SS:Asad Ahmed Khan's Bachelor Party - Chap 5 pg 42 - Page 14

Originally posted by: a.anu

update was soo good.loved it.can't wait for the next part.do cont.

thanx for the pm.

Originally posted by: bindasss

Lol loved the precap and the update!! Please continue soon! Its so interestinggg!!! :))))))

Originally posted by: -Prithi-

awesome update

Originally posted by: salekh1

OMG OMG

awesomeee writer you are

i love the story line, Please do incorporate a Jealous Asad, its ALWAYS the best to read about

Please do pm me if possible

But i absoltely love your writing style,an your story line 😆

Originally posted by: Khushi2187

Awesome Update...

Loved it alot..

Precap seemd interesting...

Continue soon..

Thnx for PM...

Mariam...

Originally posted by: mochhug

Res

This was beautiful! Sad, and it made me cringe once of twice, but really well written.

I absolutely loved the part where he's comforting her, and he realizes just HOW MUCH his words had hurt her. His redemption was really well versed for his usual woh actually 😆

AND I love that Ayaan was there to stop Asad from killing Akram (although he truly did deserve it)

Sorry I unresed after sooo long! But thaaank you for the PM and hope you update sooon 😃

Originally posted by: xxDaydreameRxx

Thank you! And to be honest, even I cringed a lot while writing it and debated a lot before finally using those harsh words but I felt if it was anything less, than Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan would not get enough incentive to finally open his mouth. Like you said, he usually gets stuck at woh actually 😆 And ahah, honestly Ayaan is like the problem-solver person for me in this SS, I end up using him for everything!

And its okay, your comment made up for it, its just that I nearly forgot to come back and check for it! Thankfully I did though :)

Originally posted by: akap

Update update update soon.

Originally posted by: mochhug

Yay! I'm glad you went back to read it 😃 And I also forgot yo mention that I LOVED Asad at then end with the "dimple wala smile" 😆 soo flipping adorable!

Originally posted by: xxDaydreameRxx

Aww thank you!! LOL could not help myself from adding in that line..😆 How I wish he would say that in the show someday!!!

BTW Im Ranjana. Thought Id introduce myself :)