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tvpremi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Thanks for pm n i m loving it...plz continue soon n keep up the amazing work...

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amri123

@amri123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

hey

that was amazing

great update

Asad should really learn to relax

and enjoy the finer things in life sometimes

thanks for the PM😊

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e_enigma

@e_enigma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Omgeee.

It was beautiful!

I'm so glad that you sent me a pm.

It was ridiculously awesome.

And I like this Malak...he's an interesting character! Great job!

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Hey thanks for the PM especially since it got me to a wonderfully different and refreshing story.

And need I say i just looove Malak?

Asad Ahmed Khan needs a strong dose of reality in terms of his interaction with Zoya and learn to value her.

And more than that I love the way Zoya seems to be blossoming under the care and affection that Malak showers on her. Time to show Asad how a woman should actually be taken care of! And what better motivator than jealousy

Though somewhere something about Malak bothers me and I cant put my finger on it!

Loved Zoya wanting to spend her first salary on Phuphee and Najma - a measuer of the impact they've had in her life and how much she caves a mother's love and a sense of family.

I assume you are an IT person since you've talked about IT security etc in clear concise and believable terms? Super storyline looking forwrad to read the rest!

Edited by DMGFan-2b-not2b - 12 years ago

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

One request please - put up an index on the first page with the chapter nos and the pages they can be found on.

Thanks

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

This is awesome. You are par excellence.

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shai95

@shai95

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

hmmm ... So , i saw a variation in Malak's character in this update . In the previous one he was rude towards Asad coz he really cared for Zoya , but now it seems there is more to it . Though he is still very considerate about Zoya's feelings but still , it looked like his caring nature can't be the only explanation for his behaviour , lets see what he is upto ! Its so good to see that Asad has also geared up for the battle , he won't let Malak take away Zoya so easily . And ofcourse , he is coming across more and more talents of Zoya because of Malak , now he will surely realise that Zoya is not the one who only boasts of her capabilities but is absolutely capable of showing them too !
And how do u know so much about hacking ? Are u a hacker or may be , a computer engineer ?
Tanveer wasn't there in this one too , will she not be present in the story at all ?
Whatever it is , i am clearly enjoying it ! You give such lengthy and amazing updates ! Waoh ! Waiting for the next one !

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

wow nice update
you really know a lot about computers/internet. i'm impressed
i feel something fishy about malak. i think he's planning to use zoya for something bad
anyways can't wait to see what happens next .
thanks for the pm dear

kiki