah 20,000 times he ask himself the same question in less than half an hour. What is happening with him, if to say it correct he feels he had spent years with this angel face girl. Time is so precious with her, she is so..

Asaad again got lost? She fling her hand in front of his face, lets start our work we are getting late. We have to finish it ASAP.

He was lost again, his name, her movement, how she throw her hands in the air, her tingles of bangles, frown on her forehead, a smile when she saw a purple flower down to her feet's, how she adjust her movement so she won't harm them, her smile again when she successes done it. Her lashes which is making fan on her cheeks. She is so complete in herself..

No! he shouted on himself, he screamed in his head to stop all the thought which is not letting him enjoy the moments with her. He want to enjoy and cherish every moment with her, rather than thinking of fantasies around her. He closed his eyes and gulp down all the thought of his fantasies. When he opened his eyes she was sitting on the bench and reading her file. He was about to start his fantasies again. Before his mind scream, and remind him of his revolution.

Are you back? Zoya asked him, without looking up from her file.

He felt a guilt forming in his chest, it is not right, but .. No but no if, his mind scream again, just mend it.. He took a sigh and said : Zoya this is not a place to work, this is a romantic place to do rom""" he stop in his mid-sentence when he saw her eyes got popped out wide and she stood up, letting her books and files fell on the grass..

And he is a jerk again, did he just said Romantic place for.. What Romance..! Idiot Khan? He again scream and scream in his head. He thought to mend it not to complicate it further, she is looking scared, frighten, she will scream and run away from you Jerk Khan, for sure.

PS: So here you go guys, Please do tell me how is this?

I know guys it is going slow, i guess very slow, but you guys should know that, hows their relationship was.. and why it is now like that.. Jsut for that.. And this Secret Garden was not in my story First, but it came, and i am unable to Neglect it..

hope you Guys will understand.

-RV-

Edited by ReneeRV - 12 years ago
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