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Sophia

@sophie420

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#521

Awesome!

Looking forward to the next update!

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#522

Amazing!!

You describe asya's emotions soOo well!

Do update soon nd thanks for the PM.

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hilly

@hilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#523

... Goodness Faiza, I was glued ! gaaah, this was FANTABULOUS ! heck, I LOVED IT ; so darn much.

such an action packed update filled with anxiety, desperation, panick attacks, attraction- tender feelings and bits of humour - loved it all !

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SO GLAD , you have fiiinally updated. the wait for worth waiting for and voila, another cliffhanger ?! oh why ?! I'm all the more exciiited and much more desperate for the next update.

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you're executing this really well .. i'm amazed and I know, you'll offer a lot to the readers .. & i'm awaiting the magic in every update ... it's truly there. <333 : ) x

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SOWMYA

@sowmy18

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#524

awesome update!im liking the eqn. bw asya and also najma.

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shami810

@shami810

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#525

Wow...M just in love with your story yaar..!!!

Superb...Please continue soon..!!!

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teddyyy

@teddyyy

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#526

You know I wanna love you for such a beautiful chapter but then the cliffhanger makes me not like you :P I don't know how you do it but you showed everyone's side of the story, with enough context and overwhelming feelings. Asad made me realllyyy happy today! He was so protective and afraid for Zoya, it warmed my heart. His visualization of her beauty was perfect! I loved how Ayaan and Zoya are trying to become friends and Ayaan kinda messed up today but I'm sure hell make up for it. Najma haye I love this girl in the show and in your story! I can't wait to see what happens next! Will Asad talk to her or be overwhelmed with his mothers grief?! Update soon please and beautiful chapter once again (:

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Sharyn

@-LarryGurl-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#527

AH-MAZIN' chap, Faizu!loved it!! especially the part when Najma sees Asad. it was written out so beautifully, i could see it happening right in front of me.

hats off. :))