AsYa FF ~ Heartbeats [Thread #1]

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

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Posted: 12 years ago

Res

Editing :*

Well i know i reserved 2 posts cause i wanted to divide my comment in 2 parts...

This one is abt my view on the ss

Title- i just love it

Banner- freaking awesome

Prologue was picture perfect

Well explained

Asad's feelings and turmoil were so clear

Flashbacks made things more clear

Your work took to me to the Khan mansion

I know i am on the pm list already ❤️

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

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Posted: 12 years ago

Reserve :)

Editing this too

Story dedicated to me ❤️ i just love this feeling

Don't know y but this ss is really close to my heart and so are you

You are a really special person to me

For you i am always active here (a reason i haven't completely left i-f)

Me being first to comment on ur work means a lot to me

I am really excited abt this ss

Looking forward to it a lot

Luv you di

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ara_000

@ara_000

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Posted: 12 years ago

hayeee wat a prolouge...

i love it how u have showed asad's inner turmoil coz in d show we nvr got to see that properly...

love it how he was remembering each nd evry momnt of being together nd was enjoying it totally...

i love it how they talked to each other at dinning table...

loved it mrinu kamini 👏 👏 👏 👏

waiting for the story to start up now...

chappy one jaldi se update kar dena 😃 😃 😃 😃

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

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Posted: 12 years ago

hawww

Edited!

This haw was becoz main pehle res ni kar paiii😭😭

Anyways! I have seen this scene!

Oh yes I remember the sangam episode😃

Asad miya what's wrong with you? Thoda brainwa ka usek ar liya kro before accusing! :P :P

Let's see how this story unfolds 😳

Chalo a good one! Loved it <3

Now update next jaldi jaldi ^_^

P.S. Hayeee! The banner ❤️

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 12 years ago

This is just the prologue 😭 NEEEDD MOOOREE

LOVED IT! Your descriptions are goood and I love that you didn't make him snap at her when she offered to serve 😃

Can't wait to read what you come up with :)

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

Edited both my posts

P.s. i forgot to mention congrats on ur first AsYa work

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Fuj

@-ElmoFuj-

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Posted: 12 years ago

Oh i'm loving it! This sounds wonderful and i'm so in for it! I'm bookmarking this!

Continue soon, sweets ❤️

-Faiza

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blueflames

@blueflames

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

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hey mrinali,

me is here with feed back 😳

well i loved the portrayal of asad's inner turmoil, how he is guilty.

and i love the style of narration, no extra description, focused on the subject at hand.

looking forward for more.

do update soon.

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