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Posted: 12 years ago

#651

Originally posted by: laizu
I am fida on this FF. Superb update.

Thankyouuu😳

Originally posted by: Yellowdiamond
Wow! Amazing as usual! You just leave me wanting more! Hurry wit nex part plz, so anxious to kno what's next! Tks

Thankyou im glad you're liking it. I hope you like the further updates tooo! 😳

Originally posted by: deedeez

Such an MA update.. Worth each dime 👏 Zoya is in such big trouble and Asad is driven compulsively to protect her.. Their brief interaction in the elevator was a big relief. She didn't freak out as much as she usually does.. 😳

Please, please, please PM if possible for the next update. I am shit scared i'll miss your update one of these days..🤣

Thankyouuu A.Hanjal im glad you liked it. Our Zoya is noticing a lot, yeah! 😆

And deedeez, im glad you liked it. I didnt send pm's for this one sorry. Will d next time paka! You wont miss it, i assure you ! 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

#652

Originally posted by: QWEERRTTYYUUIIO
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unres
oh gawd ami fool . isaw ur
update post long but didnt relized it is updated one ahhh😲😲
my comment on 3rd page just leave it

on ur update - it was so good
just luveddd it. asya feeling
changing towards each other.😊
zoe retriving frm her past and
entering a new life . 😉
hope najma meet her bro .soon😃😃
and asya in elevator was
so cute esp zoe how she noticed
him haaa😆😆
do pm me :)

Yes lets see till when her new life lasts. Its all black afterall. Hope you like next chaps too! Thankyou so much for an encouraging comment 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

#653

Originally posted by: giee
Okay so I read all the parts in 1 go !
and lady I ve to tell that they were FABULOUS 👏
this story is soo different yet soo gripping!!
I loved each and every word of it

I am at loss for words
so this is all I could manage 😃

Yaaay! Im glad you're liking and welcome to my FF! 😃

Thank you so much for such an encouraging comment really, means alot! 😳

Thank you so much! 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: ABBY92
For once, Zoya wasn't frightened of Asad. I like how Noor is being protective of Najma and she should find out what Asad feels for his sister before letting Najma meet him. Looks Ayaan is also falling for Zoya and I wonder where all this is going to end up at !!

Best friends are your second mothers. Sometimes we dont like their doings, but you know deep down its for your good! Trust me, nothing more than me and other fellow Quboolians can take. 😆 Thank you so much 😃

Originally posted by: jazsidhu
omg tis is really awesome...otally luv it...luv the way asad n zoya bang into each other... wonder wat will asad do to help zoya n both of them r already starting to have feeling towards each other...it so beautifully written...ur really brilliant...totally luv it...please pm me fr the enxt part...please continue soon n waiting to know hw will zoya react when she know tat her boss is asad n feeling really bad fr najma hw she want to talk to her brother...eagerly waiting fr the next update...

I wont call them feelings just yet. Maybe infatuation? Or maybe feelings i dont know haha 😆

Thank you sooo much! I love reading your comments 😳 i will defo! I didnt pm this time to anyone, sowwi about that.

Originally posted by: Sirit-of-Dead
Awesome man..
Can't wait for the next part..

Asad is always thinking about zoya
Wow!!! N I hope that zoya would soon change views about him.. Again is sweet but don't make him fall in love with zoya please..

I feel very bad for najma yr.
She has the right to be Wid her brother.
I hope that he will forgive her..
I love the bit where Asad add security around the building and the office.

Continue soon
It was amazing :)

Ayaan is an important role in this FF, believe me whatever happens will happen for ASYA, to ASYA ! Trust me, nothing more than any Quboolian can handle! 😳

Najma's a darling. Yearning for her brother's love. Thank you im glad you like it!😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#655

Originally posted by: Enchantress
Amazing.. and perfect. I stalk this story almost every now and then for an update... Just love it. Do continue asap.

Dee

Thank you so very much, im so glad you liked it! 😳 Means alot😳

Originally posted by: Santhu.The.King
Awesome Update... 👏
Underworld Is After Zoya.. OMG.. What Will Asad Do.. Iam Scared For Them..
Asad Have Lot of Shades in His Character.. We Can't Understand him Knowing All The Things.. How Will Zoya Understand From Her Single Point Of View..😕
But Zoya Need To Know One Thing... That is Asad Is Good Man.. and She Is Safe With Him... 😆
It Will Be interesting.. If Zoya Find About She Is in Danger n Asad is Want's To Protect her... 😛
and I Hope Noor Will Unite Asad and Najma.. And Asad Accept Her As His Sister Wholeheartedly... 😃
Update Soon... Waiting 😛

Yes. Scary, is it not? And i have no idea how to write that! 🤣

Thats it. You've cracked my title, chapter black. Black is one dark color but has some shades to it that we people donnot recognise. Thats what Asad is. You've cracked it there.

