AsYa TS: Mendhi Laga Ke Rakhna: Last Part PG 14 - Page 14

Originally posted by: Illo

I LOVED it!! the ending with Asad kissing her hands.. there's no more words needed there

Asads reaction, and the fact that he went and put some mehndi on just to understand her pain was super adorable!! It was beautifully written and please post the part 4 as well. After the track in the serial we need some punishment for that Manhoos!!

Originally posted by: mochhug

Aw thank you! I'm really glad you liked it and my writing..😃

I think I will end up doing the epilogue and of course the alternate version😆

Yayyy! Do it soon soon soon . Cant wait!

it was amazing..

Originally posted by: asyarocks1999

it was amazing..

asad's care for zoya was beautiful..

every emotional scene you have written are flawless..

sorry for being so demanding but can you give an alternate ending..

i love every work of yours and so want to read more..

sorry i didn't comment on second part bcoz i opened my pc just now and saw both of your pms..

lovely update..

thnx for pm too

I will read and comment on this when I'm a bit free 😉 Right now I've to study for my practical tmrw 😔

aww...dat was so swt of asad...so beautifully u hve depicted their emotions...marvelous updte..luved it

This TS is the most beautiful of all of your works that I have read so far.

Originally posted by: Noe123

This TS is the most beautiful of all of your works that I have read so far.

Marvelous job, girl!

Special kudos for Part 2. It was poetry in prose.

Omg you're too sweet!! Thaaank you

I was freaking awesome.

wow..its awesome 👏👏