Always with you!!! AsYa FF #1 - Parts 1 to 30 - Page 32

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Posted: 12 years ago
I love ayaans remarks about tanveer. Great update c
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb ,,hilarious...dilshad & ayan..lol...zoya...jealous& attend the phone..so cute..thnks 4 d pm dear

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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg your stories keep getting better and better
I am loving the pregnancy track can't wait for all of zoya mood swings and sickness ...so exciting ...just wonder when it will actually happen in. The episode though lol
Update sooon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hayeee! I loved it- especially the way they were treating Tanveer. Please tell me u will continue this!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Crazzyasyafan

👏Awesome I just wait for ur ff u really write awesome 👏

I am more interested in ur post than the original serial
I just luv ur dialogues


Thank you😃...happy to know you are interested in my updates😊...shall make more good updates
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushi2187

That was SUPER update..Let me highlight the lines i like most..

1.Asad: Ammi!!! You all are going??? Leaving me alone??😲
Dilshaad: Then do one thing. Ask the neighbors also to sit with you. 😆
2.Ayaan: Arey Tanveer Aunty!!!🤣
3.Ayaan: But we are not fine if you are at home. 😉 Hello, I am not calling you out of affection or something. We want them both to stay alone. So we don't want you to be here. Come. I will get you chocolates also if you want.😆
4.Ayaan: Am I some helpdesk for you???😉
5.Dilshaad took the phone from Ayaan: How?? Go give this news in media. They will let her know.🤣
6.Zoya: Asad!!! You are telling this so daringly to me??? Are you going to tell me who is that kabab mein haddi now???😆Asad: No darling!! Don't abuse my honey like that!!!😛
7.You have an affectionate devar, and good friends in my sisters who are ready to beat up their Bhaijaan, if their Bhaabhi cries a little. 😆
8.Zoya: "The person you are trying is currently not responding, and will not respond your call also. So please don't try again later!!" (She said just as they say in a record message)👏
9.Ayaan to everyone at the table: I think the waiter didn't give her more food. That's why gusse main paagal ho gayi hai!!🤣
10.Zoya: Main nahi, aapka baccha hai jealous!!😛
In short I LOVE THE UPDATE...
Continue soon...Thnx for PM...
Oopss now noticed that my comment is long...😛
Mariam...


Its okay...thanks for highlighting the things you found interesting...😊and no probzz...i love long comments😉...and i like to know what you people like in my update...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: friendsall

Sucha superb one! a request to u to throw d billi out atleast u cn do it for d readers rite! cvs ka pata nahi


Sure i am going to throw billi soon out of my ff 😉...but all have to play with her nicely as she played with them right??? 😉So i am coming up with tracks where Tanveer comes across her own tricks...and I am planning a good track for tanveer's climax😃...and yeah my ff will never make her separate AsYa❤️...as there are a lot of people to protect them😃...and Asad and Zoya will never let down each other under any circumstance...😃 So chill and enjoy the updates...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg tis is just too cute...totally luv it...luv all the hilarious moment especially when dilshad told to asad go n give the news to media n they will inform zoya🤣 n also the when zoya answer tanveer phone call 🤣...luv the way asad told zoya tat she is pregnat it was so beautifull...wat a wonderfull way to tell her...totally wonderfully written...thx fr the pm n please pm me fr the next part...please continue soon n eagerly waiting fr the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is hilarious, romantic and beautiful! How do you manage to get all of them in one update?! Tanveer Aunty, lol! My sis thinks I'm mad cause I told her I'm doing my research work.
Thanks for the pm n pls update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hellooo guysss!!!! 😊 Happy to know you all loved the previous update...thank you for all your lovely reviews😃...and here is another fun filled update and also haan...there is a tanveer track in this which is like something we expect should happen to her 😉...go through the update and enjoy reading...😊

Part 15:

Location: In the car:

Ayaan was driving back home with all after having a good dinner.

Dilshaad: I hope Asad said Zoya this happy news by now.😊

Ayaan: Of course he would have said. He asked me to get that much things and I am sure he would have said it to Bhaabhi in a special and lovely manner.❤️

Najma: Yes Bhaijaan, maybe Bhaijaan is late in such things but he has the latest ideas with him.😃

Dilshaad remembered Najma telling about Zoya's horoscope.

