AsYa FF ~ Heartbeats [Thread #1] - Page 77

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey ...
Wowww !! The teaser is just lovely ... ;) :$
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Posted: 12 years ago
141 page

Yipee

New thread comming up now

Waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks so much! 🤗

New Thread coming soon!

Till then enjoy spamming! 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Thanks so much!🤗


New Thread coming soon!

Till then enjoy spamming!🤣



I don't want to

Cause new readers keep comming and they'll comment here

So wanna leave pages for them
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovelyyy tease...zoya kitna sarmaogee...hubby heh tumhara... Jaldiii update karooo
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
*Editing*

This work of yours is very special for me... because of obvious reasons 🤗

1) It's your first AsYa work

2) The story is dedicated to me



And we are finally on a new thread

You totally deserved deserved it



*To Be Edited More*

*Editing*

About the special shout out ❤️

I know I am crazy... but that is cause I love you

I know I am a spammer... but that is cause I love your works

I know I make you mad... but I also know that you love it





Ours is relation which started 5 years back and will never end
cause we are sisters forever


*Editing Done*

But this is just 1 of the 13 posts... 😉
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 8:-

read but will comment in a while

going to get fresh😊


Finally ready to comment...

Loved the Asad-Zoya-Nahma scene before breakfast



Breakfast scene was such a joy to read

Asad nodded and they moved out of the room. Zoya helped Dilshad in the kitchen while Asad sat on the dining table with Najma. Asad's eyes were fixed on his newly wedded wife. She looked ethereal in the baby pink suit.

"Ab teri dieting ka khayal main rakhungi subha! I'll make sure I empty all the chocolates from the fridge jot um late night chori chori khaati ho!", said Zoya and winked.

The way Asad eyed Zoya... Aww

Asad eyed Zoya and signalled her to come till the door.

"Jao Zoya.. Tumhare shauhar bula rahe hain!", teased Dilshad and retired to her room.

Zoya blushed and walked to the door with Asad.

Wow... The scene at the door... Superb


"Bye!", said Zoya.

"Itni jaldi bhi kya hai Mrs. Khan?", winked Asad and snaked his arms around her petite waist.



After Asad returned home... Loved the scenes

Zoya smiled and said, "Lijiye! Aapki black aur bitter coffee!"

"Aapne banayi hai to ab tak meethi ho gayi hogi!", replied Asad to which Zoya giggled.

"Aapne itne cheesy lines kahan se seekhe?", she asked furrowing her eyebrows.

"Wo kya hai na.. Jabse aap meri zindagi mein aayi hain.. Meri zindagi to gulzar ban gayi hai!", replied Asad.

"Mr. Khan! Stop it!", she said with a slight laugh.

"Aap has kyun rahi hain? Yehi dialogue agar aapka wo TV hero bole to achha hai.. Main bolun to aap has rahi hain?", sulked Asad.

"Aap to mere real life hero hai na!", she replied with a wide smile and a wink.

Zindagi Gulzar hai... Wow... Perfect



Then the kiss... Heaven


"Really!", she replied and pecked on his lips.

"Ye kya tha?", he asked scrunching his brows.

"Kiss!", she replied as a matter of fact-ly.

"Kiss ye thodi na hota hai!", he said.

"To phir?", she asked.

Asad swooped down to her lips and brushed his hard ones to her soft petal like ones. He sucked onto her lower lip. Soon she responded and started sucking onto his lips the same way he did. She parted her lips further to gasp for a breathe and Asad plunged his tongue into her mouth tasting her sweet corners. Soon the kiss turned into a passionate one. They kissed each other with all the love, the desire and the passion. Finally they broke apart panting for breathe. They rested their foreheads together.

"Ye hota hai kiss!", whipered Asad.

Update soon

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Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
mai aa gayi😆😆

Mahima..2 pages res????😲

Unres

Sholly sholly vely sholly about the late unres...I was busy reading your Arshi stuff and missed stalking this thread😆😆

Badawala, dil se wala, from the soul wala..special wala thank you for the special shout-out!!😆😆..I am also very glad I found a friend in Mahima and you!! ❤️
I take an oath that I shall try with utmost sincerity to help your darling kiddo sis Mahima in her spamming missions!!🤣

Ok let me talk about Heartbeats update now😉
Asad Zoya - Aankhon Hi Aankhon Mein Ishaara Ho Gaya, Baithe Baithe Jeene Ka Sahaara Ho Gaya
and did Asad, THE Asad Ahmed Khan show Zoya what a kiss was??? ...*FAINTS*

p.s - I see that you did not say after how many pages you will update and left it on your mood!!😡
Edited by -HoneyBunch- - 12 years ago

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