Always with you!!! AsYa FF #1 - Parts 1 to 30

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Alveena12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#331

amazing, I love the part you kept in where she tried to harm Zoya's child but ended up losing her own

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Applef

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Posted: 12 years ago

#332

hey!! that was again a fantastic update...👍🏼

pizza and zoya are really unseparable.. haha..😆

I like the way you showed the interaction between the family members.. nice..👏

tanveer's plan backfire again.. I really hope this happens in the seriel also..😊

continue soon.. and thanks for the pm..

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#333

Originally posted by: immigreat54
just a small advice. How could Dilshad n Asad let Tanveer stay in there house after knowing that she had already tried to kill Zoya n now the baby? Won't that be so careless of Dilshad to ignore such thing?
Nevertheless, nice FF 😊

First part Tanveer gave an excuse that she did as a prank...and Asad left her...and Dilshaad wants Asad himself to send her out...Tanveer getting kicked out will most probably come in my next update😃...i am almost ready with the track...just stay in touch...😊 and Asad doesnt know this incident yet...and thanks for asking what you felt😊

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Mariya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#334

Amazing as always continue soon

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Mehvish Fatima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#335

haha poor tanveer..!! its was a suprb update

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_Nabeela_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#336

wow amazing superb love it

haha poor tanveer

please continue it soon :)

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Amy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#337

I Loved it!!!! The way Dilshad was planning up with Zoya in 2 chapters before. And how Ayaan and tanveer had there little argument... How Asad comes in in time when tanveer tries to do something!

Was lovely how asad didnt know how to tell Zoya she was preggy! And how he had arranged that beautiful dinner! Was hilarious how Tanveer had to sit alone and dine! Serve that Billi right! And how the whole family is taunting her bit by bit.. And aware of her nature!

I think this ff is romantic and funny at the same time!! Poor Billi fell in her own trap! update soon!!!