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Milli bakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#281

faiza..kitni achi story hai..or serious too..

but i wonder k ye hadse ne to asad ko rapist bana he diya..bhale he usne kuch nai kiya..but for zoya he is almost her rapist..than y will she love him..

or uske pas jate he..use wo sari bate yad nai aaengi..when he was tearing her dress and all..

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Pisces_Gurl

@Pisces_Gurl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#282

OMG...!!!
I guess how stupid I was not commenting on this earlier...
Read they whole story tll now...n its a masterpiece...
Loved the way u portrayed Asad n Zoya's emotions...
Her screams horrified him n the last part was jst superb...
Continue soon n plzz ad me to ur pm list i dnt knw how to sent buddy request...plzz pm me wen nxt update...

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rumi.love

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Posted: 12 years ago

#283

Another outstanding update :)
I am so captivated by the story line, you definitely know how to hook the reader ;)
Looking forward to the next part

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: -ElmoFuj-

You you you youuu you womderful thinggg!! 🤗

Do you have any idea how your comments make my day?? I keep running around my house showing everyone your cmments! 😆

I'm soo soo glad you like my story this much. Your comments overwhelm me. Im so glad you liked this chapter because i wrote it in a half-asleep state! Guess that clicks the best 😆

Your analytic comment once again opened a whole new range of options for me to continue my FF! You're amazing! 🤗

A hug for mochhug! 🤗

AWWW THANKS 🤗 haha I'm glad you like them 😃 You wrote this half asleep? Are you SERIOUS!? You should do that more often 😆

Aw I'm glad! Can't wait to see what you come up with.

BTW I don't think I commented on the banner! I LOVE IT! It is weird that I find his ANGRY PAIN stricken face HOT!? This man is ridiculously handsome.. no matter what emotion his face shows lol. LOVE THE BANNER!👏 So apt for the story! The scarred beauty and the wounded beast!

UPDATE SOON 😃😃😃

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youth_showsfan

@youth_showsfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#285

hey just

read both the updates together

nd they were marvellous

simply loved it

zoya fainted right on time

nd ayaan reached right on time

thus d timing was very perfect

loving how d story is progressing

feeling bad for asad n his pain

nd zoya s also n pain

when two ppl r n pain

they connect to each other much faster

than ppl falling n love due to looks

update super soon

nd thnx for d pm

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#286

Hey ...
I've no words to exclaim how wonderful it was !!!

I could visualize each and everything happening like right infront of my eyes ...

Whoa !! I'm sooo glad that Asad didn't cross his limits
Awww poor Zoe !!! I felt for her ... :(

Even Asad's anguish was just heart wrenching ...
And I was literally misty eyed towards the end :'(

Thanks for the pm :D

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t1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#287

I dunno why I didn't read this earlier but this is a great FF!

You've written all the characters beautifully!
Even Giselda may I add :))
I could see everything happening before my very eyes, so your explanations are beautiful
Can't wait to see where this story goes!

Again, this was a great read and tell your story, your way!

If its not too much of a bother, please do PM me when you update :))

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Fuj

@-ElmoFuj-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: mochhug

AWWW THANKS 🤗 haha I'm glad you like them 😃 You wrote this half asleep? Are you SERIOUS!? You should do that more often 😆

Aw I'm glad! Can't wait to see what you come up with.

BTW I don't think I commented on the banner! I LOVE IT! It is weird that I find his ANGRY PAIN stricken face HOT!? This man is ridiculously handsome.. no matter what emotion his face shows lol. LOVE THE BANNER!👏 So apt for the story! The scarred beauty and the wounded beast!

UPDATE SOON 😃😃😃

You make my day girl, i LOVE them! ❤️ Hahahaha yess and it seemed to have worked the most ! 🤣

OMG ME TOO! call me crazy but i find the angry wala Asad extremely hot! maybe its because of the way his jaw clenches and his fist rolls up or something i dont know but whatever it is it screams 'HOT'! 😆 you're the first one to have commented on it! thankyouuu 🤗

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Fuj

@-ElmoFuj-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#289

Originally posted by: t1234
I dunno why I didn't read this earlier but this is a great FF!

You've written all the characters beautifully!
Even Giselda may I add :))
I could see everything happening before my very eyes, so your explanations are beautiful
Can't wait to see where this story goes!

Again, this was a great read and tell your story, your way!

If its not too much of a bother, please do PM me when you update :))

Thankyou so very much! 😃😃

I though do not intend to make my readers sympathise with Giselda, but i did put in some light to the character just for the sake for the readers to understand the world from where she comes and from where Zoya just escaped!

im glad you like my story and support me on my ways :D

and its never a bother ever pm-ing my readers, indeed an honour 😃