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Nai

@zoas91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#841

absolutely loved the chapter!!! zoya pov was beautifully described . great work👏

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#842

Omg, ur flippin' crazy! 🤪 This was awesome! 👍🏼 Really nicely written. 👏 👏 👏 I really enjoyed how u were describing the way Zoe was feeling. 😃 If u call this sh*tty, then my writing is just complete garbage! 🤢 🤣 Anyways, this Akshay guy is getting on my nerves. 😡 Ugh, hate him! 🤬 But, I lovelovelove how Asad held Zoe's hand, and she felt better. And when he said, "Resignation not accepted." 😳 Eeep! 😆 ❤️ Continuecontinuecontinue...😉

PS. Thankyouthankyouthankyou for my "little gift"!!! 😃 ❤️ I lovelovelove it! ❤️ It definitely cheered me up after all the stupid-ness going on in the show right now. 👍🏼 So sweet of u! 😊 Ur the nicest person to me on here! 😳 Thx for the well wishes! 😛 Love u!!!!! 🤗 🤗 🤗 Ur the besttt! 👏 👏 👏

-Fari 😳 ❤️

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Neha

@Asyalover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#843

great update...so its akshay whose helping that women to get zoya to her by creating a tiff between asad and ayaan...cont soon

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Saima Syed

@Saima-Syed

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Posted: 12 years ago

#844

That was an making update...loved every ord, can't wait for the next update, want to know wat akshay is up to. Best wishes

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Javeria

@Surbhiholic55

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Posted: 12 years ago

#845

AMAZING Update Faiza

Zoya's POV is simply superb. I loved it

Edited by jawria123 - 12 years ago

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Jassieg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#846

Super amazing update. Loved how asad comforted her and told her resignation not accepted.

Akshay is indeed working for that prostitute lady.

I hope asad fires him.

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rajnid68

@rajnid68

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Posted: 12 years ago

#847

brilliantly written...

loved Zoyas pov...and running to ayaan for comfort.

ayaan wanting to be helpful..

asad comforting her and feeling J..

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Pori

@Pori

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Posted: 12 years ago

#848

WOW! just read your ff and its a beautiful peace

so well written and such a nice story

hmph! why does that goon guy want Zoya, I really wonder?

Awww.. Zoya finding strength in Asad...

please continue and can u plz pm me aswell?

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#849

hey tis a great update...luv it especially the point of view of zoya n wat her mind n emotion was going through...n they way asad stood by her side was jsuperb...wow ayaan came to rescue for zoya from tat guy n hw asad became jealous when he saw zoya hugging ayaan...wonder who is tat guy working for n wonder wat will asad tell ayaan...it superb n totally luv it...beautifully written...please continue soon n do pm me fr the next part...ur really a talented n a superb writter n ur writting skills prove it...eagerly waiting fr the next part...

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hilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#850

typed a whole lot and ending up losing it all ! *Super sad* hate it when that happens ...

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abs. Loved the update ! you had a lot going on and I'm loving the pace and thrill. can't wait to know more about Akshay and the connection with the lady possibly at the centre ?
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loved the close interaction of Asad and Zoe at the start ! : ) Asad is deff. a whole different soul and character around Zoe, which is such a lovely sight to me. Cherished the one liner enacted by Asad:

' resignation not accepted ' . ha ! & faab job at penning down Zoe's emotional changes from the time she started stuttering until the end of the presentation .. Asad's through out gesture healed her soul as a magical balm and how to felt being back to lifeless Zoya.
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ayaan protectiveness towards Zoe right at the instant made me sigh in relief. & is someone jealous ?! nonetheless, I understand where Asad's reaction are coming from .. he does feel changed around her and is attracted... I can imagine how the easy, compatible connection with Ayaan bothers Asad for ruining his reputation and scaring her off to the point where she doesn't want to near him. hoping Ayaan clears everything out and both partners [ A & A ] become more aware of what's going on around them .. and that Akshay .. he needs to get out !

your updates keep me waiting endlessly.

Edited by hilly - 12 years ago