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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: McdreamyKSG


AWWeee This FF is sooo CUTE!!!!❤️

How I wish Asad and Zoya get married and have such cute moments!!(But that's not gonna happen anytime soon...😭)

You are such a great writer!!...Reading this gave me the warm-fuzzies!❤️

I have favorite lines from the 9 part-

"Aap aise kyun dekh rahe hain mujhe?", she asked.

"Bas aise hi! Kyun? Apni biwi ko dekhne ki permission nahi hai kya mujhe?", he asked.

"Aapko permission ki zaroorat kyu hone lagi! Agar mera aap pe haq hai to aapka mujh par haq hai!", she replied sweetly shifting closer to him.

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"Asad! Thank you for coming into my life and completing me!", she confessed.

Asad smiled and kissed her forehead, then her eyes, nose, cheeks and a soft peck on her lips.

"You made my life colourful with your presence and I know that this rainbow would last forever!", he whispered huskily.

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This was adorable!!!❤️

Where can I find your other works???? Really want to read now!

Keep writing and stay AWESOME! 😊


OMG! Thank you so much for this beautiful comment! 🤗

I'm so happy to have a New Reader!

For my other works, here's my Index: Euphoria || Mrina's Hangout
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra

Res

MUst say one of da best update so far..


M in love wid few section of dis update



She felt the gaze of her husband, so she turned over to him. He was looking at her with all the love in the world.

"Aap aise kyun dekh rahe hain mujhe?", she asked.

"Bas aise hi! Kyun? Apni biwi ko dekhne ki permission nahi hai kya mujhe?", he asked.

"Aapko permission ki zaroorat kyu hone lagi! Agar mera aap pe haq hai to aapka mujh par haq hai!", she replied sweetly shifting closer to him.

Asad opened out his arms for her. She smiled and shifted into his arms.


LOVE DA WAY HW ASAD WS WAITING FR HR TO CUM CLOSE TO HER...FULL OF LOVE...😳



"Aap kahan jaana pasand karengi?", he asked as he pulled her closer into his arms.

"Kahan matlab? Hum kahin ja rahe hain kya?", she asked innocently.

She kept her head on his chest and wrapped her arms around him.

"Honeymoon par!", he replied.

She blushed and hid herself in his arms.

"Tell me Zoya!", he ordered.


HE CARE FR HR AT SO MUCH EXTENT..DAT IF HE KNW ABT HR WISHES BY GVNG HR ORDERS...HE CN DO IT...AWWW SO SWEET...😛


Asad smiled and his eyes welled up.

"Asad.. Don't cry!", said Zoya wiping away the drop of tear from his cheek.

"I sometimes wonder ke hum sab aise kyun nahi rah sakte.. Sab saath mein!", he wondered.

"Kuch sawaalon ka jawaab nahi hota Asad and if there are answers, those questions better remain unanswered!", replied Zoya and unwrapped the other gift that Ayaan brought for Zoya.


SUCH A EMOTIONAL PART OF UPDATE...HW MUCH ASAD WANA B HIS WHOLE FAMILY...HE CN ONLY OPEN UP HIS FLINGS WID HIS LADY LOVE...😊




OVerall such a brilliant update. ..👏


One of da best wrk frm ur side..


SRy to cmnt late dee.😭.m down wid fvr...ws abt to cmnt.wen u msg me..


Thanks baby! 🤗
Glad u loved the update! 😳
Get well soon! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oye hoe...honeymoon track coming... awesome.
n aww i loved d gifts ayaan gave
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was a beautiful update!!!
one of the most endearing updates!!!
Asad is simply so lovable!! wat a hubby n sooo many kissses! romantic!❤️
mona n raabart r so funny!!! cute!😉
lookinf forward to the honeymoon wala update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update😊😊
Loved it❤️
Waiting for the next update...continue soon
And thanks for the pm😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

"You made my life colourful with your presence and I know that this rainbow would last forever!", he whispered huskily.

"Asad? This doesn't seem like you! Kiski line churayi?", she asked with a giggle.

"Ummm.. My colleague Mrinalini was typing a story and I heard her say this line out loud!", he replied.


Wow Mina Di...you didnt told us You are Mr. Khan's Colleague...huh ??

Lovely Update ❤️ 👍🏼

Waiting for Asya's Honeymoon..!!

Edited by ---Shweta--- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-


Haha.. I'm sure if you love this.. you wud ADORE my next FF! 😉


I'm damn sure I will! Will be waiting 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
How did I miss reserving this time???😲 Shame on me!!😡
Loved this update...all of it...Now this is what I want to see in the show!!👍🏼

Is Asad's colleague Mrinalini also an Architect?😃
Edited by -HoneyBunch- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-

How did I miss reserving this time???😲 Shame on me!!😡

Loved this update...all of it...Now this is what I want to see in the show!!👍🏼

Is Asad's colleague Mrinalini also an Architect?😃


Koi baat nahi Ayra! 🤗

Glad u loved the update!

Nahi I'm not an architect! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ---Shweta---

"You made my life colourful with your presence and I know that this rainbow would last forever!", he whispered huskily.

"Asad? This doesn't seem like you! Kiski line churayi?", she asked with a giggle.

"Ummm.. My colleague Mrinalini was typing a story and I heard her say this line out loud!", he replied.


Wow Mina Di...you didnt told us You are Mr. Khan's Colleague...huh ??

Lovely Update ❤️ 👍🏼

Waiting for Asya's Honeymoon..!!


Hahaha! Just for the sake of it! 😆 Who wont like being his colleague!

Will update soon! 😉

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