SS:Asad Ahmed Khan's Bachelor Party - Chap 5 pg 42

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delena90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#151

This is fast becoming one of my favourite short stories!

You are a good writer. Can't wait for the next update!

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LyssaPie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#152

hahaha drunk Zoya is hilarious and omg her and Ayaan actually had an argument regarding Asda 🤣and before that Asad started shaking everyone's hand while Zoya was being introduced🤣

and awww she's making Asad promise things so cutely

Can't wait to read the next update

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DiVirgo

@DiVirgo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#153

Waw! So exciting and entertaining! Enjoyed it to the max! Gosh! I can't wait fir next chapter! Hurry plz! Loved it tks!

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teddyyy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#154

Satisfied?! THIS IS MORE THAN AMAZING lol. I was having a bad day and you just made it 1000 times better! I love Maburt so much, it's not funny. And Asad stuck between their fights. Zoya drunk is possibly the cutest thing in the world! Their cute moments killed me. They are too damn adorable man. And he kissed her hand! "Faints" Her conditions were so pure hearted and cute that it made me fall in love with Zoya all over again. This was definitely worth the wait. You had me laughing my arse off every second. Especially when she put her finger on her mouth with a serious expression! Killed me- the visuals haha!

I loved it and can't wait for the next update (:

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Payal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#155

Res

(I'm sorry..I'll be pretty late with this one..I've got these annoying admission tests to prepare for 😭)

Heyyy 🤗

I finally got a break. I missed you, man! 😆🤗

Coming to the update, just how in the world did you manage to write SUCH A cute chapter?! I mean I was smiling throughout!
Your chapter reminded me why I adore Zoya so much all over again! You made her irresistibly cute!

The way you write is so simple and spontaneous that I never have to re-read any part to grasp what it meant. Though I re-re-re-read the aww-worthy parts over and over again!😉

I honestly dont know what to say more cuz I think I've exhausted all the praises I know on your updates! But it still isn't enough. It'll never be enough cuz I cant ever deny that your writing is probably the best damn thing in the world! Other than AsYa, that is. 😉

And I don't think I'll ever get tired of saying this: you ALWAYS make Asad and Zoya stay SO true to their characters. It makes this SS a bigger success. And that is also what makes me crave to read more from you because I can never get enough of AsYa or your writing. 😊

Edited by Grenade - 12 years ago