FF: Web of Lies - COMPLETED on p80

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#541

i cant believe this came to an end. :((

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#542

The Web of Lies.. - EPILOGUE

Nice convo between asya... the last man standing ..
so beautiful... they were so close... what romantic moment..
😆 Dilshad & Najma... walk in so cute.. but nice and lovely
move.. just love it..

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Mishti

@MayurnASYA

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#543

great ending

loved it though he dint utter the three magical words...😆

eagerly waiting for all the right moves

interesting sneak peek...

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Mehvish Fatima

@MissSparkling

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#544

Originally posted by: MayurnASYA
great ending
loved it though he dint utter the three magical words...😆

eagerly waiting for all the right moves
interesting sneak peek...

hehe yeah agree wit ya (he dint utter the three magical words...😆)

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Nitya Suresh

@TheAutumnFizz

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#545

I loved your story... I really thought Asad would say something nice but Dilshaad and Najma barged in...
Looking forward to the sequel.. I already love the sneak peek.. Pm me if possible.. Will send you a buddy request..

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fanraya

@fanraya

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#546

👏Wow, beautiful...I can not believe that this story has ended😕 You are truly an amazing writer, very talented. I loved the way you left Asad "I" superb, and a big hug to you for writing this awesome piece🤗 and yes eagerly waiting for your sequel, awesome preview. Please PM me if possible..

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CrazyBilli

@CrazyBilli

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#547

I can't believe it ended!! But you will start two new ones,that's a treat. ;)

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webuser7

@webuser7

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#548

Awesome ending! I read it a second time the last weekend!!

Ooh, what would Asad have said if the moment was not interrupted by Dilshad and Najma barging in?!

Look forward to the next one!! More potential of seeing a jealous Mr. Khan!!

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Ankahee

@Ankahee

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#549

Read the first 5 chapters. You are just brilliant. 👍🏼

I learned so much about hacking, I am assuming that you researched the technicalities of it all. It all makes sense, a bit too much. 😆

The attention to details, the writing the plotting all of it is really good. 👏

It's a pleasure to read this story, now off to read rest of the chapters. 😳

Edited by notagain - 11 years ago