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SANYA

@cutiesanya

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#531

what a chapter muahhh😃😃😃😃
lovely lots of thing happenning
asad being over protective fr zoe lovvved it
najma saw asad in the restraunt wahhh
what a twist😃😃
best part
plzzz update
p.s - dying to read next part

Edited by QWEERRTTYYUUIIO - 12 years ago

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Nai

@zoas91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#532

omy god !!1 you have kept me on the edge continuously!!! plz update soon and plz plz plz pm... although i would be stalking too :P

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Pisces_Gurl

@Pisces_Gurl

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#533

Wow...This is awexome...

How everyone can judge the fake smile...

Well its not easy to plaster a fake smile while the heart is in severe pain

Loved every scene..

Zoya n Najma's convo was cute...Finally Najma saw her bhaijaan...

That disgusting lady demanding Zouya back...what will happen now...

Asad looking at secretly..wow..cute..

Loce the whole..

Update soon..

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Alveena12

@Alveena12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#534

very very interesting, please update soon and pm me

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Laizu Khan

@smiley_lizi

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#535

Uff, fabulous part. Asad, Zoya, Najma in the same restaurant. What will happen next?

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shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#536

soo nice...very,nice part...

sry fr late cmnt...

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farah

@Endless-LOvE

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#537

Omg.. Awesome part ...
I hope zoya won't misunderstand Asad..
I want najma to see her brother admiring zoya..
Plz don't make ayaan fall for zoya..
Can't wait for the next part dear..
Continue soon
N Thx for the pm :)

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farah

@Endless-LOvE

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Posted: 12 years ago

#538

I already unres my res on page 62..
Check it out.
N sorry for being late :p

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CupofCoffeee

@CupofCoffeee

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#539

Faiza...!!

I hav finally read all the nine chapters!!

n I wanna say...I love u Faiza🤗🤗

Wat a brlliant, amazing, outstanding writer u are👏

Everything is so well writte, the present story, the flashbacks, the past, the pain every character is going through from Najma to Rashid, to Ayan to AsYa...I cud visualize each n every scene n feel each n every emotion that u hav portrayed so well...loved each n every bit of the story so far! ❤️

I feared an Ayan-Zoya angle in between but then the way the story progressed I felt like they are goin to be gud frens or more like bro-sis!

m so curious to know wat happened between Rashid n Dlshad, wat about Ayan's family, wat exactly happened to Zoya's family...wat happens wen Asad meets Najma...n can't wait for AsYa story to pick up!! But I loved this thing that they hardly know each other, they they can read each-other's eyes, understand the depth of each-other's pain...m glad Zoya saw Asad in that vulnerable state, a shattered man craving for his mom's love! 😔

n oh my u hav even given space to characters like Giselda in ur story who hava past, and thats the true ability of a writer to giv each character a story of their own so that they dun seem like sumthing unwanted or extra and a waste of the space...👏 And I even loved the characterization of Najma's frend Noor😛

Girl I can't tell u how how much I am in love with ur story...this story deserves to be converted nto a movie or a show...its sooo much better than wat we see on TV these days😆

Ur writing is flawless and u hav this ability to keep the readers hooked and a wanting more each time u update!👏

This is surely the best FF I've ever read, I anyway read ery few but this is undoubtedly the BEST!! <333👍🏼

Love Ya babes🤗

P.S. - I want the next update today, can't wait to read wat happens next!!😛 n dun forget to PM me😳

EDIT: I just realized that my comment got a bit too long...but this a comment for al ur nine parts together, itna toh banta hai😃

Edited by nupsie - 12 years ago

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#540

omg tis is really awesome...so beautifull...totally luv it...wonder wat is the raaz behind zoya identity n who is she n where she belong n hw she end up here ...hope asad will help her n take her away frm tat giselle...thx fr the pm...m just hook to tis ff..its one of my favourite ff...u r really superb...ur writting skills can potray wat the other person is feeling n hw they r reaction to a situation...

thx fr the pm n please pm me fr the next update...please continue soon n eagerly waiting fr the next update...👏

Edited by jazsidhu - 12 years ago