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Posted: 12 years ago
Ohh!!! Asad first sort out your feelings!!!
He can't see Zoya with another man but he can say those rude words to her!!! He is jealous from his core but wouldn't admit it even if his life depended on it!!! Ego!!!
I wonder how'll be their interaction in the office??? At home there is Dilshad so they may not show animosity that much but in office...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ommmggg !!!!!!!! totally breathtaking update !!!!!!

Asad's jealousy, desire, passion, anger all is visible in ur writing, all the time he imagine what Hamzah do with her & he jealous with him bt not admit that
Zoya - she attract towards Asad, like his closness, bt at the same time she can't bear his ego
her state was portrayed so nicely

update was just.. just superb!!!!!! 👏

Thank u so much for pm😊
continue soon plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
really well written
loved it
waitin to read more
pkanchan thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
loved it
it ws really well written
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
subtle romance, ,jealousy, attraction,...in the air..
absolutely wonderful..
playing with each others emotions..
can be quite lethal...
waiting to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
👏 Sooo Awesome!! 👏👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
I read this ff in one go...Man what writing skills you have got...The way describe the intense scenes hayeee 🤗..You are such a pro at writing..Trust me if you start make your own u r going to be a tough competion in the industry..Amazzzing update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
ThankYou sooo very much all u lovely people for ur loveliest of comments !! I'm so gladd u liked them 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Cup-Of-Chai

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Zaraaa that was a Brilliant, Amazing, Extremely Hot update as always! I always wanted to see a jealous Asad and Voila! here i got it.

Grinning and Blushing like an idiot was actually what i did throughout reading the update. Dude! What an update. Do i need to say more? Okay i will.. 😆

Zoya in black Asad not able to handle his Desires, The date with Hamzah, Asad witnessing all that, Dilllu-Zoya Convo, Asad noticing her every move EVERYTHING was well written oh and especially the whole scene in Zoya's room. God as i always say Asad Miyan is such a THARKI INSAAN in your FF 🤣 not in a bad sense though i kinda enjoy this dominating Kind of Asad. The whole scene was Too Hot To Handle lmao! 18+ 😆 I hope the next Update is even hotter. ☺️

Simple loved it to the core. Update soon baby! 🤗

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🤣 OMG my blushing Sadyyy !!!
ThankYou sooo muchhh babesss for ur super awesome comment 🤗

Yesss Asad is a tharki insaan ...like a proper guy in my FF 😆

Love uuu. ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for pm, this is coming along so very nicely, can't wait for next update. love this possessive and jealous side of Mr Akdu Ahmed Khan. i want him to get more jealous and stew a bit more. Zoya should not give in.

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