FF: Web of Lies - COMPLETED on p80 - Page 58

thank you !! thank you ! thank you so much for such a wonderfull story !!
i'm relieved you are giving us sequels !!
i can't wait to read all the right moves !
you are really an awesome writer !
keep up the good work and all the best !!
love you dear :)
you are awesome :)

hey tis is amazing...

Hey I haven't been following your stories regularly as I just came across but I just loved your work...you are a very talented writer and you keep you readers always on the edge of their seats...I just loved this story...I never thought that I would love an asya mystery non romantic story so much but you proved me wrong and m glad you did...your work is really unique and I would love to read more...please pm me wen you start your new story 😊

That was amazing. I can't wait for the next story :D. Plz pm me when you start the next story.

Hey..

Wow, just freaking wow!!!! 👏

What a fantabolous delicious piece of a thriller!!! This is how the thrillers and mysteries are done. With just the right amount of emotion and technical details. Ahhh such a pleasure for the geek in me. You must know the technology really well to write like this or is it all just research based? I am completely blown by all the detailing of the networks, hacking, servers, webcams, parrot sites and what not, you even used the UPS 😆. Perfect.

You are a brilliant plotter, writer and a storyteller. This read was sheer adrenaline and the pleasure is all mine. Just Fantastic. I am glad I read this when you completed it. You made my weekend. 👍🏼

It's tough to write thrillers around a romantic pairs, yet the most of the Top TV shows series are based around this concept, Castle, Bones and so many more, AsYa would make such a perfect pair for such a series.

Originally posted by: Love-AsYa-4ever

this was just an amazing story! I remember when I first started reading it how addicted i got to it; I just couldn't stop reading and get any homework done 😉 ur knowledge of like everything just adds another depth to every scene and u plan out an pay attention to each detail in an incredible way! I love the way u write! so far ur stories are better than any book I've ever read! is writing something u do in ur free time or is it ur career? I wouldn't be surprised if u were a professional writer though! and I find it so awesome how ur prequels include a little hint of the sequel and vice versa. ur a brilliant writer and my most favorite one. I'm officially ur number one fan now! please continue the sequel soon! even if u ever think no one is interested (psht like that'll ever happen) then remember that I'm always here and I'll always read ur stories!

-Rupali

Rupali,

Writing is currently something I do for fun but would love to have it become my career. To that end, I've decided to write another original-character novel, also set in India, also featuring a lead character raised in the USA who comes back to India, meets an Indian native who doesn't approve of his actions, gets into misadventures and falls in love. I hope it will be fun and exciting and most of all -- published!

Wish me good luck!

Originally posted by: webuser7

Second comment from moi:

@underline: Of course! Here's what I noticed in Web of Lies:

All the Right Moves: Lot of mention: Dilshad/Najma/Zoya discussion about the cricketer and the event and tickets. Also, Zoya mentioned hotels and hacking into it. Asad heard part of the conversation and thought Zoya wants to leave. Mentioned again when Dilshad visits Zoya's office!

Ghost in the Machine: I remember commenting about it previously. When Asad goes berserk trying to find his file, Zoya checks her storage and retrieval system and finds an empty folder and finds it strange as the folder would be created only if a file existed. This pointed to some kind of internal traitor.

That's what I can remember top of my head!

Wow, you have been paying attention! There are a few more small clues but you're on the right track. Remember these for when the next story begins. Good catch!!

Originally posted by: soumyasingh

Hey..

I couldn't read the last few parts of this FF until now. They are awesome, and what a great way to end a story..

I loved it, and am really looking forward to read all the right moves, or anything you write in the future.

Also thank you for the PMs!!

Ohhh...another Calvin and Hobbes fan! I love your icon.

Originally posted by: soumyasingh

Hey..

I couldn't read the last few parts of this FF until now. They are awesome, and what a great way to end a story..

I loved it, and am really looking forward to read all the right moves, or anything you write in the future.

Also thank you for the PMs!!

Love your icon! I'm a big Calvin and Hobbes fan. Sam Waterstone was such a fun cartoonist. I miss his fun and sense of adventure.

SORRY - double-post!