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xxDaydreameRxx

@xxDaydreameRxx

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Awww this was soo damn adorable!! You know when I was watching this scene in the show I remember thinking it would have been great if the CVs made Zoya have a fire nightmare now so Asad realizes how big of a dumbo he's been and can comfort her! Sadly it never happened but then reading your OS has made my wish pretty much come true! Asad and Zoya's agony was described beautifully! Do write more ;)

Edited by xxDaydreameRxx - 12 years ago

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

This is actually superebooo. CVs are you listening? .

i want this to happen, maybe after marriage. But i want this! Exact word to word

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Jassieg

@Jassieg

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Awesome os. Loved it very much.👏

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
This is actually superebooo. CVs are you listening? .

i want this to happen, maybe after marriage. But i want this! Exact word to word

AWW Ankie 😳😳😳

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: xxDaydreameRxx
Awww this was soo damn adorable!! You know when I was watching this scene in the show I remember thinking it would have been great if the CVs made Zoya have a fire nightmare now so Asad realizes how big of a dumbo he's been and can comfort her! Sadly it never happened but then reading your OS has made my wish pretty much come true! Asad and Zoya's agony was described beautifully! Do write more ;)

AWW yay! I'm sooo glad 😃 I had a feeling a lot of people would be wanting a nightmare/comforting scene! Sometimes the CV's surprise us with amazing and mind blowing scenes.. and then there are other times where I'm like.. wait.. WHAT!? Huh? That's it? NO! 😆

I have a couple other works but I'm sure you've already read them 😳 Thanks!

Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago

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niki_12

@niki_12

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

I love this!! CV's should read this. If only all the writers on IF wrote QH...trp's would be out the roof...but I definitely want to see a comforting scene like that...enough of Asad caring for Billi...its time his Zoya needs him...

Beautifully written! I truly enjoyed reading it. I am going to go find your other writing as well...totally loved this.

-niki

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: niki_12
I love this!! CV's should read this. If only all the writers on IF wrote QH...trp's would be out the roof...but I definitely want to see a comforting scene like that...enough of Asad caring for Billi...its time his Zoya needs him...

Beautifully written! I truly enjoyed reading it. I am going to go find your other writing as well...totally loved this.

-niki

AWW thanks! 😳😳 Seriously blushing reading this 😛 well I hope you like my other stuff.. I'll surely look out for your comments 😃

Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago

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webuser7

@webuser7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

This was just lovely. Wish something like this had been shown in QH! Zoya's nightmare about losing Asad was heart wrenching. Great job! 👏 👍🏼

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: webuser7
This was just lovely. Wish something like this had been shown in QH! Zoya's nightmare about losing Asad was heart wrenching. Great job! 👏 👍🏼

Thanks! 😳