FF: Web of Lies - COMPLETED on p80

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

I don't like Malak...He has something bad in his mind...I mean other then going after Zoya...I THINK he is going to use Zoya to do something wrong...And the last time when she spent the few hours in jail were not a simple mistake...I think he did something...made her do that from him...like when he was asking Asad about how safe that bulding was...I felt that he is using Zoya as an excuse to get some info from Asad...from the start his coming to india and...something smell fishy...I don't like him...

Hmmm we will find out...Loving your ff...you sure know how to write to make a person think about your Ff and wait for an up-date day and night...Can't wait for the one...😊

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-Reema-

@-Reema-

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

wow, fantastic 😃 continue soon plz

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roxiestar

@roxiestar

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

love this so much :D best fanfic ive read in a while the excitement, drama, suspense cant wait for the next part

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Tanzia Scott

@latanzia

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

I love this story, please update soon.

I don't trust this guy malak, he will get zoya into trouble also have a feeling he is hiding something.

When u do continue please pm me

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Barayah

@irock321

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Amazingly written! I loved it! You've really done your research well! I'm impressed! Love it!

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...SankaDevi...

@...SankaDevi...

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Loved it! How do you know so much about hacking? Anyways, I love the story, its so interesting! Do continue!😳😳

Sammy❤️

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webuser7

@webuser7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Very nice. As I mentioned before, I love your writing style! If you are PMing on updates, pls include me too. Thanks!

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Nazz1992

@Nazz1992

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

OMG,

You are so talented, words cannot articulated!

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xxDaydreameRxx

@xxDaydreameRxx

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

YAY you updated!! 😃

Firstly, really loving Zoya's excitement and her plans to buy coffee, flour, jewellery and what not! 😆 She is soo cute!

"Your role is to bring joy to the world." - Rightly said by Dilshaad 😊

Hmm..Asad didn't sleep well - I think I can guess why 😉

"Well-behaved ladies don't wave their arms around and scream like they're directing traffic." 🤣 His well-behaved-ladies-don't...lines really crack me up big time!! 😆

"Mr. Khan was being a caveman." 🤣🤣 Definitely my favourite line! :D

Aaahhha, you compared Asad to a jungle cat 😉 you know I love these lion-like references - they add to his hotness! 😛

And WOW - Malak and Asad are both on total offensive mode! Sometimes it gets hard not to get pissed off with Malak but then he wants the best for his best friend - or at least I hope he is not actually evil! 😲 And I do feel that there is a lot of truth in the stuff that he said to Asad. I really like the way the story is going and I think its definitely going to be a step ahead of jealousy - I want to see Asad to finally realize that he is in the wrong somewhere and that he has a long way to go before he can actually claim to love Zoya unconditionally because at the moment, although he is always there for her, he takes her for granted a lot too!

Fantastic Update! Do continue soon and thanks for the pm :)

Edited by xxDaydreameRxx - 12 years ago