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rm23

@rm23

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#551

Well, its so sad that this had to end.

But I thoroughly enjoyed this, probably more than any other ff Ive read.

This was so brilliant, the high octane adventure and the romance.

You are a brilliant writer, and I cannot wait for the next one.

Infact, I cannot wait for all the stories you've got planned out!

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#552

THE RIGHT MOVES - sneek peek❤️

So is going to be sequel nice...now zoya and asad dont have
to look for the trouble outside... its just step in... to their house
great... now waiting for the next roller coaster ride👍🏼

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#553

Commented on your journal

with you in every move

I totally loved this ending and sneak peak to the next

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Awesome

Brilliant

Cute

Dazzling

Enchanting

Flawless

Great

Honorable

Incredible

Joyous

Kool

Lyrical

Melodic

Nice

Organized

Precious

Quotable

Remarkable

Shiny

Terrific

Unique

Vibrant

Wonderful

X- 10/10 (taking X as Roman numerical)

Youthful

Zoetic

can't think anything related to X... you tell me and I'll add it...

😉

Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 12 years ago

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#554

Perfect. Loved it.. Every good thing ends but what I am happy about is this isn't a end. Waiting for the sequel.. Continue soon!

Dee

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PalyGirl

@PalyGirl

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#555

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima
Commented on your journal
with you in every move

can't think anything related to X... you tell me and I'll add it...

😉

Thank you for commenting in my journal. You have to set up a LiveJournal account. Almost all entries will be friends-only, meaning that only the people I accept as friends will see them. This will allow me to keep my story private until I'm sure it's polished and ready to show off!

Thank you for all your support and lovely PM's. It's been so great chatting with you.

Also...wow - your list is great! You put so much time and thought into making it. It's wonderful! As for the letter "X" how about thinking of it as the Roman numeral 10? Then my story can be a perfect '10'! 😳

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#556

Originally posted by: PalyGirl

Thank you for commenting in my journal. You have to set up a LiveJournal account. Almost all entries will be friends-only, meaning that only the people I accept as friends will see them. This will allow me to keep my story private until I'm sure it's polished and ready to show off!

Thank you for all your support and lovely PM's. It's been so great chatting with you.

Also...wow - your list is great! You put so much time and thought into making it. It's wonderful! As for the letter "X" how about thinking of it as the Roman numeral 10? Then my story can be a perfect '10'! 😳

I commented as anonymous though

mentioned my name

X as 10 sounds perfect

added it😊

Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 12 years ago

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fee-fee

@fee-fee

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#557

Great ending I enjoyed it completely! And good question by the way: why does it happen to AsYa always? Maybe it has to do with someone called Z..a?

Excited for your next story please continue soon!

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Ayra Nuzhat

@-LazyLamhe-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#558

All good things come to an end!! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this FF!! It was just brilliant!!

Loved the 'last man' standing scene!! and also loved when Zoya said 'My Mr.Khan'...I wonder what Asad wanted to say when Dilshad and Najma disturbed them!!

Sneak Peek to the next one is so very interesting!! Looking forward to read yet another brilliant piece!!

p.s - Also commented on your journal!!