Asya os . Love Eternal , part 4 , pg 24 (7 oct) up - Page 6

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loved it😊.waiting for your next update.
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Thank you thankyou so much for liking my work .
I had never expected such a great response .

Since all of u want happy ending so fine , ... I will give it a happy endding .



I was going to update yersterday midnight only , but due to error in net connection , it became late .
I hope u all like it .




Asad came in the hall . He saw his ammi and Nazma were setting the table . He instead of moving towards the table , move towards the guestroom . Sorry not guestroom , it was no more a guestroom . Asad had made it her room . It was his Zoya's room . No guest was allowed in that room .

Dilshad and Nazma saw Asad going towards the guestroom . They very well knew the pain through which Asad was going through . But they couldn't do anything to help him . Since last four years Asad lived a life of robot . He had certain routine set , which he followed most religiously . This was also part of his routine . Anybody would have confused Asad with a robot , if they saw his routine . It was only in that room where Asad showed his emotions . He used to laugh , smile , plead , shout and cry .

Asad flung the door open . He stood there and stared at the room . The room was painted with bright happy colours . There were photos of Zoya all over the walls . The air of the room was fresh and scented . The interiors of the room were outstanding . Asad had personally done all the work . After all it was his Zoya's room .

Asad looked in the room . There was no laughter in the room , no stupid shaayari's to irritate him .
Asad regretted his lines "Aap hum sabko pareshaan karne ke liye hamesha ke liye yahi rehne waali hai ."
He saw the sight before his eyes , and once again the old memories returned to him .

**flashback**

Asad and Tanveer went to the shop from where Tanveer had to buy the materials . Tanveer bought a lot of materials , while Asad was full time busy on his mobile discussing his business .

He was very angry with himself . He knew he had once again hurt Zoya . Already Zoya's mood was not good . Inspite of his harsh words she had talked to him . She had asked a small thing with him . And he couldn't even give it to her . He was super pissed of with himself . He had decided that today he would say her sorry , and would try tell her his feelings.


This thought calmed him to some extent .

"Jammy , hum uss side girls section mein jaa rahe hain . Aap aayenge humaarey saath ?"
Asad was already angry . He thought it would be better if he didn't accompanied her . Obviously in such well protected building , it was safe for Tanu to go alone in the girls section .
"Nahi Tanu . Main yahi rukta hoon . Tum apna kaam jaldi kar ke aao . "
"Jaisa aap chaahey Jammy . Hum jaatey hain "

It had been ten minutes since Tanu had went . Asad was getting restless . He was thinking about Zoya , when something brought him out of his trance . It was his phone ringing . Before he could take the call , the call ended . It was Zoya's call .

Asad was confused . Why would Zoya call him . He tried to call her back , but her cell was switched off . Asad couldn't understand the situation . He wasn't getting positive feeling about what also was happening . His heart told him that something was wrong .
Suddenly he felt as if Zoya had called him . His heart was wishing to see Zoya right at the moment . He closed his eyes .pictures from Mangapur incident started playing before his eyes . He could see Zoya's lifeless body . His full body shivered due to fear . Why was he getting that feeling ?

Once again his trance was broken by the ringing phone . But this time , it wasn't his phone but Tanu's phone was ringing . She had left her purse and mobile there only . He didn't wanted to attend the call. But then it flashed
"Private number calling"

Asad thought of receiving the call . Maybe it was related to her husband . Deep down in his heart he was getting negative feelings , that what if Zoya was right . What if these feelings were trying to tell him something . Asad dreaded to pick up the call .

He picked up the call . Before he could say anything , a male voice from the other side said
"Mubaarak ho Tanveer bi . Aapka kaam aaj ho hi gaya . Humne aaj uss ladki ka kaam tamaam kar diya . Humaarey rupyein humey sahi samay par mil jaana chahiye "
Asad couldn't respond . His brain was blocked . He had turned into stone . Before he could speak anything , he heard again .
"Kya hua Tanveer bi . Khushi ke maare gungi ho gayi . Yeh lo tumko thhoda aur khush kar dete hain . Yeh suno apney dushman ki aakhri awaaz "

The next thing which Asad heard , till date that voice haunted him in kis dreams .

He heard a bullet shot and then came a loud dreadful shreik
ASSSAAADDD...
And then one more bullet shot
And again came a voice ASADDd...
It was very slow as compared to the first one .

Asad's heart stopped beating . He couldn't breath . He felt as if anybody had hold his neck tight , and was preventing him from breathing . He was dying hundred deaths in each single second .

Asad couldn't get anything . Zoya's shriek was haunting him . Only the thought that something must have happened to Zoya , was driving him crazy . What if something must have happened to Zoya . He thought to confront Tanveer . But suddenly the realisation dawnad on him that while he was wasting time in arguments of what to do , Zoya must be fighting for her life . He decided to confront that lady afterwards .

Next moment Asad was recklessly driving his car , breaking all the traffic rules , speeding his car to the boutique . His car maximum speed was not good enough for him .

