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Jassieg

@Jassieg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#501

Amazing update..loved it very much..update the next part soon.

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-RohitMaxwell-

@-RohitMaxwell-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#502

its awesome as well as seems very interesting for next updates

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#503

Res

First of all, I AM SO SORRY. For the latest of late unreses (been really busy with exams lately) I got a day of freedom so going back and unresing all my reses and keeping people from slapping me senseless 😆

Now on to the story.

You're writing is simply brilliant. the way this one restaurant has such a history and connects all the characters at once was brilliantly written and portrayed. I love how it holds a special place in Ayaan's heart and one of the only pleasant memories he has of Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan.

When I read that Najma and her friend were going I was really excited because I had a sneaky feeling that they would meet (her and her bhaijaan) finally. I wonder what Asad really feels about Najma. I mean I'm sure he knows that it's not her fault, but I wonder if he's stayed away from her because of their father, or because he felt guilty for staying away initially, and now it's vicious circle he can't get out of?

As for Zoya, I felt so bad for her. I mean I was happy that she was able to get a beautiful meal in a beautiful place, but it was sad to see the effect that place had on her (Giselda's). I mean she just assumed he meant that. And Ayaan was also kind awkward. I guess it's hard to talk to someone about things casually when they've been through that. You have to pick and choose your words wisely. I hope they do become close friends. They seem (by your wonderful writing) to have good chemistry 😛

And OMG Najma. I LOVE that she and Zoya met! Why do I the feeling that she'll be the catalyst in the future too to make the estranged siblings meet? They way she reacted when she saw Asad. I felt so much for her. They really haven't met since his mother died? I mean he must have seen her as a baby. I guess you'll expand on how and when Asad left his father's home right???? 😆

And my favourite part. Asad hiding behind the pillar. I just loved seeing this side of him. A little curious, a little afraid (on the outside) and even a little concerned (again on the outside). It was amazing. That one action of his spoke volumes. It's a side to his character that I hope Zoya will get to see in person soon.

Ok done with my rant AGAIN 😆 hope this makes up for the late unres 😃

Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#504

wow
awesome update
loved it dear
what will asad do when he finds najma?
and what is zoya's past ?
still have a lot of questions
can't wait for the next part :)
thnks 4 the pm

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#505

wow super update...love it ❤️ ❤️

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#506

Fabulous update

Somehow i felt it was short though

But loved it

Wonder wat drama would this night unfold for all 4 of them... Asad, Zoya, Ayaan and Najma

Update soon

Thx for the pm

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ALISHA ZEN

@LuvUAsYa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#507

UNRES on page 72 😃

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ABI

@ABBY92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#508

It's great to see Asad being so protective of Zoya and I really hope he makes sure she doesn't go back to that hell. The small convo between Zoya and Najma was really touching too and I wonder if Najma will approach her Bhaijaan or not.

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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#509

Thankyou so so much for this update Faiza!!! I love it!
I understand why Zoya felt upset all of a sudden...and that Giselda!!! Grrr!!!! What's next, an Asad-Najma confrontation??? Please please please update soon! Cant wait to see what happens next!!!

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Dee

@Enchantress

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Posted: 12 years ago

#510

I just loved it so very much... Awesomely written... Asad is falling for her, her innocence and simplicity.. Her beauty , her pain.. everything... I love this story so very much.. Would just say keep updating and continue asap... I wait for it a lot...

Dee