Allah Miyan 'Shower' ke neeche ? - An OS

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So this OS goes out to Cup-of-Chai aka Sadia as her b'day gift 😆 ...

I hope u like it Sadia 😃






'Ammi please ' Asad spoke looking down

'Please vlease nahi Asad. Mein 2 din se tumhe keh rahi hun Zoya se apne dil ki baat kehne k liye ..lekin look at u ..abhi tak ek lafz nahi kaha ' Dilshad spoke angrily

'Aisi baat nai hai ammi .. Meine koshish ki thi'

'Tou wo koshish kaafi nahi thi asad'

'Ammi ye aap kaisi baatein kar rahi hain'

'Baat ab tumhe karni hai asad .. Aur meri suno agar aaj ..nahi agar abhi tumne apne dil ki baat Zoya ko nahi batayi tou Nikah Cancel'

'Kya ??!!! ' Asad looked at Dilshad shocked

Dilshad tried controlling her smile 'haan Asad and I'm very serious . Agar next 1 hour mein zoya mere paas khush hote huye nai aayi tou bas tum soch lena '

Dilshad went away smiling leaving a stunned and confused Asad.

'Ya Allah ! Ammi ne kaisi musibat mein daal diya . Abi tou mein prepared bhi nahi hun' Asad scratched his temple.

He paced back and forth in his room ..

'Agar ammi ne nikah cancel kardiya tou?'

'Nahi nahi . Asad u can do this . Just 3 simple words '

'But Miss Farooqui is not simple '

'Jo bhi ho she's just a girl and u can do it . Be a man asad'

After thinking for few more minutes . Asad finally gathered the courage and stood up 'its time'

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'Miss Farooqui' Asad knocked her door

When suddenly Tanveer saw him .

'Uff ye asad bhi na . Ab Zoya ke room mein kya karne jaa rahe hain. Kahin ye apne dil ki baat?'

She got worried and went to Asad.

'Arre Jamy aap yahan ? Kuch kaam tha Zoya se?'

'Uhh-woo tannu haan .. Wo shadi...shadi ke baare mein baat karni thi'

'Kya baat Jammy?' Tanveer asked worried

When suddenly they heard a faint voice ' u can come in Mr Khan'

'Acha Tannu mein tumhe baad mein batata hun... But tum mera ek kaam karogi?'

'Ofcourse Jammy ..aapke liye kuch bhi'

'Just make sure no one comes inside Zoya's room. Mujhe bahut imp baat karni hai . Tou please koi disturb na kare ' Asad spoke and went inside

Tanveer's face fell completely ..it seemed like someone just slapped her hard .. She went away from there trying to come up wid a plan.

Asad entered Zoya's room but she was no where to be seen ..

'Miss Farooqui? Aap kahan hain?'

'Washroom mein Mr Khan'

'Ya Allah ! Ye ladki pagal hai kya? ' Asad thought

'Aap andar aasakte hain Mr Khan'

'Ye sach mein Pagal hai'

'Nahi Miss Farooqui I'll wait outside'

'Arre mr Khan aap aasakte hain'

'Has she lost it? Itni besharmi?' Asad was now gettin annoyed

'Mr Khan u can come. I'm fixing the shower ' Zoya spoke

'Ohhh!!!!' Asad felt relieved

'Pagal nahi hai' he smiled to himself

He carefully entered the washroom and saw his Zoya working on fixing the shower like a James Bond.

'Miss Farooqui ye aap kyun kar rahi hain? U should have told me ..I would have sent someone'

'Mr Khan aap tou mujhe jaante hain ... Duniya mein aisa koi kaam nahi hai jo Zoya Farooqui na kar sake ...aur ye tou ek mamuli Shower hai' Zoya smiled broadly .

Asad couldn't help but smile annoyingly at her cute statements.

'Kya hua Mr Khan? Aapko kya kaam tha?' Zoya asked

asad thought for a while 'asad 1 hour' his ammi's voice was drumming in his head.

