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Posted: 12 years ago
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good start!! 👍🏼 please continue and pm me when you update
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Thank you all for the wonderful comments! Without further ado, here's the update! 😳 Enjoy reading! 😊


Chapter 1


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"Asad Ahmed Khan, Kya aapko yeh nikaah Qubool hai?"

"'"

"Kya aapko yeh nikaah qubool hai?"

"Qubool Hain."

~~~~

"Zoya Farooqi, Kya aapko yeh nikaah qubool hai?"

"'"

"Boliye Zoya"

"Ji. Mujhe Qubool Hai"

~~~~

It had been 15 minutes since she was sitting on his bed ' Ooppss.. 'Our Bed', she thought, blushing furiously.

She was not ready for anything physical, not until she was in love. They were like the opposite ends of a pole. His views contradicted hers. His thought process was different and his gaze at her was inimical.

But he was her husband' now.

The door clicked, pulling out Zoya from her deep thoughts. She waited for him to lift up her veil and relieve her from this not-so-comfortable position. She was thirsty. She was hungry. She was impatient.

But the moment never came. She looked up to see him bolting the door from inside, which sent shivers down her spine. Considering he was her husband, he had all the right to do that.

But she was not yet ready.

He quietly came and sat down next to her.

"Ms Faar.. Mrs Asa' Umm.. Zoya?",she heard his deep manly voice. She lifted the veil herself, seeing no advancements from his side.

"Yes Mr Khan?",she asked in a low voice.

"I wanted to clear this out. I don't lov.. I mean, I just married for the sake of my Ammi. I can never be the husband you want me to be..


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Asad was looking down as he cleared things out with...his wife. Hesitantly, he raised his eyes to her face, dreading her reaction. The sight that awaited him was of a horror-struck face. Zoya sat on the bed with her eyes wide as saucers and both her hands clasped over her mouth. All he could see in her eyes was utter disbelief and fear.

Asad looked away and cursed himself. In those few seconds, millions of thoughts went through his mind. I am an idiot. An unfair fool. I should have cleared everything before the nikah. What choice did the poor girl have now?! She might have seen so many dreams about her married life! And I ruined it all..

Asad had his eyes closed and his fingers caressing his frown as he drowned in guilt. Suddenly he felt Zoya move on the bed. Before he could turn and see what she was doing, he felt nails digging into his shoulder. And just as he looked at his newly-wedded bride, she scrunched her eyes close and let out an ear-piercing scream.

~~~

Zoya opened one eye slightly. OH LORD! Just as she was about to scream again, Asad clamped a hand on her mouth. If Zoya hadn't been so horrified, she'd have laughed heartily at the bewildered expression on his face. But right now, they had more important matters to deal with.

"Um umm umumuuu" came a muffled sound as his hand prevented her from speaking. Zoya tried pushing him with all her might but to no avail. Let alone move, he didn't even budge! Then, still trying to speak, she started shaking him with both her hands. He HAD to do something!

"Miss Far- Mrs. ' uhh, Zoya! What the hell is wrong with you?"

"Umm-" she started saying when-

"STOP! STOP trying to speak. And this shaking! Now!"

Zoya froze instantly, her wide eyes looking at him like a punished student looks at his teacher.

"Now I am removing my hand from your mouth. NO screaming! Okay?"

Zoya nodded in the affirmative hurriedly. Slowly, Asad removed his hand. It nearly came back on when she opened her mouth to breathe.

"Chill Mr. Khan, I'm NOT screaming! Saans to lene dijiye! (Atlease let me breathe!)"

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"Hmm..sorry" Asad replied as he got up from the bed and took a step back, trying to control his irritation as Zoya was still standing on his...their bed.

Once done breathing, Zoya bent a little to the side as if trying to see behind him. He frowned and followed her line of sight. It ended on the wall. This girl is crazy. By the time he turned back to her, she was JUMPING on his bed. This girl is going to be the death of me!

"Mi- Zoya! Get down!" he managed to say without losing his temper. But Zoya was in her own world, jumping on his..their bed and looking all around the room.

"Ye aapne kya kar diya Mr.Khan! Ohh shit! Shit shit shit! Ab kya hoga? Noo! Allah Miyan what's wrong with you? Aap mere saath aisa kaise kar sakte hain?.."

Bizarre. The only world Asad found appropriate for the lady in front of him. She kept on speaking, lost in her own little world. Asad doubted she even remember he was right there. Or that she had just gotten married. Or that it was their 'Suhagraat'.

No sooner did the thought cross his mind than Zoya jumped on him from the bed with a horrified cry..a squeal would me more appropriate. Thank God for Asad's quick reflexes that he caught her in time. But her wriggling made it difficult for him to keep balance. So he tightened his arms around her knees and shoulders to stop her from moving, unaware it increased their proximity. A bit too much.

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That's about it for now..looking forward to your reactions 😉

Will be back soon..till then, adios amigos 🤗

Edited by AdorableTrouble - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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No fair... I wasnt sent a PM. Humph!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Res :)

Sups dear and meri Shai kameeni...you guys are doing a Fab job! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Noo u can't lave it at that - continue ASAP with a very long update and that's a order! :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb...awesome...continue soon & update large updates...thnks 4 d pm dear..


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nikki.171

No fair... I wasnt sent a PM. Humph!


Sorry re jaan! See, I've already announced that we (me n suppu) are officially the laziest asses on this forum 😆 Maine ABHI PMs bheje sabko 🤣 Suppu ne shaayad abhi bhi ni bheje 🤣🤣 But we LAU you ❤️ 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow, emotional update. You both are doing a superb job. Looking forward to next update.👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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m highly confused now. Updt soon
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Reserved 😎

Did she like, see a cockroach or sumthin? 🤣

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