||Asya FF|| Bring me back to life - pt 23 -pg151!!

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

@Meself

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#711

Haye this was so cute!!! But yeah...I do have a complaint that it was too short! But I'll let you pass for it was so...beautiful. I could actually see Asad stammering and stuttering and Zoe too is eager!!! Now what more could I possibly ask for? So the next update's going to be them going on a date although I know its very well masked underneath that oh-its-not-a-date-but-a-work-related-outing-where-of-course-we'll-be-alone!! I can't wait Farah!!

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snehasya

@snehasya

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#712

awe baby asad he stammered but I loved the way their conversation took place and now it seems asad had drawn a fake card which she easily buy and its trip time wohhooo

thank for pm

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Ilham

@Ilhamez

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Posted: 11 years ago

#713

Niceee very nice
I want u to know That i wait for ur update eagerlyyy
Thanks for pm and pm me when u update please sooon

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#714

chotu update nahi chalega...even if it is awesome...so they are going out...excited!!!
and for clothings...i think she looks perfect in every attire...
continue sooner this time...with a long update

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#715

wow

this was superb

i am so loving it

loved the phone scene

i don't think Asad is taking her to a company opening

I would love to see Zoya in an anarkali suit... maybe one from Surbhi's photoshoot

luv

Mahi

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 11 years ago

#716

So short :( but I like that he gave her a phone and asked her out hehe.

Continue soon! :D

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lover1998

@lover1998

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#717

Great update. I just caught up with the last 3 chapters and OMG THE EMOTION WAS CAPTURED BEAUTIFULLY. I'm jealous right now of your writing ability. :P but no seriously it was amazing. and omg the things Zoya went through were horrible. And omg Asad was Zoyas' crush and vice versa that was so cuteee. Beautiful update. loved everything and plz update soon.