'Woo... Miss Farooqui mujhe aapse...important baat karni hai'

'Allah Miyan! Ab ye break up karne washroom tak aagaye . Itna sa wait nahi kar sakte the' Zoya rolled her eyes .

'Yes Mr Khan tell me ' Zoya spoke widout facing Asad. There was no way she was going to face him , while he spoke those horrible words...

'Now is the time Asad. Just say it ...be a man' his inner voice motivated him.

Asad slowly stepped near Zoya ...

Zoya could inhale his dark minty Fragrance .

The moment she turned , she stood face to face wid Mr Khan.

The look in his eyes ...it was something different ... It made her heart beat faster ...
But she knew he's here to end it . She closed her eyes to gain some strength , then opened them again.

'Kahiye Mr Khan ... Kya kehna hai aapko?'

Asad stepped a little more closer to Zoya.

'Ya Allah ..ye itne paas kyun aarahe hain' Zoya thought as his closeness was having uncontrollable effects on her.

But by now Asad was in 'Make Zoya urs' mode .. There was no way he was backing out now. Her childlike eyes screaming for love , was pulling him more towards her ...

As he stared deep into her eyes ...
'Miss...Zoyaa !!' Asad spoke huskily

Zoya looked at him shocked ...

'Mein aapse...'

Suddenly his phone rang ...snapping them both out of their trance.

He checked his phone 'unknown number ?' He cut the call and looked back at Zoya.

He closed his eyes , and took a deep breath ...

'Zoya...mein jaanta hun aap aur mein ek dusre se bahut different hain..like poles apart.'

'Ya Allahhh! I know what he'l say now ' Zoya felt something break inside her.

'Lekin...'

And his phone rang again. 'Unknown number' ..asad now got irritated ... 'Nothing is going to distract me now' and he switched off the phone.

here Tanveer who was constantly calling him to disturb , threw the phone away ... 'Dekh lungi mein ' she spoke wid rage in her eyes.

'Mr Khan .. Its okay ..mein samajhti hun' Zoya spoke finally

'Samajhti hun?' Asad thought

'Miss Farooqui aap jaanti hain?'

'Yes Mr Khan' Zoya closed her eyes .

Opening again she said ' I understand '
'Asad what type of a man u are , u can't even tell her urself ?' Asad thought

'But Zoya I need to tell u this myself' Asad spoke softly

'Allah miyan ! Meine bola I know ..phir bi Mr Khan is so adamant . Khud mera dil todna chahte hain' Zoya thought

'Okay Mr Khan. Go ahead' she spoke lowering her gaze ..

Suddenly Zoya felt something warm around her waist .. She looked and was shocked to see Mr Khan holding her waist. Asad pulled her closer to him...

Zoya's heart skipped a beat as she saw intensity in his eyes ... 'How can someone break up wid so much of intensity?'

Asad held Zoya's waist wid one hand and her palm wid his other free hand ..

'Zoya' he whispered in her ear ..

Zoya could feel herself gettin weak under his embrace ... 'This is going to be tough'

'I ...'

And suddenly they felt getting drenched in water .. They both looked up and saw water pouring out of the shower mercilessly.

'I'll just closee...' Zoya was about to turn when Asad pulled her back .

'Let me complete Zoya ...just let me complete'

'Allah Miyan shower ke neeche bhi Mr Khan apni baat karna chahte hain. Itni desperation break up ke liye'

Asad was losing his control more and more as the site before him was mesmerizing. The water droplets kissing Zoya all over were making him insane.

He squeezed her hand making her look into his eyes...
As Zoya looked into his eyes , she was completely lost ... It seemed that the world around them had stopped and it was just both of them embraced together under the shower.

Asad leaned near Zoya's ear ...

Closing his eyes

He spoke

'I love u Zoya'

Zoya became Numb as she heard those magical words that too from Mr khan's mouth.

