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Posted: 12 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: -ElmoFuj-

Ohhh okkayyy! 😆
Actually Zoya thought it was morning now because i had to put in a symbolism of a new dawn in her life and alsoo becauseee she had fainted and its like kaun hun mei? Kahan hun mei? Kia horaha hai? Type 🤣

@bold- Allah Miyaah !! Larki I got this after reading the story itself. 😆

I was telling you my first impression of the title, which was before reading the story.

App ko smjh aii ya aur smjhaon🤣

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Posted: 12 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: KulfiBai
Thanks for the PM Elmo 😃 I loved the flashback scene in this chapter, it was very well done! I also loved the scene where Asad reminisces about his Ammi after he finds the sweater she knit for him ❤️

I hope Ayaan will be supportive friend to Zoya 😊

Thankyouuu so much! I'm glad you're liking it! Really like tomread the feedbacks from you😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#273

Originally posted by: lDirectionerl
Fujiii! Before I get out of control and start babbling about how awesome you are lemme first review the chapters 😆
Review for chapters- 😛
AHMAZING! Man totally amazing! You potrayed Asad's tormented emotions so beautifully! A round of applause for you for that! 👏
Haww! Dilshad was raped? By Rashid?! God that monster!
And poor Zoya! What has happened with her? I just hope the romance begins soon!
And I loved Ayaan and Zoya's relationship!
Update soon! 😊

Yammmzz! 🤗

Hahaha i'm glad you liked these chapters, coming from a fab writer as you😃

Will update soon! Thankyou sooo much, Yamini! <3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#274

Originally posted by: Starrydee
This is getting interesting 😃
im loving this FF 😳
I hope romance starts soon 😆
loving Ayaan too
continue ASAP

Tanyaaa😃

Thankyou so much, im glad you're liking it😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#275

Originally posted by: Madame_Noddy
this is just the best best best update yet!! Just so emotional, the intensity of zoya's feelings...asad's reactions and his screaming for his ammi...its just beautiful! You write so damn well Faiza! Too good! Please update soon! You have to!

Thankyou so much, Srija! 😃 I'm really glad you're liking my work! Thankyou so very much *hugss*

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Posted: 12 years ago

#276

This is getting interesting .Ur such a wonderful writer

im loving this FF❤️

continue soon

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Fimmy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#277

I am totally speechless ... I had tears in my eyes while reading both the parts!

Outstanding ! Loved it...

Plzzz cont soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#278

Originally posted by: Fimmy
I am totally speechless ... I had tears in my eyes while reading both the parts!
Outstanding ! Loved it...
Plzzz cont soon...

Thankyou so much, Fimmy! 😃

I'm so glad you like it. And i'm sorry about making you cry, it is dark :/

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Crazy! :P

@AdorableTrouble

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Posted: 12 years ago

#279

Originally posted by: -ElmoFuj-

Hahahaha chalega chalgea! 🤣

Ye ganda ganda nahi hai beeyy! I'm under 18 i would never write ganda! 🤣

I loveee you! 🤗 ❤️

Abe pagal !! You dirty mind !! 😲

Main uss gande ki baat ni kar ri thi !! 🤣

Ye FF kinda dark aur angst types hai na ?

USS gande ki baat kar ri thi be ! Pagal kahiki !! 🤣

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Posted: 12 years ago

#280

Originally posted by: AdorableTrouble

Abe pagal !! You dirty mind !! 😲

Main uss gande ki baat ni kar ri thi !! 🤣

Ye FF kinda dark aur angst types hai na ?

USS gande ki baat kar ri thi be ! Pagal kahiki !! 🤣