Yess we all wish that. Lets see what happens! Thank you so much for a wonderful comment! 😳

Originally posted by: tvpremi
Very nice update...finally asya encounter...your story is really stunning full of mystery,emotions,love...i really m enjoying it now...plz plz continue soon...

Yess! Thankyou so very mucch im glad youre liking it. Hope you keep doing so! 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

#656

Originally posted by: princeegoyal
good one..nice encounter b/w asya...conti.update soon..& pm me

pari

Thank you so much, Pari! 😃

Originally posted by: ..-AsYa-..
Really feeling bad for Najma..😔 Hope Asad meets her soon!!!

I hope Zoya stays safe..Is Ayaan falling for her too?? Phir to Ayaan gaya!!😉

Najma's the darling here, agreed.

Hahaha yes. Ayaan is indeed gaya! 😆

Originally posted by: Asyalover
is.. Noor the same girl who is Zoya Bff too

Dear Zoya doesnt know Noor. This confusion was created when i first introduced Najma's character not revealing who the 'she' was and many thought it was Zoya. It was Najma! 😳

Originally posted by: Khushi2187
Superb Update Faiza...👏
Ayaan-Zoe will be good frnds...😉
Feeling sad for Najma..Hope she'll soon meet her Bhaijaan...😭
Loved the update alot...❤️
Continue soon...

Mariam...

Thankyou so much Mariam, means alot to me! 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

#657

Originally posted by: LuvUAsYa
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OYEE BALLLE BALLLEE IM BAAACK!!
choly i knw im late!!

bt bt bt ... im late in replying bt i swear i read d updt thr n then!!! 😆 😆

n thts bcoz I OOOLWAAAYS EAGERLY WAIT 4 UR UPDT!!!
d very frst thng i do after i log in to IF is to check wethr uv hv updated d FF!!
im a suuuper big fan of ur story!!
n i reallly don wt magic spell ths story is doing on me bt wid evry updt im getting mooore sticked to it n loving it a 10000 times moore!!!!
ths time also d updt took ma heart awaaay!
im just loving asad's extraa concern 4 zoyaa...
d way he's gettng restless at d fact tht smthn mit happen to her is jst awwful...
loving d story to d core!!!!
thaaanx alooot dea 4 writng such a beautiful storryyy... thankooo sooo much!!
pleeeasee updt d nxt part asap dieng to read d nxt updt!😳 😳
tnx a ton 4 d PM dea...

That is really sweet of you and im glad you like my story so much! Makes me happy. Thankyou hope you continue likinng it! 😃

And u got a pm? But i didnt send any for this update? Haha nevermind😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

#658

hey congo on 100 pages 🥳
yur ff is trully admirablre
dark intense story just luv it 👏
isi khushi mein ek sheer arz hai
maanate ki hai khuda se , tab tumne kiye
hain page poore sau
isi khusi mein jaldi se update de do 😆

Edited by QWEERRTTYYUUIIO - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#659

Originally posted by: sowmy18
awesome update!loved asya first rational meeting!😳

Haha yes FINALLY! 😆

Originally posted by: ksen
interesting continue soon

Thank you so much im glad you like it 😳

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima
Wow

That was an amazing update

AsYa truly rocked

Wish Zoya would get little comfortable around Asad

Hope Ayaan is not falling for Zoya

I wonder how will Asad protect Zoya

Najma ka pata nahi kya hoga

Awww im glad youre liking it! I hope you trust me and go on with me and i assure you i wont dissapoint you! I hope not! 😆 thank you so much!

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: -ChocoPie-
awesome

Thankyou so much 😳

Originally posted by: Linsie

Will do dear 😳

Originally posted by: Rarepearl
wow. this was so nice. Asad is really affected by her reactions towards him. n so does Zoe, she noticed him, his features, it all did affect her n she cud even see da mask of indifference falling apart in front of her. lets see how she reacts on seeing Asad in the office.
cont soon.

Yes. He cant stand her being afraid of him. The shell is cracking, slowly but surely. It has to for Ayaan's revelations made a huge impact on Zoya!! Glad you liked it 😳

Originally posted by: Jassieg
Awesome update..I am just really nervous about the don taking away Zoya..

Hope there is something interesting in store for Zoya and that she is fully out of those dirty people's hands.

Update soon!😊

The don wont, the don's daughter will. Lets see where this takes us!

Hope that happens soon! Thankyou for the comment 😃