'Am I dreaming ???' She spoke closing her eyes.

As she opened them after few seconds she found herself face to face wid Asad. 'No its real'

'Aapka jawaab jo bhi ho ... mujhe aaj aapse apne dil ki baat bolni hee thi'

And wid that Asad stepped back and turned.. Ready to leave.

He was walking away ...

When he heard

'I love u too ...Asad'

Hearing that .. He just closed his eyes ...as a soft smile played on his lips.

He turned back and Saw Zoya completely drenched. But the tears in her eyes didn't go unnoticed from him.

In a reflex Asad went and hugged her tightly. As tight as he could.. He just crushed his body against her's into the most passionate hug ever .. As there wet bodies collided ..both of them felt a current , a very very intense current.

'I love u Zoya' Asad spoke hugging her more tightly

Zoya couldn't believe all this was happening for real .. She felt like the luckiest girl alive...as she hugged him back..

After a few minutes , that seemed like eternity . Asad broke the hug ... And stared right into her eyes ... Her eyes looked satisfied .. But as his gaze dropped on her lips... They surely looked inviting...

He didn't want to waste a second anymore. Knowing that Zoya now belonged to him.

He cupped her face and placed his lips on her's into a soft , gentle , torturing kiss .. That made Zoya freeze .. Asad didn't want to be harsh wid their very first kiss. He softly sucked on her full lips.. As though they were providing him wid elixir. .
Just when Zoya realised it was happening , all for real .. Her dream was coming true ... Her shivering hands wrapped around Asad's neck as she responded to his gentle kiss.

They both were truly engrossed in their kiss ...when suddenly the shower stopped again.. Making them come out of their fairytale.

And Asad instantly noticed Zoya's crimson cheeks ... And pale lips.. He drank from her lips .. Though trying to be gentle...

He couldn't help but smile ...

'U should change... Otherwise aapko thand lag jayegi' Asad spoke staring right into his Zoya.

But Zoya was blushing to hard , her heart was racing really fast ... She couldn't dare to look. Into his eyes .. She just nodded and quickly ran from there..

Seeing that Asad smirked ...

'I did it Ammi... I made Zoya mine ...forever ' he spoke ...

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shanakyasharan thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hayeee allah☺️☺️☺️ garma garam, totally hot
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

hayeee allah☺️☺️☺️ garma garam, totally hot



😳 ThankYou ThankYou !! Glad u liked it !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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gosh!!! its awesome!! I hope they show something like dis in the show too <3 I mean shower proposal😳🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So beautifulll
Really the best thing u did is That u make their confession in the bathroom
Very nice they have such a sweeet cute memorie in the bathroom
I love it infact i love it alllooot
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ThankYou so much guys !!! Sadia provided me with the washroom idea !! All credit goes to her 😳 ... I just simply wrote it !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Unres
First of all Thank you sooo much for dedicating this to me and writing this. I really wanted you to write an OS on a bathroom confession. 😆 and i loved loved loved it. 😃
You are such a brilliant writer all the emotions feel so real.
Tanveer bechari kept calling Asad. 🤣 aisa hi hona chahiye uske saath.

Hayeee what a HOT HOT HOT HOT CONFESSION kaash the cv's take this idea from you. Loveddd every bit of this OS. i was grinning the whole time. Both drenched. PERFECT BATHROOM CONFESSION. oh and i was thinking maybe they'd fall in the bathtub too. 🤣 gutter mind i know. 😆
Edited by Cup-Of-Chai - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This was awesome 😃 Would love to see a bathroom confession in the show as well. 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: s120

This was awesome😃Would love to see a bathroom confession in the show as well.😆



Aww thankYou !! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: zara.92

ThankYou so much guys !!! Sadia provided me with the washroom idea !! All credit goes to her 😳 ... I just simply wrote it !!



Yeah but you wrote it so perfectly! I just LOVED IT. 😆 i wish you'd write MOREEE i can't get enough of your OS's.

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