Dilshaad: Najma, what you said about Zoya's horoscope today afternoon, came true. Similarly I hope it removes the obstacles from the life of Asad and Zoya.😊

Rashid: For that, we all have to save them both from the evil eyes surrounding them. (He said that looking at Tanveer through the rear mirror and she was staring at him back😡)

Ayaan: Don't worry Abbu. When we all are here, we won't let anything happen to our Bhaijaan and Bhaabhi.😊

Humeira: Not only them, we won't let anything happen to our little member also, who is on the way.❤️

Tanveer in her mind: (Let me see how that little member touches this world.) (You are fit to make flop challenges only 👎🏼)

Dilshaad felt so overwhelmed that there are these much people who are ready to do anything for the happiness of Asad and Zoya.😊

Location: On the terrace at Asad's Residence:

Zoya: Asad, who do you want our kid to be like???😊

Asad: Like you darling!! ❤️

Zoya: Really???☺️

Asad: Yes. I want my kid to be beautiful, intelligent, smart, caring and lovable by everyone. And these all qualities are in you. So I want my kid to be like Zoya. ❤️

Zoya: (Smiling) Shukriya Mr. Khan!😊

Asad: And yeah, I want my kid to have your dimpled smile as well.😉❤️

Zoya: Haha…okay points noted. But I want my kid to be like you for one reason.

Asad: One reason?? What??❓

Zoya: I want my kid to love its Ammi just like you do.❤️

Asad: (Smiling) Who won't love you baby???😉

And they shared a passionate kiss (this time not by mistake) (MITWA MOMENT) Just then they heard the car coming to their house. Zoya looked down from the terrace and saw that all have arrived home.

Everyone got down from the car, and Rashid just conveyed his regards through Ayaan and left home from there as he didn't want to make Asad angry in this happy day.

Zoya: Asad, everyone has come. Come let's go down.😃

Saying so, she ran down.

Asad: Careful Zoya! Ya Allah!! I don't know how I will take care of this badmassh.😆

He too went back of her. Zoya ran down through the stairs and went and hugged Dilshaad as he saw her at the door. 🤗Dilshaad too hugged her back affectionately and kissed on her forehead.

Ayaan: Bhaabhi, at least hereafter, will you stop your marathon type running??? 😛At last your kid too will be born fast before nine months only!!!😆

Zoya: (Blushing) Shut up Ayaan!!☺️

Ayaan: Bhaabhijaan, you know to blush also??😉

Asad came walking down the stairs.

Asad: Stop it Ayaan. How much will you tease her???

Ayaan looked at his brother and became stunned with his mouth wide open.😲

Dilshaad: Kya hua Ayaan?? Why are you…oh ohh…😆😳(She smiled looking down out of embarrassment)

All the girls too looked at Asad and started giggling at each other.😆 Tanveer was looking at him with extreme irritation.😡

Zoya didn't understand what was going on. She too turned back to find what's wrong with Asad and she closed her mouth with her hand out of shock. 😲 Asad was having Zoya's lipstick mark on his lips and he was unaware of it.😆

Asad: What's wrong??? Why are you all standing like this?? Some movie is going on in my face???😆

Ayaan: I think a movie just now got over, right Bhaabhi?? 😉 (Giggling)

Dilshaad: Asad, I thought you are so dumb in expressing things, but you are way better than I thought. 😛(She tried controlling her smile)

And all the girls: Ahemm…Ahemm…🤪

Zoya ran towards Asad and whispered to him, "Lipstick!!"😉

Asad: What lipstick???😲

Zoya: Lipstick on…lips!!!😉

Asad: Of course, lipstick should be on your lips.😆

Sensing that he won't understand Zoya at last shouted: BUT ITS ON YOUR LIPS TOO!!!🤣

Asad got shocked 😲and didn't know how to react and hid behind Zoya suddenly.😆

Ayaan: Bhaijaan. No use of hiding now. We all saw it.😛 It's okay. Hota hai, hota hai.😆

Asad wiped the mark completely and stood by Zoya. Zoya didn't face anyone out of embarrassment.😳

Dilshaad: Okay!!! Stop everyone. How much will you tease my kids? Well Asad, come with me. I will tell you the medicines you are supposed to give Zoya.

Asad went with Dilshaad and Najma.

