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Barayah

@irock321

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Loved it! Perfect! You gotta continue this ...incomplete hai yaaar!! xD loll

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Alina

@I-Luv-Rashi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Amazing Os,Loved Zoya throughout in it and yup you are and excellent writer.😳👏

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Ishq-Dua

@Ishq-Dua

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

lovely

but poor Asad broke my heart

beautifully written

you rock

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Asya0910

@Asya0910

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

that was wonderful pls continue

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farah

@Endless-LOvE

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

finLily man!!!
at least yahan pe toh uane confess kiya...
it's awesome man..
totally loved it

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rithika2012

@rithika2012

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

soumya loved it yaar.. it was too good..

dear pls update the one on arvi also u left it days before.. waiting for it...

Edited by rithika2012 - 12 years ago

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anushka

@anushka2112

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Hey it's nice ...kabhi n kabhi QH m bhi aisa hoga I guess where zoya will try to hide her identity in fear of asad's hate ...but I want you to continue bcoz I want Happy ending ...ab ise TS banao ...okay

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Surish

@Surish

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

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Laila Banu

@Laila2009

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

First and foremost. Seriously, this looks like it has been written in Ebonics - a dialect used by black people in the US. The language is not an acceptable form of English and therefore impossible to read. In future to you and other writers, write in complete sentences - and English or Urdu, but not like this.