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-.-Mariam-.-

@-.-Mariam-.-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#831

That was AMAZING Update Faiza👏👏...Loved it alot..❤️

Zoya too felt something when Asad held her hand...☺️

Ayan-Zoya hug was adorable just like friends...😉

Hate that Akshay...😡

Asad getting jealous on seeing Ayaan Zoya hugging eachother...

Continue soon...

Thnx for PM...

Mariam...

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#832

Res

How can you say this wasn't good!? I actually loved that you incorporated their individual points of view, especially Zoya's. The way she described her fear, uneasiness and her sudden change when he grabbed hold of her hand, was perfection.

I love how the whole conversation between them afterwards was in her perspective, as we saw more of what he was thinking before in her presence. It's refreshing to see her explain what exactly he made her feel. I love that you said it "made the walls widen" and the room seem bigger. It's so good. I love you for that 😃

And ZOYA! OMG she's fearless! She feels scared but still manages to speak her mind in front of him. That's really admirable and makes me love her character that much more. AND OMG when he was telling her he didn't accept her resignation, my heart was at my throat! This man is truly multifaceted. One minute he's calm and collected and giving a flawless presentation and the next he's smiling at her and pinning her against a wall. MOTHER OF GOD.

I was right. 😡 Akshay is a flipping bas***d!!! UGH!!! But at least it got Asad to start realizing he doesn't like Ayaan's proximity to her. Maybe he'll realize he's jealous AND OMG AKSHAY WORKS FOR ASHAR!? RIGHT!? (or am I so far gone that it's ridiculous 🤣)

I loved Noor and Najma's scene. They're so cute. But I love the relationship that Rashid and Noor share as well. I hope Noor is able to find out what Asad thinks of Najma, I myself am really curious. I have a hunch, but I'll wait until you update to tell you if I was right or not 😆

Loved it as always hun! Not as much going on, action wise, but it was truly insightful, and as always emotion packed.

Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago

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princee

@princeegoyal

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#833

i jst love ur update..its so good..as always..love asad being jealous..& possesive..& zoya's pov...quiet long i guess...but i hate u 4 no PM...u knw na..i jst love ur story...wht if i miss any update...don't do it again...😕😕

continue & update soon & PM ME

pari

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#834

i just noticed that you had updated

i first wondered how did i miss it

then i realised it was done today

maybe you had not sent out pms

well the update was amazing

loved zoya's pov

so akashay is being used to break off asad and ayaan

but they have zoya holding them

i am so glad that ayaan and zoya still have a mutual understanding

please update soon

eagerly waiting

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Nishita Rao

@Nishitarao

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#835

OMG!! I loved this part..

Asad is already feeling possesive about Zoya😳

I'm actually enjoying the love triangle!

Akshay is with that wh**e?.. I like how you have linked all the characters..

Brilliant job! Please continue..👏

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anushreemishra

@anushreemishra

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#836

loved the update...i loved jealous asad...hopefully soon asad and zoya come closer😊

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Udaya2

@Udaya2

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#837

How can u call this a shit update??it was as usual awesomeee

I loved it

Zoya is feeling difrnt with asad :D

And asad is feeling jealous😆

Woho!!!😃update soon n pm me :)

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tvpremi

@tvpremi

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#838

Amazing update...asad is jealous of ayaan zoya relationship. ...zoya feels soothing sparks with asad...finally noor will meet asad...waiting for the next part...plz update soon...

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Tanya

@OceanicHeart.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#839

Asad feeling jealous

I looove it

Superb update my girl 😳

Continue ASAP 😆

I can't wait for the next

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krati

@krati5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#840

akshay is that person who is doing evil lady's work?? well it doesn't matter... what matter is whta is noor going to play at??? i think this lady is going to b a dark horse...