Nikhat: So we also will leave. It's very late now. Zoya Bhaabhi, take care of yourself and your baby. We shall come tomorrow to see you. Allah hafiz!!😊

Zoya: Ji!! Allah hafiz!!😊

They all left and Zoya saw Tanveer standing alone. She gave a victorious smile to Tanveer and went to her.😊

Zoya: How are you Tanveer?? Looking at your face, it is clear that you are not fine. And you won't be fine too hereafter. Your days are numbered. The arrival of our child is the sign to show that your game is coming to an end soon. 😊Pack your bags and be ready. You may be kicked any day out of this house.

"Zoyaaa!!!"

Asad called her to the room.

Zoya: Tanveer, my husband is calling me. So go and have a peaceful sleep. Who knows?? Tomorrow you might not have a peaceful sleep. 😛 Okay? Good night!!!

Saying so, she smiled at her mockingly and went to her room.

Tanveer: My game is going to end soon??? Let's see!😈

She gave her irritated meow and went to her room.

Location: Next day at Asad's Residence:

Dilshaad was preparing breakfast for everyone and Asad came to the kitchen to get his coffee.

Asad: Assalam-u-Alaikkum Ammi!!

Dilshaad: Waalaikkum Assalam Asad!! Zoya woke up??

Asad: Haan, she woke up. Where's Tamatar??

Dilshaad: She went to college to collect some certificate. Asad, you go and give Zoya her morning medicine and ask her to have breakfast. Then you leave to office okay?

Asad: Ji Ammi!

Location: AsYa Room:

Asad took all the necessary medicines he has to give Zoya and entered the room and saw Zoya having pizza.😆 He rubbed his temples with a helpless look and walked towards her.

Zoya smiled at him 😃 and continued having pizza in the couch.

Asad: Ye kya hai Zoya???

Zoya: Pizza Asad. You don't know this also???😛

Asad: Wo jaanta hoon main. But you have pizza this time also?? Its junk food dear. You are not supposed to have so much.

Zoya: Allah Miyaa!! What's wrong with you??? Are there any rules that a pregnant lady is not supposed to have pizza??😉 And you know how much I love pizza. I can't stop eating it. Sorry Asad!

Asad took the box from her lap and Zoya was blinking at him making a sad face.😒

Asad: Dekho jaan!! Whatever you want other than this, I will get you. But please no eating junk food much during this time. Well, if you want I will get you pizza twice a month. Okay?? Please baby!!!😊

Zoya put her head down like a kid worrying over a lost toy.😔

Zoya: Okay fine. But twice a month you will get me naa???😊

Asad cupped her face: Pucca, I will get you. Now have this tonic.😊

Zoya: No no nooo!!!!!!😲….i hate tonics…please Asad. I don't want it.

Asad poured the tonic in a spoon and took it near her mouth. Zoya closed her mouth just like a child closes its mouth looking at medicines.

Asad: Zoya please!! Don't be adamant darling!!

Zoya jumped off the couch and started running all over the room and Asad ran back of her.😆

Zoya: I won't have this tonic and that's final. Ammi!!! Mujhe bachaaoo!!!😲

Asad: I am not leaving you without giving this tonic and that's final! 😉 Zoya stop!!!

She ran to the living room. Dilshaad came from the kitchen and saw Asad and Zoya running all over the house.😆

Dilshaad: Ya Allah!! Ye kya ho raha hai yahaan???😲

Tanveer came out of her room and seeing this scene made her stomach burn with flames.😡

Meanwhile Ayaan came home with Nikhat.

Ayaan: Bhai…heyy!!! What's this??? Kid's park??😆

Just then in order to prevent Asad catching her she bumped over Ayaan causing him to fall on the ground with Nikhat.

Ayaan: Yaaa Allahhh!! Monnnaaa!!!🤣

Nikhat: Aaahh!! Bhaijaan, aap bhi naa?? Lift me up!!😆

Asad: Ammi, Ayaan catch her!

Bechari Zoya was atlast caught by Dilshaad. Ayaan and Nikhat held her hands and made her sit in the sofa. Asad came with the tonic and held her mouth and fed her the tonic.👍🏼 Zoya made a sick face tasting it.😕

Zoya: Yuccckkk!!! What a stupid taste!!!😡

Asad sat on the sofa exhausted sweating all over. Ayaan was pressing his hip out of pain and he too sat near Asad.

