{|AsYa FF: Chapter Black} THREAD 2 LINK PAGE 142!! - Page 27

Originally posted by: mochhug

res

I'm... I mean.. I...

Ok I've recovered now.. I was just... so... moved. This was by far the best update yet. The best, most insightful, most moving, most heartbreaking chapter of all.

The way Zoya wanted to stop living at the mere thought and realization that she was no longer a virgin... I just.. I have no words. It was just sooo good. The way your described it. You truly are a gifted writer.

I was actually expecting her to be comforted by Ayaan, but I thought it wouldn't be until she was home with him. That was an unexpected twist. And Asad blackmailing Ayaan, was both evil, but thoughtful, as twisted as that sounds. But I assume that's what you're going for.

As for Asad... I just can't form words that will do this part justice. His pain, his need to let out all his emotion.. how for the first time in years, he actually felt his emotions, instead of blowing off steam with a woman. Zoya's words hit him hard.. but I'm still curious as to what happened to his mother... why is he so against rape? Of course it's a crime, but that word hit's him like a ton of bricks every time he hears it or thinks about it.

I'm seriously ADDICTED to this FF. Looking forward to another emotion packed chapter and hopefully more revelations!

Please PM me 😳

Originally posted by: asyaforlife

I realized I never commented here😲

How much more stupid can i become🤪

Reserved for the moment. I'll be back soon. Have classes right now.

Originally posted by: Naughtynatty

SO I read two updates together and wow bowled over !!

Amazing yaar you write so well .

I am liking the whole dark side of it and Ayaan is being such a help !

Asads character is so much influenced from his past not that we are all not but his is too much.

Lets see what he does with Zoya in the sense gives her a job or what and how she brings about changes in him and her and Ayaans unique relation would be worth it !!

And the jealousy aspect would again be cherry on top !

There are so many aspects to this story yaar very well thought off !!

Thanks for the pm really appreciated :)

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Well you've gotta point. My inbox was so stacked with PMs when I came back and while deleting a few, a managed to somehow delete them all 🤣 Chalo mauf kia. Tum bi kia yaad rakho gi 😆

And if you call me a WRITER one more time, I'm going to strangle you to death 😆 To tell you the truth, when I read this FF, i was seriously AWED by your writing skills! I mean you're only 17, 18! You're a kiddo! But still you managed to write the dark stuff sooo awesomely well! I was IMPRESSED girl! I swear I'm not exaggerating 😛

I can't write dark stuff nor can I think of it in a story and this is something I didn't even realize myself until someone commented on my index that all your work are so cheerful because none of them have a villan or a dark character 🤣

Anyway enough of my rambling. Now I'm going to go fix myself some breakfast and read your update with it (yes it's 2 but I just got up 😆)

A big hug for the PM 🤗

Love you more 🤗

Originally posted by: blueflames

Runs to res without reading

Unres

Well the agony you portrayed of a girl screaming for her loss of virtue was painful for me too read, I mean I knew nothing hAd happened but I was still frozen on the screen.

Asad has shadows lurking from the past, which dominates his present. Asas seems like a beast with a golden heart, which has yet to open up for love.

the story is going good as of now. I hope it continues in this fashion of keeping the readers on hook.

P.s - from the title I was like what the!! Toast n sweater. Last part was so damn tears n suddenly toast n sweater, did faiza have a memory lapse like cvs😳

Originally posted by: -ElmoFuj-

InshaAllah i'l try my best to keep the story this waay! 😃

Thankyou so much, Flammy 😃

What? Did i makeman error somewhere? Wheree? The title is too chorny?😲

Originally posted by: blueflames

You better keep the good work up, or else in know how to stalk😆

No no the title is apt to the story, I thought that the night has passed n it's breakfast now.

As its in the show, night they are lovey doves ion terrace and in morning memory loss at breakfast table as if nothing had happened. My bad I keep thinking abt the show😳