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This OS solely dedicate to b'day gurl Surbhi & my bestie Milli!

Zoya is doing some work in her room, whn her phone rang. 'Rabbert' flashing on the screen. She hurriedly pick it up


'Hey, Rabbert! Aftr a long tym han'


'Ya, i ws a little busy Mona. Anywys tell hw r u & Bhaijaan?? Did he propose u??'


'Propose! & ur Bhaijaan dats 2 me!! Are u dreaming in day.. Oh yes, in case of his so called Tannu, its different. U know wat Rabbart, dat man has seriously sm mental problem. Yes ur Bhaijaan z a mental paitent. Sunday ko Love Monday ko nai Tuesday ko totally different. His mood swings faster than of a pregnent woman!'


'(lauging a bit) And u knw wht, Bhaijaan z right abt u dat U r A Biggest Dramebazz'


'Humph, Rabbart u r making fun of me dat to for u'r emotionaly challenged Bhaijaan. Dats unfair unfair unfair'


'K, meri maa Sorry. Nw calm down. Actually Mona, i called u 4 a reason'


'Reason? Wht reason?'


'Mona, remembered i call u once & there ws a tune playing from u'r side & i asked wht z dis? Then u told me dat its a old tune & vry close to u'r heart...'


'Ya ya i remember. Bt y r u asking??(so much curious)'


'Actually Mona i found de same tune 4m Humaria's music box dis morning. So i thought 2 inform u.'


Zoya z completely shocked by hearing this.


'Music box??!!


'Ya dat 1, her father gifted her on our engagement. K Mona Ammi z calling me. See u later. Over & out'


'Over...&...out'


Zoya's POV


Allha miyan whts wrong wid me? Hw cn dis possible? Hw cn Humeria hv the sm music box dat i hv? Dis z a very old product & m sure nw dis type of things r nt available in market. Nt atleast wid dis tune... So how can Humaire's dad got dis? Is he...? No no, i thnk My dad hv sm relationship wid Siddques or dat z my own family?? Oh Allha miyan my head is spining. Asad... Yes I hv 2 tell Asad abt dis, He may cn help me.


Bt bfr she went out, suddenly remember smthng


***FLASHBACK***


Zoya: Mr. Khan its your only brother's engagement. Hw can u miss dat Mr. Khan??


Asad: Ms. Farooki plz stop. I can tollarate evrythng bt nt Sidiques at all, specialy nt dat Gaffur Sidique & Razia Sidique. I Hate Them Zoya... Coz of them we lost evrythng. I HATE THEM'


Flash back ends


Zoya sat on the coach by holding her head wid her hand.


'Allah miyan, wht z dis happening? If i hv sm connections with Siddques...Then... Asad will hate me. No i cant take his hatrate... I cnt... I may stay away 4m him bt cnt see the love 4 me in his eyes replaced by hate... No i cnt... I hv 2 leave him... Yes i hv 2!


Asad z out side of Zoya's room. He made up his mind dat he'll confess dis time no matter what no matter how. He cleared his throad fix his hair & collar. He began to knock bt jst bfr the door flew upon & Zoya steped out.


She looks a bit sattered bt control herself nd try to walk of. But Asad caught her hand 4m bck. She looks a bit shocked. Bt controll her self how evr.


'Yes, Mr. Khan'


'Woh Ms. Farooki... Actually... Woh...'


Zoya sighed & began to walk of. Asad closed his eyes & shouted..


'Zoya I Love You'


Zoya froze on the spot. Tears r streaming down. She turned to see culprit. There he z standing with closed eyes.


He slowly open his eyes & began to step towards of his lady love. He hold her hands & gv a slight pick on it.'


'Zoya, i always think the gurl whom i'll marry will come into my life as a flew of wind. Bt then u cm into my life, like a strom. U destryoed my peace, my lifestyle, my habbitual habbits. Bt along wid dis u also destryoe the darkness of my life my u'r shine. I don't knw whn i began to like you mean you LOVE YOU. Zoya, u'r Jahanpana z hopelessly madly in love wid u. So Ms. Zoya Farooki will u do honour by make u'r self Mrs. Zoya Asad Ahemad Khan.
Will you marry me?'


He did it. He finaly confessed his heart to me. She z overwhelmed. Her heart screamed 'Yes'


'NO'


'WHATTT?'


'I said No Mr. Khan. I dont love you & i cnt marry u. Please leave my hand.'


'Zoya plz no... Plz dont say no. I cnt take it. I'll wait... I'll wait 4 eternity. Bt plz dont say no... Plz'


He z crying. His tears affects her a lot. Bt she cnt tk his hate also. She throw his hand & began to run away. Bt Asad tk a quick shortcut nd catch her.


He z holding her arms tightly. His eyes r burning wid anger & irritation. Bt whn he looked into her eyes, he calm down. He can see pain, fear & Love clearly. Love 4 him. He knew she loves him bt y she z so admant? Y she denaing?


Suprising her He lifted her nd take her out to a quite place, whr he can hv sm lone & quite tym wid her. Whr will able to short out all her fears & insicurites. He make a mental nota to mk her accept him, his love & her own love to him... Very Soon...
[P]Le Milli, likhdiya tera OS. Aab mar mere ko jutte 🤣


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MILII_BAKSHI thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
RES
UNRES

JAAN FINALLY TUNE LIKH DIYA,,THANK GOD!!
WARNA ME SACH ME LAPPY PE SO JATI😆

os acha hai..just like the way we wanted..umah or teri writing..it just nailed thoughts..
acha laga padhkar...ab bol ise continue karne ke bare me kya khyaal hai😆

Edited by MILII_BAKSHI - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved this! Please continue it! Does Zoya tell him? Do they fight? Please continue! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It jst a OS yr... I dont want to continue it. Btw if i continue den story will tk another way dat i dont want. Hope i don't dissapoint u Milli
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: AsyaManic

It jst a OS yr... I dont want to continue it. Btw if i continue den story will tk another way dat i dont want. Hope i don't dissapoint u Milli

meri dialogue mujh pe he😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res
Uhres

Nice os . Pls. Continue ... 😛
Edited by cutejerry - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MILII_BAKSHI

meri dialogue mujh pe he😆


acha thik hai kardungi 2nd part post. Kush?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: AsyaManic


acha thik hai kardungi 2nd part post. Kush?

HE HAHAHHA...BHAKASUR WALI KHUSH HASSI😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I love it please continue it soon and pm me :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i guess no juttaa's...kyun milli...bohat acha likha hai yr..really nice...i want u to continue it..let c..hw she explain everything to him..& he will understand it...continue it yr..& pm me too..

pari

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