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...SankaDevi...

@...SankaDevi...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Hey! Good to see you again writing on the forum! I loved ur stories! Do keep up the good work! And please PM me:)

Sammy:)

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Manell

@Manell

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Amazing, your writting is one-off!👏
I think that I can recognise your work whithout your name on it.
I will happily follow your story 😃

Good start👍🏼

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Nazz1992

@Nazz1992

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

You know what, I have been waiting for your FF for weeks now. You have an amazing talent, For you I will was the best FF that I have read about ASYA. Your strength is based on your storyline because it is very intriguing. I just love how you portray Asad and Zoya character, showing their different shades of personality.

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Andrea

@DreA

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

I remember For You I Will so I see how this one ties into that. You have amazing talent.

I loved all the technology stuff you put into it. Its suits Zoya to a "T".

Im glad you finally started this one. I'm eager to read all chapters. This part was excellent.

If you can PM me when you update would be greatly appreciated. If not I will just keep checking here.

Great Job! 😃

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jazz

@jazmeen

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

OMG

I simply loved it

The bestest concept ever

There was no jealousy but still I loved it.

I enjoyed every single word of it.

You made me realize how dark asads character is actually

If I have to spend one day with him I will b dead in half day band hlf day I will survive if its ksg lol

Poor zoya man I can feel her pain now.

Malak is a true friend indeed as long as he doesn't have any hidden purpose.

U know the way u wrote his entry I thought he is scared of asad lmao

The way he was looking at him after every line or gesture.

Man u have to update soon plzzz plzzz

Ur brilliant writer man

Muahhhzzz

And thank you for the pm love

ps sorry for mistakes typing from phone hate auto correct man

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xxDaydreameRxx

@xxDaydreameRxx

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Reserved (I am SO excited to read this - I came across For You I WIll some time ago and found it to be one of the best things Ive ever read.) Looking forward to this.

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OMG this was such an amazing start! Im already hooked! Before I even mention Asad and how much I enjoyed his jealousy let me just say that you do an amazing job pinning down all the details - the way you explained the hacking stuff, it really gives more credibility and a touch of realism to your work! Just curious, do you also have the same job as Zoya? 😆

And now to Asad, OMG he was actually a LION! LOL i couldn't help notice and laugh at the little words you used to describe his actions - GROWL, SNARL! 😆 Ahaha totally a lion and I can't explain how much I actually enjoy it!

Coming to Malak...I went from WOW caz of the way you described his persona - he seems so understanding! to a little irritated when I felt that he was judging Asad a little too fast but then back to liking him as I realized how much he cared for Zoya 😊 and then I got thoughtful thinking is Asad actually sucking the life out of Zoya!? 😲🤔 Not to mention, I was thoroughly impressed with the ease his boyish charm returned when Zoya called him. Asad has definitely got some tough competition! 😉

In short, I congratulate you for successfully creating such an impressive and multi-layered character in the first chapter itself! 👏

Oh, and did I mention I loved the firmness with which Asad accepted Mallak's challenge!?

Okay, Im sorry Ive been droning on for too long! Just try and update as soon as you can though! :)

No romance? Dude, this is the highest kind of romance there is..at least in my dictionary! 😃 The way you've described his protectiveness beats all! ;)

Edited by xxDaydreameRxx - 12 years ago

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teddyyy

@teddyyy

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

And the battles begin! I can't wait for the next update. Loving the plot, the tension and the possessiveness on both sides. I can live without romance lool, great job! (: