OS : My 'Abbu' is the best...

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He placed a kiss on her forehead. And than he placed a kiss on her mother's forehead. And he went to sleep. He closed his but he felt a kiss on his cheeks. He opened his eyes.She was annu.
"annu aap soi nahi!" asad asked.
' Abbu,aapne mumma ko kissi di na mene dekha,me kal mumma ko btaugi' annu said.
'acha,to mene aapko bhi to kissi di aapne vonahi dekha?' asad asked her back and smirked.
'par aapne mumma ko kissi kyu di' me aapsebaat nai karugi.aap to kehte the ki aap mujse pyar krte hai,jaiye katti'and she turned her face.
'annu mujse baat nahi karogi? Me car me icecream khane ja raha tha socha tha tum bhi chalogi'asad said and made puppy face.
Anu jumped into his lap hearing ice cream. And placed many kisses on his cheeks.
'you are the best abbu in the world.' annu shouted in joy.
'sshhh aapki ammi ko pta nahi chalna chahiye' asad warned and took her into his lap.
'ssshhh...'anu gigled in joy.asad admired her as she was just carbon copy of zoya in such matters. Both father and daughter went out side carefully. And when they reached to car and celebrated their victory by giving hi five to each other. Both went inside the car and reached at ice cream parlor which is far away from their house.
Asad ordered two mango candies. Annu loves mango a lot.
'ye lo beta apna favourite ice cream.' he gaveher ice cream and she jumped in joy like she has won some award. Asad smirked on her reaction. But in her joy she lost her grip and ice cream was on fursh. She was scared.
' abbu bhul se gir gyi,sorry aap muje maranamat' annu said in fear.
Asad was shocked hearing this. She took herin lap and gave her his ice cream. And went outside. Both sat on bench which is near thecar. That place was not crowdy.
'beta aapko aisa kyu laga k abbu aapko marege? Abbu jante hai ki ice cream bhul se gir gyi thi' he asked.
' meri friend hai na swati usko uske papa nebohot mara tha kyuki usse candy gir gyi thi' she answered while she was enjoying candy.
Asad hugged her.
'beta aapke abbu aapse bohot pyar krte hai..vo aap pe kabhi hath nahi uthayege..' he answered.
'you are the best abbu in the world' she saidand kissed him by her ice cream coated lips. Both came back home. Zoya was still sleeping so they felt relived. And went to sleep. Asad hugged annu.
Next day,
on breakfast table,
'aaj muje icecream khane ka man ho raha hai' zoya said. Annu and asad looked at eachother and winked. Zoya noticed this.
'annu shaitan fir abbu k sath akele ice creamkhake ayi na... Aur mr. Khan aap!! me dono se baat nahi karugi' zoya said and went to room. Both father and daughter duo enteredin the room. And again winked looking at echother. Annu placed kissa on zoe's right cheek and asad placed it on left cheek.
'aap dono muje bhi apne group k hang out me shamil kiya kari samjhe! Verna next time me kiss se nahi manugi.' zoya said hugged both.
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after 10 year,
there was silence on the breakfast table. Asad and annu was not looking at eachotherjust doing breakfast mechanically. Zoya was not at all liking this. She decided to solve this problem.
'annu aaj car reapairing me hai to tumhe asad k sath hi college jana pdega' zoya started conversation.
'asad aapko to koi problem nahi hogi na!' zoya asked.
'nahi i m okay with it if she wants to come' asad replied.
Zoya stared at annu. And annu obeyed her mumma's order.
'okay' annu said.
Now both were in car.
' tumhari college kaisi chal rahi hai' he asked.
'bas chal rahi hai,aapko isse kya matlab' she gave a rude reply.
' mene jo kiya tha vo tumhare liye bilkul sahi tha,tumhe jitna gussa karna hai kar lo.' asad said.
'muje mere friend se milne se mana karna voaapko sahi lagta hai.' she asked.
'he was your boyfriend and was a bad guy.'asad said.
'whatever' again she was rude.
' annu aap muje galat samjhti hai lekin aapko kya ye sahi lagta hai ki aap kuch mahino k relationship k karan aapne abbu se naraj ho,jab bache bade ho jate hai to sahi me apne ammi aur abbu k sath k saalo purane rishte ko bhul jate hai,lekin muje aapse ye ummid nahi thi,aapki college aa gyi hai bye!' asad said.
In night,
annu came into asya room, she shook asad.
'ssshhh... muje ice cream khani hai,chaliye' annu said.
Asad just smirked and went out with her carefully. This time zoya was not sleeping but she was not angry on them beacause it was reunion time after 6 months. She was happy that her plan worked.
Annu and asad reached to car and as usual gave hi five to each othe.
This time annu hugged him.
'you are best abbu in the world,i am sorry' she said.
'its ok beta' he answered. And both went inside the car.
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after 8 years,
asad annu and zoya was on icecream parlor.
'thank god is baar aap dono muje nahi bhule,finally i am in your group' zoya said happily. Asad and annu smirked.
' tumne doctor se check up karvaya? Tumhara baby kaisa hai?' asad asked to annu.
Annu got emotional.
'is everything ok?' zoya asked
please look into second post for further story😛
Edited by ..Diya.. - 12 years ago

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'yes mumma me and my baby is completely fine,me emotinal hu kyuki mujhe aaj pata chal raha Hai ki parents ki ek bachhe ko lekar parvah kya hoti hai, aisa bohot bar hua hai ki muje laga aap dono ne mere liye galat faisla liya hai lekin vo faisla hmehsa sahi raha. I am sorry agar mene kabhi aapko dukh diya ho, thanks mumma thanks abbu,muje is duniya me lane k liye aur itni achi parvarish dene k liye. Me bhi aap dono jaisa banne ki koshish karugi' annu said and started remebering all her moment which she had spent with her mumma and abbu, how she and abbu used to play hide and seek with her mumma. How her mumma feeded meal in her mouth. How they had enjoyed in her childhood.
'thanks for giving me a magical childhood' she added and hugged both of them asya also got emotional.
'bas ab rulayegi kya,zoya ki ijjat ka sawal hai zoya kabhi roti nahi' zoya said to divert attention.
'acha aap roti nahi! To nazma ki shadi aur annu ki shadi me kon behosh hua tha ro ro kar' asad remineded her.
'oh please stop embaracing me' zoya said.
'please stop it both of you' annu ordered.
'just enjoy this moment' she added.
' i am not embaracing you please' asad continued their fight.
'oh gosh allahmiya just stop it for my sake.' annu shouted.
Both put their fingers on their lips like a student. And all three started laughing... And shared a group hug.
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😕 sorry for not giving asya moments in this... I wanted to write something on fathers day... But my PC got crashed so posting it via mobile. That is why i am posting it in two posts and not in my typical writing style😔
Sorry for inconvience. Please let me know your reviews,i am waiting😛
Diya😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww...so sweet os...LUVLY ONE...
star of the OS-Annu😳
Magical moment of the OS-all the tym annu-asad went for icecream chupke chupke😉
Bechari of the OS-Zoya...woh toh bechari hi reh gayi😆


Amazing dear!!!👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing OS...Loved it...❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res!
while reading i ws like awww ...
such a cute story!!!
tfs dea!!!!
it ws simplyyy awwwsm!!👏
Edited by LuvUAsYa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing! Loved it! You prtrited the father-daughter relationship very well.
Thanks for the PM!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey, sooo sweet os dear i like the annu & asad's bonding u portrayed nice work & thank u so much for pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww... That was very nice..
Beautiful OS..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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what a wonderfful treat on father "s day👏
i really like father daughter duo
it is very touching
gr8 os

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