Ayaan: I think I have to take a scan of my hips today!! 😆Bhaijaan, I think before Bhaabhi delivers your child, we all will be admitted in ICU. 🤣You need specially trained people from armed forces to control her!!😆

Asad: You think they would be able to control her?? She will have her control over them and they will have to listen to her.😉

Nikhat: Bhaijaan! For giving the first dose Bhaabhi is doing this racket, imagine how much more medicines you have to give.😲

Asad: Please Nikhat, don't scare me!!!😲

Asad went to Zoya: Okay meri badmaash!! Have breakfast properly and take rest. And yeah don't run like this hereafter okay??? You want anything ask Ammi or call me, fine?? No matter how busy, I will come. Okay Baby??❤️

Zoya: Hmm..okay. Points noted!! 😊(With her childish smile)

Ayaan: Ehmmm…Bhaijaan!! We will take care of your queen well. 😛 Okay?? Aap office jaayiye!! Or your staff will come home now.😉

Asad gave a kiss on Zoya's forehead and left for office.❤️

Location: Tanveer's room:

She was walking here and there restlessly seeing the increasing proximity between Asad and Zoya and also the care and affection Zoya is getting from everyone.😡

Tanveer: Zoya!!! So much important you became haan?? Only a crown is missing in her head!! I have to finish off her baby first. She herself has to be the reason for it. That will surely create a rift between Asad and Zoya.😈

She went to the kitchen took oil bottle and searched for Zoya. Zoya was in the first floor sitting in Dilshaad's room and chatting with her and Nikhat. She went to first floor and poured oil near the stairs so that when Zoya comes she would slip and fall down.

Tanveer in her mind: (Okay!! Mrs. Zoya Asad Ahmed Khan, once you come running fast, you will slip and fall in the stairs, which will definitely lead to your miscarriage. And Asad will be angry at you that you didn't take rest and you killed his child. And that will ruin your love. Well, have a happy fall! 😈")

She moved from the stairs and went to her room which is also in the first floor and watched what is happening by slightly opening the door.

Zoya: Okay Ammi! I will go to my room. I am feeling tired. 🥱 Wake me up when lunch is ready Ammi.

Dilshaad: Okay!😊

Zoya walked towards the stairs as Tanveer expected and she was happy that her plan was succeeding. When Zoya was just a feet away from the stairs,

Dilshaad: Zoyaa!!! Where did you keep that dupatta???

Zoya stopped as she heard Dilshaad's call and she was answering her standing there only not moving further. Tanveer got irritated 😡 and thought she would better push Zoya from the back. She walked towards Zoya and stood back of her and raised both her hands to push her.❓

As she was about to push Zoya, Zoya moved back to Dilshaad's room to clear her doubt, which made Tanveer lose her balance causing her to fall down the stairs.👏 (You thought Asad is not there to save her billi??? You forgot little Asad watching you??? Bewakoof!!!😆)Hearing her scream, Zoya turned back and Dilshaad came running from her room.😲 As Zoya was about to go down to help Tanveer, Dilshaad caught her as she noticed oil on the floor. They both understood that Tanveer fell in her own trap. They carefully went down and took the bleeding Tanveer to hospital.

Location: At the hospital:

The doctor was treating Tanveer, and Tanveer regained her consciousness.

Tanveer: Doctor, what happened to me??😲

Doctor: I am sorry beta. You lost your child!

Tanveer had a great shock😲 and felt frustrated at herself that her plan to kill Zoya's child killed her own child and broke into tears.😭

Dilshaad and Zoya were listening to everything from outside.

Dilshaad: Dekha Zoya?? Allah is there to protect the good people always.😊 She planned to harm your child and see what happened?? But Zoya, you have to little more careful. If I hadn't called you back today, what must have happened???😲

Zoya: Ji Ammi! I will take care of myself and my child and be more cautious.😊 Now let's go from here Ammi. Let her not know, that we heard everything.

They both went home. Meanwhile Tanveer remembered what Dilshaad had said in the car that Zoya's child would remove the obstacles from their lives and Zoya's words that her child's arrival is the indication that her game is going to end soon. 😲She felt things started working against her and she has to do something now.😲

Sooo???? How did you find this one????😊 Hope you people like it coz Tanveer's downfall has started and it is going to increase only day by day!!! 😃And please let me know what you liked in my update...I like to know your remarks and suggestions...please comment friends!!!!

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