Asad's feelings that time can not be described in words . His world was crashing down . But no he couldn't fall weak . He had to bring Zoya back .

He stopped the car at the boutique . It was more like a deserted place . The street eas silent and there was no sign of Zoya anywhere . He saw there was a forest area at the other side of thew area .
He ran in the forest and shouted like a mad man

ZOYAAA...
ZOYAAA...
ZOYAAA...

He called her several times , there wasn't any clue of Zoya . He had came half way . And then he saw her ipad lying . He quickly picked it up . The pink ipad had turned to red due to blood . It was obviously his Zoya's blood .

He called her name several times . And then he saw his life lying at the side of abig tree . The sight in front of his eyes was dreadful . It was worst than a nightmare . She was shot two times . One of the bullet was shot in her stomach , and other in her shoulder . There were numerous wounds as deep as trenches on her head . Her clothes had turned into read . Her beautiful face had thousands of cuts . He had never in his worst nightmare thought that he would ever see Zoya in such a condition .


He ran to her . She was unconscious or may be dea... no she couldn't leave Asad . Asad sat down , his face was flooded with tears . He took her in his arms and screamed ZOYAAA...

Asad laid her down on his legs . He wiped the blood from her face . He cupped Zoya's face and cried
"Get up Zoya , please get up . Please get up . Uthh jaao Zoya please . Please . You can't do this to me . You just can't " he shouted .

"Zoya tumne kaha thha ki tum mujhey chhor ke nahi jaaogi . Tum yehi rahogi , mujhe pareshaan karne ke liye . Tum apni baat se pichhe nahi hat sakti Zoya . Please uthh jaao . Main tumhey umr bhar jhelney ke liye taiyaar hoon Zoya . Uthh jaao please . Tum mujhe apni galtiyon ki aisi sazaa nahi de sakti .
Wake up dammit" he yelled with all his power .
He checked her breath , but couldn't feel anything .

He hugged Zoya tightly , as she was his life . He couldn't let his life go away so easily . He cried for very long which appeared like eternity . And then
Then he felt as if Zoya breathed out some air in his ears . He immediately broke the hug and gently holded her in his hands . She was breathing ,yes he could feel it . And then he saw her lips moving .

"A...Asad"
He heard her faint voice . His heart started beating again . Fresh set of tears made their way through his eyes .
"Zoya . Tum , tum thhik ho . Main tumhe kuchh nahi honey dunga . I promise , tum bilkul thhik ho jaayegi ".
Zoya tried to smile , but she couldn't . Even a small movement was causing her lot of pain .
"Mr ...Mr Khan Tanveer ."
Asad's blood boiled on listening her name .
"We can talk about that later Zoya , abhi aapko hospital le jaana jaada zaroori hai . " saying this he tried to pick her up , but she stopped him .
"Rukiye Mr K...khan . Uska koi faayda nahi par "
"Shut up Zoya . Hum abhi ke abhi hospital jaayenge . Tumhe kuchh nahi hoga . Samjhi tum ."

Asad picked up Zoya very carefully in his arms . He sarted moving towrds the street . They were very far from the street . Asad tried to increase his speed . But Zoya's scream stopped him . He stopped to look at her . Zoya was screaming due to immense pain . Due to Asad's fast speed , her body was swinging to and fro , which was causing her pain .

"Dh...dheere chaliye Mr Khan . Dard ho... raha hai."
Asad closed his eyes due to pain .He couldn't see Zoya in pain . His heart was ripped apart ,when he listened "dard ho raha hai " . She was in pain , and only because of him . This fact was killing . He wished he nust have believed Zoya . He must have accompanied her today .

"Mr Kh..khan"
Zoya's sweet voice brought him back to the earth .
He holded her tightly and very close to his body , so that his walking doesn't hurts her .

Asad started walking once again , but this time slowly so that it doesn't causes her more pain .

"Mr khan . Ta...Tanveer ne yeh hamla karwaya..."

Once Asad stopped after listening to her , but again started walking .

"M...main jaanti hoon a...aap mera vishwaas nahi karenge par maine apne kaano se suna . Unloge ne tanveer k...ko phone karne ke baad mujhe goli maari ." Said Zoya in a very slow tone .

The words "aap mera vishwaas nahi karenge" once again ripped his herat . Those words acted as daggers on his heart . He never believed her , and this was the result of his mistrust on Zoya .
He didn't stoped walking . He didn't wanted to talk about that murderer at that instant . He knew that if he talked about her , either he would lose his temper or he would be broken due to guilt . And at that time , he didn't wanted either of the cases to come true . He just wanted to reach hospital .

Zoya met with silence . She thought Asad was again doubting her .
"Mera paas saboot nahi hain , par main jhoot nahi bol rahi hoon ."

"Main jaantaa hoon . Mujhe aap par poora bharosa hain . Aur ab aap chup rahengi ."
"Par"
"Agar aapko meri thhodi bhi parwaah hain toh ab aap shaant rahengi ."

