AsYa TS: Mendhi Laga Ke Rakhna: Last Part PG 14

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goingreen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Beautiful read (: Made my day!!

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jasmine

@Reyansh23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Really good
Keep it up yr
Thnx fr pm

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teddyyy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: mochhug

OMG I'm seriously blushing! Your comments gush over my writing so much that they leave me smiling like a buffoon for ages😆

Thaaank you😳😳😳

Next part will be up sooon😊

Awww well I'm glad I made you blush hehee :D But dude you seriously deserved the praise, it was beautiful! (: I'm going to read the third part very soon!

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

OKAAY! I'm speechless after reading this part! I ah I ah… ermm?

His confession was so beautiful *sniffs* I teared up reading the first paragraph! Zoya getting annoyed by her comparison with tornado LOOOL! Ahhh girl! You make me cry one second and the next I'm laughing my ass off!

Aww she wanted to see how dark his colour of love was and him tearing up hearing that, I couldn't stop awww'ing! Him wanting to put the same mehendi on his hand and realising how bad the pain was PRICELESS! Just beautiful, beautiful is an understatement.

AND OH EM GEE! The whole bedroom scene was beautiful. Yes beautiful, too too beautiful. I melted away, I'm still crying writing this. IDK what to say, this last chapter was perfection. The last 2 lines were perfection. Everything was perfection. *sighs* I need a dictionary to find more words that I could use to tell you how much I loved this.

YOU my darling, amazing! You are a wonderful writer and it is such a treat to read your work! All I'm going to say is keep up the great work, me loves loves loves so so so much! GAHHH, I'm spell bounded! O_o

P.S. unres'd my other comment on page 12! Sorrieesss for the lateness! xoxo

Edited by MrMrsAsyaKhan - 12 years ago

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webuser7

@webuser7

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Beautiful!!

I love how you kept true to character esp Asad's OCD and how he kept the bowl away from spilling accidentally Bravo!

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Illow

@Illo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

I LOVED it!! the ending with Asad kissing her hands.. there's no more words needed there

Asads reaction, and the fact that he went and put some mehndi on just to understand her pain was super adorable!! It was beautifully written and please post the part 4 as well. After the track in the serial we need some punishment for that Manhoos!!

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Rupali

@HamariAduriKahn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

love love loved it! it was really beautiful great job! 👏

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: lDirectionerl
OMG! *Le me wipes a tear*
The last line!
"Aapne yeh nahin socha, ki aapke daard se mujhe kitni takleef hogi?" 😳
God! I loved it totally!
Please update soon!

😆 Glad you liked it 😳😳

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Barayah

@irock321

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Loved this!!! This is exactly what I needed after that Horrid precap for tomorrow's episode! Loved this!!! OMG I'd love to read the alternate ending! This OS was amazing!!!