AsYa FF- No Promises [Collab] Chap1-Pg8

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Hey Guys! M on a writing Spreee today 😆😆😆
So Here is a Collab by me and my Chudail, Shaili (AdorableTrouble) .


NoPromises..


Prologue

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"Nervous?",Najma asked.

"Very",Zoya replied, letting out a huge sigh, causing Najma to giggle.

"I can't believe I am getting married. I mean.. I have dreamt of this day all my life. I had some expectations,some fantasies. But finally when the day has come, I am not sure. Its all happened so quickly. I mean.. I just met him a week before. I don't love him. I don't know if I can ever do that ever. He is just so.. so different from what I wanted my husband to be",Zoya said, looking at herself in the mirror.

"Don't worry Zoya. Bhaijaan is a gem of a person. He is an introvert but he'll keep you ahppy always. I know you always wanted to marry the person you love but arranged marriages are not that bad.. Hai na Bhabhi?",Najma teased.

"Tamaatar!! Don't call me that. I am first your friend, then your brother's wife' I mean.. to-be-wife",she said.

Zoya took a huge breath as she took a look at herself one final time in the mirror.

"Ready?",Najma asked her with a smile.

She nodded, still unsure of what she was getting into.

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"Ammi, the turban's fine! Stop fidgeting with it!"

"Arre! What is wrong if I want my son's wedding to be perfect? It wasn't easy to get you to say yes for the marriage Asad!"

Asad looked at his mother. The lady who had single handedly raised two children after her fickle husband left her. She was his world. And her happiness was all that mattered.

"I'm still unsure about this whole thing..but anything for you Ammi. Just stay happy. Always."

"I won't need to. My daughter in law is coming to take care of that."

Asad went back to his various meetings with his bride-to-be in the last week. "I hope so Ammi..I hope so" he muttered inaudibly, with no whatsoever idea what he was getting into.

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Looking forward to your comments. Should we continue or should we not?


Buddy Me or Shaili( AdorableTrouble--Her PM account id DayDreams) for PMs.

Thank you for reading. xoxo :)


P.S- See Post 2 for Index.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Waah! Kya intro hai Daayan! Tu to mere se bhi gayi guzri nikli 🤣 🤣

Achha sunna, kal karti hoon comment aur PM :P
Abhi I'm on phone, tired and sleepy too :P

Upar se Fiz ki bachhi sar pe naach ri hai comment karwane :P
Fizz 😈 🤣 Haan na! Jaa ri hoon wahaan :P Because I love you kuttiyan 🤗
But I love your works more :P ❤️ 😆


-Edited-


Hello my fellow QH lovers! I doubt the 'lovers' part with the current billo-sheru track going on, but whatever 😆

This daayan here, haan haan, your 'supriya.ipkknd' and I both of us are a couple of lazy, VERY lazy bitches 😛
Daayan ke already kai saare TSs aur FFs on hai, as you all must know..to humne socha kaam divide kar le 😎 Ain't we smart ? 😎
Haan to here we present to you, a collab by me and suppu. Hope it doesn't turn out to be disastrous 🤣 🤣

IMP -
Hey! Please DO NOT Buddy me for PMs! Buddy the account DayDreams for PMs from me! Sorry for the inconvinience! 😊



Index

Prologue - Page 1 (Above)
Chapter 1 - Page 8


Edited by AdorableTrouble - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Accha ab sacchi wala Unres 😆

Okay so they are getting married
and the marriage is arranged
And now they ll have to adapt
And they ll fall in love 😳

Okay seriously the prologue sounds interesting 👏
I m sachi mai looking forward

p.s - Ye prologue tune likha hai ya shai ne ? 😃
Edited by giee - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res. 🤣
Giee - same to same. :P
Aur Shai, marr jaa kahin jaa kar. Kuttiya. ;(

Unreserved.

Oyye hoyye. Kya Prologue tha. 😆
Me waiting for the first part. Arranged? 😲
Like the show wasn't enough. 🤣🤣🤣
But I'm gonna be hooked on to this for sure. That I know. 😳
Shai, tu kuch likhti bhi hai? Ya sirf Suppu ka kaam hai yeh? Ainvayi naam dalva diya. 🤣🤣🤣
Edited by -Fizzi- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Fizzi-

Res. 🤣
Giee - same to same. :P
Aur Shai, marr jaa kahin jaa kar. Kuttiya. ;(


Maine to tere har ek pe comment kiya hai re! Is Chudail ko bhul jaa.. Mere liye to Unres karde atleast 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: supriya.ipkknd



Maine to tere har ek pe comment kiya hai re! Is Chudail ko bhul jaa.. Mere liye to Unres karde atleast🤣



🤣 I lau you too Fizz :* 🤣

Abe Daayan! Saali tu door re hum dono se! Apni Gie ke paasjaa! Vo saali ni karri unres :/

Fizz to meri darrling hai..abhi kardegi unres
Fizz, unres kar. Aur achha achha likh. Tennu Brindavanam ki kasam 🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: AdorableTrouble



🤣 I lau you too Fizz :*

Abe Daayan! Saali tu door re hum dono se! Apni Gie ke paasjaa! Vo saali ni karri unres :/

Fizz to meri darrling hai..abhi kardegi unres
Fizz, unres kar. Aur achha achha likh. Tennu Brindavanam ki kasam 🤣🤣🤣


Brinda.. What?? 😕😕😕🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Reserved. B-)

Unreserved 😎

Ohoo!! Meri Bhanghi n Aatma!!! Waah yaar! Kya combo hai!!

Ab to agla update 2 saal baad hi milega. 😆

And kyunki two of my fav writers are writing this, i expect dhamakedaar chapters!!

Reham karke update karte rehna!!

#loveyouboth :*

P.S- Sup.. khush???
Edited by stellababes - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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luved the premire
hope the picture is gr8 too
do ppm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: QWEERRTTYYUUIIO

luved the premire
hope the picture is gr8 too
do ppm me


Premiere? Acha you mean the prologue 😆

Thanks a ton!

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