FF: Mangalpur Madness #2 - last part on pg 41 - Page 28

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: xxDaydreameRxx

Awww it ended :( But well, so do all other good things!

Well where do I start? Thank you soo soo much for such a beautiful SS! 🤗 I enjoyed reading it throughly! About the last two chapters, I guess the best part is that you kept Asad and Zoya in their usual character, no magical overnight change. Besides, I dont mind our gruff lion-like Asad at all and when he's angry - I love him even more! 😆 This SS was something really memorable and you wrote it flawlessly - plot-wise, characterization, and even the grammar! One of the most PERFECT things I've read and so of course was the ending!
And now here's me BEGGING you to please please write something else on AsYa now that this is done...I would love to read anything you write on them :)



Yeah I didn't wanna end it with the cliched I love you and I love you too scene haha. I'm so glad you liked it (: I'll try write something new... if I think of something (: Thank you for always leaving such nice comments, I really do appreciate it (:
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

Nahiii I can't believe it has ended...seriously loved every chapter and every word. Thank u so much for sharing your work with us. Hope we can get to read something as spectacular soon. Best wishes



Thank you so much!! (: I'm really glad that you liked it as much as you did (:
Edited by goingreen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
This FF is amazing. Took me some time to read all the parts, but its kinda sad that its coming to an end :(

I request you to write an epilogue or a sequel to this one. You are such an amazing writer. Loved itt! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wish it would've continued but every story has to come to an end and you have done justice to this story with the ending. Nice job and I look forward to reading more from you.

🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗


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Posted: 12 years ago
P.S.

The proposal was perfect!
Edited by AWriterAtHeart - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
This was the last part... I mean the last part.😲 I din't see it coming.. God am gonna miss this... very very much.. I loved this journey of mangalpur madness.. You are just the best writer.. I loved stalking this really.. and now am gonna miss that too...

Loved the last part.. You are too good with this romantic stuff yar.. Reading all this I just have one thing in mind.. God , I seriously want such a emotionally verbally challenged guy for me too..😆 I loved it..

Can't we have a prologue.. I don't know I wanna more of it.. Please.. Try it.. pretty please..😛

Amazing work.. I'l just say it once more YOU ARE MY FAVORITE WRITER. 😃

Please start something new.. 😃

Will wait..

Dee
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww khatam ho gaya. :(
It was wonderful part.
Hope you will write more after this.
Next time do pm me from the beginning of your ff plzzz.
Thanx for the pm. Take care.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome yaar!!!!!😊😊😊
loved it
me too happy for such a nice ending but i'm also sad as it ended...😭😭😭
anyways it was really too too too good
a huge round of applause for u 👏👏👏
🥳🥳🥳
Edited by loveasad - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was amazing. You should do a sequel sort of were they go home and tell everyone and stuff
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great ending. Take a bow for a well-written FF!

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