Rest of the way they were silent . As soon as Asad reached the street , he carefully placed Zoya at the back seat . By allah's meharbaani , he found one of his employees there , and asked him to help .

Asad's employee drived the car while Asad was sitting at the back seat wiyh Zoya in his arms .

He saw that Zoya eyes were closing . She was again becoming unconscious .
Asad yelled "DRIVE FAST".

"Zoya . Apni aakhein band maat honey do . Please jagi raho . "

Zoya opened her eyes and spoke
"Mr Khan , a...a.aap naa toh mujhe...baat karne de rahe hain , naa sone de rahe h...hain ".
"Aap bol sakti hai but please zyaada mat bolieyega "
"Thank you " said Zoya and tried to give him a big dimpled smile .

Asad saw that Zoya had already lost her more than half blood and blood was still not stoping .
He pulled out his handkerchief . And Zoya's earring fell from Asad's pocket on the seat .
( As Asad wasn't talking to Zoya in the morning , so he had kept her earring in his pocket . He had thought that in the name of returning her earring , he would again start talking to her . But he forgot to return it during breakfast .)

Zoya saw her earring fall from Asad's pocket .
Asad put the handkerchief on her stomach , on the bullet shot , as blood was continously oozing out , and he pressed it so that the blood stops . Zoya screamed
"Aaahhh"
"Dheere Mr Khan " she shouted .
Asad immediately stoped pressing the wound .

Asad looked in Zoya's eyes . The pain clearly visible in her eyes . It was unbearable fo Asad to see such pain in her eyes . He was on the verge of breaking down .

Tears continuosly flowed from his eyes .
"I am sorry . I am sorry Zoya . Sorry for everything . Main tumhe kuchh nahi honey dunga . Kuchh bhi nahi . Tum mujhey jo bhi sazaa dogi mujhe manzoor hoga , par tum mujhe chhad ke kahi nahi jaaogi . Samjhi . Do din mein humaara nikaah hai . "

Zoya saw Asad crying like a child . She had never seen him so helpless , not even the day his ammi had slapped him . She couldn't stand the sight of Asad in such a condition .

"Haww... Mr Khan , a...aap toh ladkiyon ke jaise rotey hain . Waisey aap rotey waqt bhi bare cute lagtey hain . Mr. Chor Ahmed Khan "

Asad was confused at her comment .
"Chor ???"
"Tab kya nahi toh . Aap m..meri earring chura k...ke apne paas rakhey huye thhey . Agar itna hi r...romantic aur f...filmy hona thha toh bataa dete , main a...aapko apni ek paayal de deti . Woh jyaada romantic lagta . " Once again Zoya tried to give him a big dimpled smile .

Asad also smiled at her comment .
But may be allah didn't liked to see him smile . Asad's body went stiff as he noticed that Zoya was not able to breath . Her breath was very erratic and uneven .
"DRIVE FAST ..."

"Kya hua Zoya ? "
Zoya stared in his eyes . She knew that he loved him . But she didn't knew if she had time to wait for his confession . She decided to pour her heart out .

"A..a...asad , mujhey aapko ek aakhri baat bataani hai ."said Zoya looking inhis eyes .
Asad couldn't bear the word 'aakhri' from her mouth .

"Shut up Zoya . Koi aakhri baat nahi kehni hai aapko , aapke thhik honey ke baad hum bahut saari baatein karenge . Abhi aap shaant ho jaaiyen."

"Yeh baat aapko bataaye bina main chain se mar.."

"Shut up . Just shut up Zoya . Khabardaar jo aainda se aisi behuda baatein ki toh ." Asad yelled at her .
He had not thought to shout at her , but her rubbish talks had forced him to shout .

After one minute of silence , Zoya broke the silence .
"Main aapse beintehaan mohabbat karti hoon . I love you Asad . I l...love u"
And zoya's eyes closed .


Phew ... finally completed . It has taken very long to write guys .
I had thought that I will complete flashback in this part , but itna hi likhne mein meri haalat kharaab ho gai . So flashback will be completed in other update .

Next update coming soon , but not tomorrow . May be day after tomorrow ...

Do hit the like button and comment . They encourage me to write . Pls do comment ...
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Edited by cutejerry - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Updated ... hope u like it ...
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Originally posted by: princessradhika

hey..that was so good..i loved it..pls do update soon..eager to know what happened to zoya..and pls haan give us a happy ending,,cause as much as i want to punish asad for his insensitivity, i just can't bear the thought of then being apart...pls pls do update fast..will wait



Same here . I too want to asad to suffer but don't want to separate them
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Please it's not what I think it is 😭 Or is it just to scare us? OMG I'm soo worried and curious all at the same time... Please continue sooon!
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Originally posted by: mochhug

Please it's not what I think it is😭Or is it just to scare us? OMG I'm soo worried and curious all at the same time... Please continue sooon!



U have to wait till next update to find it out ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awe please don't make it a sad ending
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome plzzz do continue soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey that was amazing
Plz dont kill her
N update sooon both parts wer amazing
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its so touching...

was reading wid heavy heart..

nw i really want happy ending

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