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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow, Konu! :D I love it..:))

Such a gripping concept...I love these kind of revenge stories! Great start jana! :)

Wat about ur other ffs?? I'm dying to read Bekaraar! :/
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Annie_

Wow, Konu! :D I love it..:))


Such a gripping concept...I love these kind of revenge stories! Great start jana! :)

Wat about ur other ffs?? I'm dying to read Bekaraar! :/

thanks. Err bekaraar. Sorry i am not gettng anything 2 write aftr d confession. Suggestions please if u could :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res!
Tune mujhe maarne ka contract le rakah hai kya? I already have 1000+ pm in my pm box unread ab yeh tera aur aagaya.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Flame.Of.Rose

res!

Tune mujhe maarne ka contract le rakah hai kya? I already have 1000+ pm in my pm box unread ab yeh tera aur aagaya.


itne saare 😲
well nt my fault. i thought u read asya works to tereko link de diya! 🤔
chal abhi jaldi unres kar! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -ChocoPie-


itne saare 😲
well nt my fault. i thought u read asya works to tereko link de diya! 🤔
chal abhi jaldi unres kar! 😆

mai nai!*whinning* Yeh galat baat hai*pouts*
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Posted: 12 years ago
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abey oye chup chaap se unres kar be! :/
meko update bhi karna hai ye aaj.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was awsum..yaar...just luved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 1

He drove through the streets of Bhopal, anger; well clearly visible on his face for 24/7. If now, one would guarantee that he or she had seen that same man smiling and laughing his heart out, people would die laughing at his or her 'silly joke'. He clutched the steering wheel tight as to release some of his anger but that did not helped a bit! He put on the radio to ease it out.

"So our next request is from a son to his mother! Enjoy!" the voice came out of the radio and 'Meri Maa' song played. He shut his eyes tight as tears threatened to flow down his eyes. He opened his eyes, everything in front of him was blur because of his tears. Rain drops falling on the front glass of the car gave him a head-ache. He halted his car as a girl draped in a beautiful salwar kameez with a red umbrella came in front of his car all of a sudden. He groaned and came out to check if the girl was all fine. "Allah miyan are you blind Mr. stranger?" was her first words. She didn't looked up to see who actually it was. She was just trying to get up but the wet mud was not helping a bit. She saw a hand in front of her and looked up to see whom it actually belongs to. "Ya allah! He is so perfect!" she thought and put her small hand in his big one to stand up properly. "Uh- sorry" she spoke and left.

"She was weird!" Asad thought as he again sat in the car and left for his office.

"Morning sir" the office staff spoke as he entered the office. "Patel, in my cabin right now!" he shouted and stormed off to his cabin. Some people just shrugged their shoulders as he yet again behaved the same while some girl staff pouted and let out a sad sigh as he didn't even see them.

"May I come in sir?" spoke Patel as he opened the door slightly. "Yes. Come in." spoke Asad. His back was facing the worker while Patel hesitated to speak something. "Did the work I provided you is completed?" asked Asad. "Yes sir. We have got the family's name, its background and everything." Spoke Patel. "Great. Tell me every single thing. I don't want a thing to be missed!" spoke Asad. "Sir the one who was behind the death of your family was Mr. gaffur Siddique. He owns the ZZ construction company which is managed by 'Imraan'. He is into other wrong activities too which includes murdering the people, exchange of drugs and providing call girls. That was his professional self sir. Talking about his private life, he had a wife and a daughter who would just be one or two years younger than you. for him, his family is everything, specially his daughter." Patel finished speaking as he let out all the information which he was ought to say. "What's his daughter's name?" asked Asad. "Zoya.. Zoya Siddique" spoke Patel as Asad asked him to leave.

He turned around as now he was facing the door. He picked up a crystal ball kept on his tabled and twirled it round. "Zoya Siddique… so sorry but you have got to pay for your father's sins. What could be the best way to hurt him?" he let out an evil laugh which would send shivers down any one's spine. He dialed patel's no. and asked him to send the picture of Siddique with his family to whom patel gladly obliged.

***

"Yes?" spoke Asad as he picked up the phone of his office. "Sir, the Siddique's CEO is here. Should we send her in?" the receptionist asked. He looked at his watch; the meeting still had 10 minutes. He told, "Ask her to sit in the waiting room till the meeting has not started." He hung up the call even before listening to what the other had to say. He started off seeing if the presentation he had to give is all fine. And well, that was like always; Flawless! He had specifically wanted to get this deal with the Siddique's. This way he would be able to have some time with Zoya because of the deal and he would then proceed to get his revenge.

He entered the hall and greeted everyone, "It is really very nice to see you all over here. So, here we start up with the discussion…" the he spoke throughout without and sigh of tension or nervousness and gave the presentation in the most formal manner. "So what do you think people?" he asked while a smile broke on Zoya's face as she registered how much this deal is going to be beneficial to them or how much would it actually help the people in need. "Well Mr. Khan, I guess we are up with it! The deal is just way too perfect and as far as it is going to be helpful for the mankind, I am all up to do this with your company. In simple words, the deal is finalized" she spoke and shakes her hand with his. A smile adored her face.

Once among those just wants to have this deal while the other wants to have his revenge; revenge for the death of his family.

Which among the two would win?

No one knew.

Will love change them?

Will revenge take over him?

Or does the destiny have some other things already stored in for them.

Well none knew!


Ahh here goes the first chapter. :)

Enjoy peeps.

Preview of next Chapter:

"You are beautiful" he whispered close to her ear as shivers send down her spine. "Thank you" she spoke, blushing a bit. "Miss Siddique?" he spoke huskily. "Yes Mr. Khan?" she looked up at his brown orbs. "Well, uh- you free tonight?" he asked while a blush crept on her cheeks.


- Konpal

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice..i really want to see..how asad falls in love with zoya
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Nice chapter...
Asad wants revenge n Zoya is the bakra!!!
Huh!! We'll see!!!

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