Asya os . Love Eternal , part 4 , pg 24 (7 oct) up

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ALISHA ZEN

@LuvUAsYa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

NOOO!! NOOO!!

NOOO!!! NOOO!!

NOOO!!!!

NAHHIII!!!!!

ye nahiii ho sakta !! nahiii!!! nooo u caaant stop it here !!!

please nooo!!

please continue !!! now !!! now !!! now!!! r8 now!!! pleeeaseee!!! 4 MY PUPPPY FACE!!

YAAHOOO!! tanu kamini ka sach out !! yeaaah!! man !!! only I knw hoooww eagerly I waited to read ths part!!

tnnxxx a ton 4 updating it !! love u !!! muaaahhh!!

ohhh man couldn't it b like ths in d showww??

I reallly love u 4 ritng ths!!!

haaayyeee wooowww mangalpuria asad back!!! wooowww!!

woooww!!

OMG !! wts gonnna happen nxt!! please updt it na!!! 😳

I ws sooo pisssed off watching yesterday's epi n I cant really xpresss in word hooow happpy im reading ur story!!! tnx dea!! tnx aloot!!

VERYYY NICELLYY RITTEN DEA WELLL DONE!!!

tnxxx 4 d PM!!

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Sabina

@Guguminti

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Happy ending please can't tolerate more sadness

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Linsie

@Linsie

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you

Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you

Thank you Thank you

Thank you for the great update...

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princee

@princeegoyal

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

superb yr...full of emotions tha...ahh..asad...mst feels gulity...looking at her like this...awesome update dear...& thnks 4 d pm...continue & pm me too next time...

next part mein billi ko thpaaakkk..ek slap marna ...hate her...

pari

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aashiqua

@aashiqua

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

oh plz dnt separate dem..even though i wanna hit d current asad..i cnt bear der separatn..pm me plz..

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

the only reason i'm not crying buckets, just glasses, is because you said it will be a happy ending

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Thanks for PM...😊

GOD...if it was any long I would have started crying out loud...sobbing and all...That was BEAUTIFUL...Asad crying feeling her pain and feeling guilty...and Zoya...ahh... that was written beautifuly...hope you will up-date soon... 😃

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Samihah

@samihah

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

it was really good pls continue soon👏

poor zoya 😭

pls pm me when u update

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princessradhika

@princessradhika

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

hey..that was totaly heart wrenching update yaar..i am really not in a situation to write more about it now..it was so painful that nothing is coming in my mind right now..sad zoya's convo was the best thing in the whole update...the way u showed us asad's pain and his strong will not to break in order to save zoya was commendable..and the last outburst definately made everyone cry for sure..do update soon yaar cause monday is my result, i m nervous if i would be able to read it then..and a big thank u for this beautiful piece of writing & thanx for the pm...