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princess101

@princess101

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#561

I loved it sad it ended but super excited for ur new story thanx for the PM and update ur new story soon please it sounds super amazing :D

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Andrea

@DreA

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#562

Awww Im upset its over but as the saying goes...All good things must come to an end. The story was gripping. I cannot wait for the new story! I will keep a look out for it incase I dont get a PM

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Rupali

@HamariAduriKahn

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#563

this was just an amazing story! I remember when I first started reading it how addicted i got to it; I just couldn't stop reading and get any homework done 😉 ur knowledge of like everything just adds another depth to every scene and u plan out an pay attention to each detail in an incredible way! I love the way u write! so far ur stories are better than any book I've ever read! is writing something u do in ur free time or is it ur career? I wouldn't be surprised if u were a professional writer though! and I find it so awesome how ur prequels include a little hint of the sequel and vice versa. ur a brilliant writer and my most favorite one. I'm officially ur number one fan now! please continue the sequel soon! even if u ever think no one is interested (psht like that'll ever happen) then remember that I'm always here and I'll always read ur stories!

-Rupali

Edited by Love-AsYa-4ever - 12 years ago

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Surish

@Surish

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#564

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webuser7

@webuser7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#565

Originally posted by: PalyGirl
Author's Notes: As always, all mistakes are mine and made accidentally. These stories are not intended to hurt anyone's feelings, culture or beliefs. HUGE, endless thanks go out to my wonderful beta readers! This story would have been awful without you. Yes, TRULY! You kept me focused, on track and put up with my endless questions and revisions. You are great blessings and I appreciate all the time and effort you put into making this story successful.
This story is over but don't worry! The next two stories in my Zoya/Asad adventures - ALL THE RIGHT MOVES and GHOST IN THE MACHINE - are more than sequels. They are intertwined with WEB OF LIES. The seeds for both adventures have been planted and the stories have already begun. Did you notice the clues?

Second comment from moi:

@underline: Of course! Here's what I noticed in Web of Lies:

All the Right Moves: Lot of mention: Dilshad/Najma/Zoya discussion about the cricketer and the event and tickets. Also, Zoya mentioned hotels and hacking into it. Asad heard part of the conversation and thought Zoya wants to leave. Mentioned again when Dilshad visits Zoya's office!

Ghost in the Machine: I remember commenting about it previously. When Asad goes berserk trying to find his file, Zoya checks her storage and retrieval system and finds an empty folder and finds it strange as the folder would be created only if a file existed. This pointed to some kind of internal traitor.

That's what I can remember top of my head!

Edited by webuser7 - 12 years ago

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rajnid68

@rajnid68

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#566

awesomeness to the brim and overflowing..

back home..with cuts and bruises. .

zoya hand still hurting..

zoya tells that she loves spending time with dilshad, najma..

and Mr Khan...

dilshad and najma..worried

group hug..

...All the right moves...whose

asads, zoyas or rohans..

waiting for yournext move. ..

thanks for the pm

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deedeez

@deedeez

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#567

This is what i call a satisfying story :)..Like a nice chunk of dark chocolate..!!...You are a wonderful writer...👏

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teddyyy

@teddyyy

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#568

I apologize for not commenting for the last few updates :/ I returned from vacation and then the whole unpacking, school preparations and the load is crazy :/ But I've read each one and each one has left me in awe. This was a brilliant ending to a beautifully written story. Your writing skills amaze me and the ability you have to incorporate such clues and hints is truly dumbfounding. I sometimes go back and read the updates, trying to interpret stuff. Thank you so much for this beautiful piece of work and I cannot wait for "All The Right Moves"!