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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

I simply LOVED this one!!! How I wish this was exactly what had happened in the show too!!! You are such an amazing writer dear!! Loved this story to bits!!!

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princee

@princeegoyal

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

waoo...yr kya baat hai...its really sweet...good one...i guess fire seq is on the way & might be zoya say all these o asad in the same way u right...thnks 4 d awesome pm dear

pari

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veenisha

@veenisha

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

this is superb dear 🤗

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

tis is really awesome...

so beautifully written...

just luv it...

the way u describe thier feeling n pain is just superb...

it just brilliant...👏

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

I loved the scene when appi tells about zoya's past and asad's reaction towards it... I loved it more when he entered her room and asked for a sorry, because I din't wanted him to ask for a sorry on a coffee atleast this time coz this was really a big matter and an heart felt apology was needed , not that coffee apology is not heart felt but I was a quite bored with this routine sorry buisness.

But still their was something missing in that scene which you completed over here. Loved it , my dearie... Loved this OS.

You actually completed the entire scene..

Dee

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

oh God dear, why did u take so long to write dis, this is just just PERFECT. how I wish this wud have happened in QH too, at least ab soyi hui Zoya se to Asad iqrar kar hi sakta hai.

I loved it, plz don't take long to write next time.

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GrilledCheese

@GrilledCheese

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

wowww...this was beyond wonderful...loved it!

truly wish this happened in the show...fabulous job!

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rads73937

@rads73937

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Beautiful.

Thanx for the pm. Take care.

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Neha

@Asyalover

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

aww...that was a beautiful confession with litter horror for zoya

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Having Zoya imagine Asad in a fire too was really something different and good. Loved how Asad felt bad when he realised Zoya was dreaming about him in the fire too.